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Hope grevious’s end is humiliating
Hope grevious’s end is humiliating
2/16 c59 ShaidaDark
me gustaría suguerir algo, aunque se que naruto aun no confia al 100% en Kurama, me gustaría que pudiera "Invorcar" una pequeña fraccion de su poder, como un Kyubi pequeño o dependiendo del Chaka que le de Kurama.
me gustaría suguerir algo, aunque se que naruto aun no confia al 100% en Kurama, me gustaría que pudiera "Invorcar" una pequeña fraccion de su poder, como un Kyubi pequeño o dependiendo del Chaka que le de Kurama.
2/16 c60 thor94
good chapter, so grievous escaped again. and naruto (thks to kyuubi) found a new way to use his chakra.
only to mess his grievous, really hope you plan naruto find a way to mess with the selfdestruct and successfully both capture the ship and save the fleet.
good chapter, so grievous escaped again. and naruto (thks to kyuubi) found a new way to use his chakra.
only to mess his grievous, really hope you plan naruto find a way to mess with the selfdestruct and successfully both capture the ship and save the fleet.
2/16 c60 
19InfiniteDragon
AMAZING chapter, even better than normal, and well worth the wait!
(Though I'd be lying if I didn't say 'moar' too, heh- take care of yourself and your own needs first though, as always!)
Two things I noticed:
"caught him in the side of the dead" (I assume dead head)
"Stand, that smarts," (I'm guessing that should be another "Stang"?)
But seriously, amazing chapter, and a great fight. And yes, Jiraiya SHOULD stomp Grievous. :)
19InfiniteDragonAMAZING chapter, even better than normal, and well worth the wait!
(Though I'd be lying if I didn't say 'moar' too, heh- take care of yourself and your own needs first though, as always!)
Two things I noticed:
"caught him in the side of the dead" (I assume dead head)
"Stand, that smarts," (I'm guessing that should be another "Stang"?)
But seriously, amazing chapter, and a great fight. And yes, Jiraiya SHOULD stomp Grievous. :)
2/16 c60 LightvsDarkness9901
Amazing chapter as usual. Hopefully the next one won't take as long of a wait lol. But take as much time as you need obviously. As for the jutsu name how about Wind Style: Hell Shredder? It might be a bit too edgy for Naruto now that I think about it but it's the best I can come up with personally.
Amazing chapter as usual. Hopefully the next one won't take as long of a wait lol. But take as much time as you need obviously. As for the jutsu name how about Wind Style: Hell Shredder? It might be a bit too edgy for Naruto now that I think about it but it's the best I can come up with personally.
2/16 c60 dragon ninja269
Well, this is a good chapter. Decent pace in combat and flow. All in all, very good progress. As for the name suggestion for Naruto's new wind justu, I would like to offer "Wind style: White Blaze". Blaze part would be obvious but White, well that is because whenever I think of color for wind, it's always the color white. Mostly cause of the cloud.
Hope the name is perfect.
Well, this is a good chapter. Decent pace in combat and flow. All in all, very good progress. As for the name suggestion for Naruto's new wind justu, I would like to offer "Wind style: White Blaze". Blaze part would be obvious but White, well that is because whenever I think of color for wind, it's always the color white. Mostly cause of the cloud.
Hope the name is perfect.
2/16 c60 fox.kitsune911
Absolutely lovely, you, my friend know how to write a good goddamn story. You know how to keep the suspense and want to read more. Keep up the great work, I'm exited for more!
Absolutely lovely, you, my friend know how to write a good goddamn story. You know how to keep the suspense and want to read more. Keep up the great work, I'm exited for more!
2/16 c60 GokuSS400
This new technique i woukd argue is a fair compromise to people thinking or wanting him to develop Shatterpoint.
One could even argue it would make Naruto and Mace an even FIERCER more unstoppable duo than they already are combined.
This new technique i woukd argue is a fair compromise to people thinking or wanting him to develop Shatterpoint.
One could even argue it would make Naruto and Mace an even FIERCER more unstoppable duo than they already are combined.
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