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6/22/2021 c4 KratostheLycan
ooooooo tingles
6/21/2021 c26 1Knight121198
Good chapter, I can imagine blood wards on the gates keeping them closed.
6/20/2021 c26 Uday Sra
Awesome
6/19/2021 c14 M.Rose
Damn Daenerys is cute as fuck. Definitely best girl. After her is Arya and Sands tho. Then Joffreys little sister.
6/18/2021 c26 Nana
Haber como Jon deja pasar cajas llenas de acero valiryo, creo que Jon volverá para recuperarlo.
Se irá solo a Valirya.
6/18/2021 c26 Firefiend5
I have enjoyed this story and like the direction that you've take 'dragonblood' Jon. I think however that you need to make these chapters a bit longer. Ending with the same 'choose your own path' nonsense every time is lame, the story is yours so tell it. Don't have the reader literally see the possible paths for the next decision at the end of every short chapter. By the time you have the decision made of which path Jon took it is time for another and you write out the choice and that's the end of the chapter. Boo to that. Feels like the past ten chapters should be rolled into about 3.
6/18/2021 c26 6Selacha
So, just wondering, is Jon just completely ignoring the fact that the letter explicitly states there are entire CRATES of Valarian Steel in the hold of that ship, or has he just glossed over it for the time being? Because that's a big thing to ignore.
6/18/2021 c26 Xsker
Love how Jon just glossed over the fact there was literal crates of valyrian steel right under his feet, and yet he seems focused more on following Tommen's path for a singular blade. You shouldn't have included that if you weren't going to make immediate use of it.
6/18/2021 c26 KaTee19
Don’t forget to take the crates of Valyrian steel plundered already by king tommon with you Jon.
6/18/2021 c24 Selacha
"Jon found himself rather turned off by the concept of these… animal people who were squabbling over Mantarys. Beasts should remain beasts and humans should remain human in Jon's eyes." So Jon is decidedly NOT a furry then. Oh well, missed opportunity if I've ever seen one.
6/17/2021 c25 mad9172
Loot now
6/17/2021 c25 1fire1
good chapter
6/17/2021 c3 Jack1nTheBox
kinda sad to see no mention of Ghost... oh well. can't have everything I suppose
6/17/2021 c25 1Knight121198
Ransack it now! Might need the boats that work if you fill the ones you have with plunder you may need the extra space, plus the kings ship would make a great flagship for Jon.
6/15/2021 c2 Random Reader
You did Ned Stark dirty. Holy shit, that basically ruined this entire fic.
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