for Can Jedi Wear Orange?7/12/2024 c37 ScythH02
So im confused. Naruto, as a novice carries around prisoner scrolls, but Jiraiya as an expert doesn't?
So im confused. Naruto, as a novice carries around prisoner scrolls, but Jiraiya as an expert doesn't?
16/27/2024 c56 ReadingToad
Looking forward to how this duel with Grievous will turn out, he is rather opportunistic and poses a dangerous situation.
Looking forward to how this duel with Grievous will turn out, he is rather opportunistic and poses a dangerous situation.
6/25/2024 c50 WizzyTheWizard
I hope Naruto becomes recognized as a hero of the republic alongside Anakin and Obi-Wan
I hope Naruto becomes recognized as a hero of the republic alongside Anakin and Obi-Wan
6/25/2024 c49 WizzyTheWizard
I hope Naruto can successfully Talk-no-Jutsu Dooku in the future. I mean, he failed with Sasuke time and again but eventually succeeded, even if it was after Sasuke completed his goal.
I hope Naruto can successfully Talk-no-Jutsu Dooku in the future. I mean, he failed with Sasuke time and again but eventually succeeded, even if it was after Sasuke completed his goal.
6/25/2024 c33 WizzyTheWizard
Hey Author, is Kaguya going to be apart of the story at some point or is she dead to?
Hey Author, is Kaguya going to be apart of the story at some point or is she dead to?
6/24/2024 c4 WizzyTheWizard
Didn't even think about it at first but I just realized that this happening to them completely ruins Shippuden. The plan for the 9 bijuu is destroyed if one of them is yeeted into the future.
Didn't even think about it at first but I just realized that this happening to them completely ruins Shippuden. The plan for the 9 bijuu is destroyed if one of them is yeeted into the future.
6/23/2024 c56 alexiania
well damn, i didn't expect myself to be readingthe whole of this story over a weekend, im quite glad and ive really enjoyed it. thers alot of detail in it and i find myself quite glad for it as well. i look forward to mo
well damn, i didn't expect myself to be readingthe whole of this story over a weekend, im quite glad and ive really enjoyed it. thers alot of detail in it and i find myself quite glad for it as well. i look forward to mo
6/19/2024 c48 That Dude There By Himself
Okay, yeah you just straight up nerfed them down to Jedi level. Jiraiya was as strong or stronger than Pain, Pain himself admitted that if Jiraiya had known the trick of his Paths from the start of their fight, that he likely would have lost. Naruto is still nowhere near that level, and both are significantly weaker than their canon versions. My previous comment goes over this but, pre-shippuden Naruto would beat this Naruto. And any version of canon Jiraiya would thrash this Jiraiya. You majorly nerfed their sheer strength and speed by a considerable amount, nobody in the Star Wars should be able to keep up with, let alone even comprehend their speed, and only some droids and a few fringe species could come close to their inherent strength potential. To survive strikes from them would require incredibly dense flesh/builds or the Force giving them extra hardiness. If canon Jiraiya were to put serious effort into punching someone like Jango square on the breastplate of his armor, Jangos arms would pop out of socket, his neck would snap, and his organs would all be pulverized from the sheer kinetic force. Another example: why isnt Naruto utilizing his clones? He should be using every tool he has, clones are his bread and butter. Four Narutos with lightsabers and Jango is a punching bag with no possible chance to fight back. Hell even four of him without lightsabers.
Honestly i hate to be so critical but your versions of these characters feel as though they have been made to fit into Star Wars power scaling instead of their inherent power scaling being forced into Star Wars where they would actually make a difference. And once that kind of disconnect become apparent to me i find it hard to look past, i just get pulled out of the story every time it pops up.
Okay, yeah you just straight up nerfed them down to Jedi level. Jiraiya was as strong or stronger than Pain, Pain himself admitted that if Jiraiya had known the trick of his Paths from the start of their fight, that he likely would have lost. Naruto is still nowhere near that level, and both are significantly weaker than their canon versions. My previous comment goes over this but, pre-shippuden Naruto would beat this Naruto. And any version of canon Jiraiya would thrash this Jiraiya. You majorly nerfed their sheer strength and speed by a considerable amount, nobody in the Star Wars should be able to keep up with, let alone even comprehend their speed, and only some droids and a few fringe species could come close to their inherent strength potential. To survive strikes from them would require incredibly dense flesh/builds or the Force giving them extra hardiness. If canon Jiraiya were to put serious effort into punching someone like Jango square on the breastplate of his armor, Jangos arms would pop out of socket, his neck would snap, and his organs would all be pulverized from the sheer kinetic force. Another example: why isnt Naruto utilizing his clones? He should be using every tool he has, clones are his bread and butter. Four Narutos with lightsabers and Jango is a punching bag with no possible chance to fight back. Hell even four of him without lightsabers.
Honestly i hate to be so critical but your versions of these characters feel as though they have been made to fit into Star Wars power scaling instead of their inherent power scaling being forced into Star Wars where they would actually make a difference. And once that kind of disconnect become apparent to me i find it hard to look past, i just get pulled out of the story every time it pops up.
6/19/2024 c47 That Dude There By Himself
Im sorry but no. Absolutely not. Jango Fett would be absolutly obliterated by a 12 year old no Force training Naruto. Like to an embarrassing degree. Naruto’s sheer speed and strength would be all that is necessary to blitz Jango and fold him in half armor or no. The kinetic force behind pre-shippuden Naruto’s speed and stength combined would turn Jango’s insides into mush. Literal mush. I could kind of ignore the massive nerf you did to Naruto and Joraiua before this since they were up against Force wielders or droids, but an otherwise normal human? Nah brother this is just you making Naruto incredibly weak as a plot McMuffin. The Mandalorians are my favorite part of Star Wars, this isn’t hate, but if nerfs to this degree keep happening i wont be able to stick with this story. You are saying that a normal human with some fancy armor and guns is going to outfight a ninja? I dont care if he isnt a ninja anymore, thats his base training, and his inherent constitution. This is like saying Batman could beat Superman without kyrptonite and in just armor with some gadgets. I dont care how much skill Jango has. It doesnt beat speed comparable to supercars and strength comparable to a hydraulic ram.
Im sorry but no. Absolutely not. Jango Fett would be absolutly obliterated by a 12 year old no Force training Naruto. Like to an embarrassing degree. Naruto’s sheer speed and strength would be all that is necessary to blitz Jango and fold him in half armor or no. The kinetic force behind pre-shippuden Naruto’s speed and stength combined would turn Jango’s insides into mush. Literal mush. I could kind of ignore the massive nerf you did to Naruto and Joraiua before this since they were up against Force wielders or droids, but an otherwise normal human? Nah brother this is just you making Naruto incredibly weak as a plot McMuffin. The Mandalorians are my favorite part of Star Wars, this isn’t hate, but if nerfs to this degree keep happening i wont be able to stick with this story. You are saying that a normal human with some fancy armor and guns is going to outfight a ninja? I dont care if he isnt a ninja anymore, thats his base training, and his inherent constitution. This is like saying Batman could beat Superman without kyrptonite and in just armor with some gadgets. I dont care how much skill Jango has. It doesnt beat speed comparable to supercars and strength comparable to a hydraulic ram.
6/6/2024 c26 13thsephiroth
I'm not a really big fan of Naruto and the last fanfic with naruto crossovers were two discontinued FSN/Naruto fics. I'm glad that I picked this up!
I'm not a really big fan of Naruto and the last fanfic with naruto crossovers were two discontinued FSN/Naruto fics. I'm glad that I picked this up!