for Suburban Witchcraft6/12/2021 c2 Ryruko
wow, naruto was incredibly okay with hinata whoring herself up to every other witch in the coven, I mean, he barely even made up a fuss about it, or Hinata trying to shift the on to him. Your versions of Naruto are on a whole new level of pathetic, this story just makes me feel bad for him, Hinata lies right in front of him, She, Ino and Tsunade laughs behind his back and he just takes it like a complete cuckold, and the best part is the pity sex Hinata gives him, did she even feel anything during the lemon, or was she faking it like everything else?
Bonus points for the brief flashback that shows Hinata just got with him out of pity, nevermind that in the parts that she is alone, it looks like she regrets ever getting with him.
wow, naruto was incredibly okay with hinata whoring herself up to every other witch in the coven, I mean, he barely even made up a fuss about it, or Hinata trying to shift the on to him. Your versions of Naruto are on a whole new level of pathetic, this story just makes me feel bad for him, Hinata lies right in front of him, She, Ino and Tsunade laughs behind his back and he just takes it like a complete cuckold, and the best part is the pity sex Hinata gives him, did she even feel anything during the lemon, or was she faking it like everything else?
Bonus points for the brief flashback that shows Hinata just got with him out of pity, nevermind that in the parts that she is alone, it looks like she regrets ever getting with him.
5/30/2021 c2 Mr. Ursine
So I can’t help but notice that this story is near identical to another story also by a , but is based in the MLP universe with different characters, Spike as Naruto, Applejack as Hinata, Celestia as Tsunade, as well as being one chapter ahead of this one. If both are you that’s fine, but then I’m sad that you weren’t confident enough to keep the stay as the base material. Good luck with these versions, but if you aren’t the same person, you are a piece of shit. Hope it is the same though.
So I can’t help but notice that this story is near identical to another story also by a , but is based in the MLP universe with different characters, Spike as Naruto, Applejack as Hinata, Celestia as Tsunade, as well as being one chapter ahead of this one. If both are you that’s fine, but then I’m sad that you weren’t confident enough to keep the stay as the base material. Good luck with these versions, but if you aren’t the same person, you are a piece of shit. Hope it is the same though.
5/28/2021 c2 Guest
Am i going crazy or did you have other stories?
Am i going crazy or did you have other stories?
5/28/2021 c2 mew85
Do you plan having other witches having their way with naruto? since hinata 'cheated', it would be fair to have naruto X other women smut.
Also do you plan some dominant!witch X sub!naruto smut (and by sub i means stuff like naruto being gagged, strapped, maybe even having toys and futa teasing his sentives insides by slightly sadistic dominatrix woman) , Or it will be only pure dominant naruto with lesbian scenes story?
doesn't sound consistent to have naruto being always perfect full dominant in a world of supposed powerful dominatrix witches
Do you plan having other witches having their way with naruto? since hinata 'cheated', it would be fair to have naruto X other women smut.
Also do you plan some dominant!witch X sub!naruto smut (and by sub i means stuff like naruto being gagged, strapped, maybe even having toys and futa teasing his sentives insides by slightly sadistic dominatrix woman) , Or it will be only pure dominant naruto with lesbian scenes story?
doesn't sound consistent to have naruto being always perfect full dominant in a world of supposed powerful dominatrix witches
5/28/2021 c2 Guest
no matter the excuse, cheating is wrong. I can't simply condone this. Good luck with your story but it's not for me.
no matter the excuse, cheating is wrong. I can't simply condone this. Good luck with your story but it's not for me.
35/27/2021 c1 Ryruko
so, it's yet another cuckold naruto story.
you could have warned in the beginning
so, it's yet another cuckold naruto story.
you could have warned in the beginning
5/24/2021 c1 WeAreLegion55
I dont usually like these type of stories cus the mcs are mostly brain dead but I wanna see how this develops
I dont usually like these type of stories cus the mcs are mostly brain dead but I wanna see how this develops
5/23/2021 c1 Guest
do you have to turn Naruto into a beta loser cuck in every story? I get that people might have some issues in real life, bu do you have to cure your complexes by projecting?
do you have to turn Naruto into a beta loser cuck in every story? I get that people might have some issues in real life, bu do you have to cure your complexes by projecting?
5/23/2021 c1 iiNeo
I don't know why people are being so shitty it's a fanfiction. It's not meant to make sense most time I do hope you don't get discouraged beacuase of people who can't separate reality from fiction author.
I don't know why people are being so shitty it's a fanfiction. It's not meant to make sense most time I do hope you don't get discouraged beacuase of people who can't separate reality from fiction author.
5/23/2021 c1 kamikage86
So this is a story about Naruto getting cucked, that's kinda sad for Naruto, hope he has a powerful secret too that would shock the cheating wife.
So this is a story about Naruto getting cucked, that's kinda sad for Naruto, hope he has a powerful secret too that would shock the cheating wife.