for Harry Potter: A Lily's Bloom2h c1 Kitten Arina
Your summary sucks! One there is to many what if questions in it. That is something that doesn’t inspire me to come and check out this story. It makes me ask one of the most hateful questions author hate from me because I ask it a very blunt way. “What if you had a brain?” Don’t ask me what if’s a summary is supposed to be a mini book report. If I was your English teacher, “yes I know Americans calling a Litature class English is stupid.” But if I was your teacher I would give you an F because you didn’t prove that you read what you were assigned. So stop asking what if and tell me what is going on!
Your summary sucks! One there is to many what if questions in it. That is something that doesn’t inspire me to come and check out this story. It makes me ask one of the most hateful questions author hate from me because I ask it a very blunt way. “What if you had a brain?” Don’t ask me what if’s a summary is supposed to be a mini book report. If I was your English teacher, “yes I know Americans calling a Litature class English is stupid.” But if I was your teacher I would give you an F because you didn’t prove that you read what you were assigned. So stop asking what if and tell me what is going on!
5/10 c188 Guest
Amazing.
Amazing.
5/8 c186 James Birdsong
Good three chapters!
Good three chapters!
5/9 c1 Natalie4q6
I just found this site on Reddit called Storio (storioai dot com). It basically gamifies your story—like Twine, but easier. Low effort to try, pretty fun results.
I just found this site on Reddit called Storio (storioai dot com). It basically gamifies your story—like Twine, but easier. Low effort to try, pretty fun results.
5/8 c1 AlinaReads
Hi J. ,
I really enjoyed your story Harry Potter: A Lily's Bloom characters and scenes are so vivid, I could easily imagine it as a comic or animation.
I'm a professional artist I specialize in creating comics and animations on a paid basis and would love to discuss the idea of visually adapting your work. If you're interested, feel free to reach out!
Discord: celestialcanvas000
Best,
Celestial
Hi J. ,
I really enjoyed your story Harry Potter: A Lily's Bloom characters and scenes are so vivid, I could easily imagine it as a comic or animation.
I'm a professional artist I specialize in creating comics and animations on a paid basis and would love to discuss the idea of visually adapting your work. If you're interested, feel free to reach out!
Discord: celestialcanvas000
Best,
Celestial
4/29 c183 James Birdsong
Good seven chapters.
Good seven chapters.
4/21 c181 
5LaViolaViolaRosa
Oh my gosh, I love how Neville and Parvarti got married while curses were being thrown at one another, well done!
5LaViolaViolaRosaOh my gosh, I love how Neville and Parvarti got married while curses were being thrown at one another, well done!
4/11 c178 Misaamane10
Hey there! I just have to say—I’m absolutely in awe of your writing talent. Your story really resonated with me, and I haven’t been able to stop thinking about it. I’d love to chat with you about it sometime!
I’m a digital artist with a passion for creating comics, and I’ve worked with many authors to turn their incredible stories into stunning visuals. I think your story would translate beautifully into this medium, and I’d be so excited to help make that happen.
If you’re interested, feel free to reach out to me on Discord (ervin_mg0679) or Twitter ( kelley_lee22629). I’d love to connect and discuss the possibilities!
Hey there! I just have to say—I’m absolutely in awe of your writing talent. Your story really resonated with me, and I haven’t been able to stop thinking about it. I’d love to chat with you about it sometime!
I’m a digital artist with a passion for creating comics, and I’ve worked with many authors to turn their incredible stories into stunning visuals. I think your story would translate beautifully into this medium, and I’d be so excited to help make that happen.
If you’re interested, feel free to reach out to me on Discord (ervin_mg0679) or Twitter ( kelley_lee22629). I’d love to connect and discuss the possibilities!
4/4 c176 James Birdsong
Good thirty-one chapters.
Good thirty-one chapters.
3/26 c24 2fancyspinner
I really wanted to like this a lot more than I do. It’s kind of like reading the books compressed. I expected there to be many more differences between the books and the story. Even if it is not for me,I I hope everyone that continues to read this and enjoys it because it is very well done.
2fancyspinnerI really wanted to like this a lot more than I do. It’s kind of like reading the books compressed. I expected there to be many more differences between the books and the story. Even if it is not for me,I I hope everyone that continues to read this and enjoys it because it is very well done.
3/25 c1 margarett1098
Hi Margaret here,
I just finished reading your story, and I wanted to take a moment to say how much I loved it! The way you crafted the characters, the storyline, and the emotions throughout was truly Absorbing. It kept me hooked from start to finish, and I really appreciate the effort and creativity you put into it.
Thank you for sharing such an amazing piece of work, I genuinely enjoyed every moment of it! Keep up the great work, and I look forward to reading more from you.
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Hi Margaret here,
I just finished reading your story, and I wanted to take a moment to say how much I loved it! The way you crafted the characters, the storyline, and the emotions throughout was truly Absorbing. It kept me hooked from start to finish, and I really appreciate the effort and creativity you put into it.
Thank you for sharing such an amazing piece of work, I genuinely enjoyed every moment of it! Keep up the great work, and I look forward to reading more from you.
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3/24 c1 lunaspark149
Hello J.
I just read your story, and I really liked it from the bottom of my heart. I truly want to convert this story into a comic because it's perfect for my ideas. I also have some ideas for the story that I would like to share with you. I hope you’ll like my ideas...
Discord : lunaspark149
Best Regards
Luna
Hello J.
I just read your story, and I really liked it from the bottom of my heart. I truly want to convert this story into a comic because it's perfect for my ideas. I also have some ideas for the story that I would like to share with you. I hope you’ll like my ideas...
Discord : lunaspark149
Best Regards
Luna
3/24 c1 Juliasimon77
A masterwork of storytelling that pulses with raw intensity, weaving threads of fate, longing, and quiet revelation into an unforgettable tapestry. Every character breathes with a depth that defies the page flawed yet luminous, their struggles carving echoes of our own joys and sorrows. The prose is a symphony: elegant yet unforced, each word chosen with the precision of an artist shaping light and shadow. Scenes unfold with a cinematic grace moments of hushed vulnerability giving way to thunderous emotion, leaving an imprint that lingers long after the final passage. Neither confined by genre nor bound by convention , this is a story that transcends, a journey that doesn’t just unfold but unravels, drawing the reader into a world at once distant and deeply intimate. It is not merely read it is felt, an experience to be carried, pondered, and revisited like a beloved relic of time itself.
A masterwork of storytelling that pulses with raw intensity, weaving threads of fate, longing, and quiet revelation into an unforgettable tapestry. Every character breathes with a depth that defies the page flawed yet luminous, their struggles carving echoes of our own joys and sorrows. The prose is a symphony: elegant yet unforced, each word chosen with the precision of an artist shaping light and shadow. Scenes unfold with a cinematic grace moments of hushed vulnerability giving way to thunderous emotion, leaving an imprint that lingers long after the final passage. Neither confined by genre nor bound by convention , this is a story that transcends, a journey that doesn’t just unfold but unravels, drawing the reader into a world at once distant and deeply intimate. It is not merely read it is felt, an experience to be carried, pondered, and revisited like a beloved relic of time itself.