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1/23/2022 c1 Guest
REVIEW MY STORY!

www dot fanfiction dot net/s/14011295/1/Caillou-Montana

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1/21/2022 c1 MeMeMooMoo
People pay for this? You can't even stick to a single tense lmao
1/17/2022 c35 2gearhead2177
good job.
1/11/2022 c34 anja.quickert.9
:-)
1/6/2022 c34 RWIW
Well, I read through the whole thing quite quickly.

I'm honestly somewhat impressed. It's better than a LOT of fics. Jon is overpowered, but believably so, considering that gods are more active in this Westeros. I was REALLY adverse to the Essos sojourn at first, because I want powerful!Jon to muck with the Southrons, but you made it entertaining. You actually hit Valyria! Praise be! The main OC fits in neatly to the setting, and doesn't take screentime away from canon characters. Miraculously, the main plot has even made it back to Westeros, which is more than I can say for most Essos!fics (including _The Winds of Winter_)...

Nice job. Keep up the good work.
1/6/2022 c31 RWIW
Jon, you're CLEARLY the God of Virility in this setting. Men pray to be you (and pray you don't get within a mile of their wives). Women pray their men can be as virile as you (and the unattached ones pray to be within a mile of you). Just take it as one of your domains already.
1/6/2022 c30 RWIW
"fuck his Red Religion"
Quite literally.
1/6/2022 c27 RWIW
...I'm not sure what it means that a smutfic-with-plot is the FIRST powerful!Jon story I've seen that actually has the guts to hit Old Valyria...

Thank you, sincerely. I've always wanted to see a story where he actually plows in and investigates it...
1/6/2022 c18 RWIW
Whoo-hoo, Jon is taking after Aegon the Conqueror (minus Aegon's odd fertility issues). Mount the world, Jon! The world of ASOIAF can only be improved by it!
1/6/2022 c1 RWIW
I know this will slide into a mindless smutfest, but honestly, I can SEE that prologue happening in GRRM's world. I mean, so many of the human characters are horny, vengeful bastards. Why not the deities as well?
1/3/2022 c34 1fire1
nice to hear will be getting two chapters a month.
always nice to get more updates.

fun story though I wish we would actually get to meet Jon's kids. I know this is more of a lemon-based story but to be honest the actual story is what keeps me reading.

John essentially being a God and his divinity all of that I find really fascinating.
1/3/2022 c34 Guest
Well this chapter was a fucking disappointing, obvious where your going with this. Pissed I wasted my time reading this for it 2 turn in to some jonsa crap
1/3/2022 c34 22DarylDixon'sLover
Great chapter
1/3/2022 c34 2gearhead2177
good job.
1/3/2022 c34 Kalstorm99
interesting.
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