for The Return of the Queen - First goddess11/5/2021 c7 SiriusOrionBitch
Great story so far I'm really enjoying! Hope you continue it thank you! Take care,
SOB
Great story so far I'm really enjoying! Hope you continue it thank you! Take care,
SOB
8/4/2021 c5 CyDawg
Awesome start, awesome setting, so far. Can't wait to see what you do with it going forward!
Awesome start, awesome setting, so far. Can't wait to see what you do with it going forward!
158/4/2021 c5 Cam.Katarn
It was a eagle, also you made a spelling mistake here " One of two children who asked Zeus not to tore cut into pieces, other being Hestia". It should be something like " One of two of my children who asked Zeus no to cut me into pieces, the other being Hestia".
Also Hercules freed Prometheus ages ago.
It was a eagle, also you made a spelling mistake here " One of two children who asked Zeus not to tore cut into pieces, other being Hestia". It should be something like " One of two of my children who asked Zeus no to cut me into pieces, the other being Hestia".
Also Hercules freed Prometheus ages ago.
7/20/2021 c4 Cam.Katarn
Good chapter I enjoyed it but I have a suggestion, you should read An Undertow of Sand by Shujin on . It really describes the Gods and how their abilities work in excellent detail, Shujin gones into great depth on how Gods and their Domains and Names work in a way that I think you could greatly use. Don't forget to read the Shujin's comments she goes into greater detail there.
Good chapter I enjoyed it but I have a suggestion, you should read An Undertow of Sand by Shujin on . It really describes the Gods and how their abilities work in excellent detail, Shujin gones into great depth on how Gods and their Domains and Names work in a way that I think you could greatly use. Don't forget to read the Shujin's comments she goes into greater detail there.
7/19/2021 c3 guest
I hope you update soon I am eager to know what will happen next.
I hope you update soon I am eager to know what will happen next.
6/22/2021 c3 McLoggernaut
Great chapter! Things are starting to heat up :D Looking forward to the next one!
Great chapter! Things are starting to heat up :D Looking forward to the next one!