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6/2/2021 c10 1blcoachmac
Wow! Nice! Now let jon pour molten Gold on Viserys head!
6/2/2021 c10 fanreader18
I say take the Hoard. They might prove useful.
6/2/2021 c10 1rc48177
Fuck running, if they want to follow him to conquest, who is he to refuse worthy warriors? He is planning to mount the world, and a horse is fine until the dragons come
6/1/2021 c10 Beast
goddamn lmao jons a savage
6/1/2021 c10 RageT
This is fire, pure heat
6/1/2021 c9 1blcoachmac
Good job! Jon thrashing Kal Drogho is a nice twist!
5/31/2021 c8 Tenjo
Your cliff hangers are bloody annoying. Not because they’re good or suspenseful, but because they’re not even fucking cliff hangers and because they’re always the exact fucking same. “He has two choices, which one will he choose?”

Oh yes, I’m captivated. Please, tell me what he chooses to do when it’s blatantly clear to anyone reading what he’s gonna choose. There’s no suspense when you make things so damn predictable.
5/31/2021 c9 Guest
Viserys doesn’t have a better claim than Jon. The son of the heir is higher in the line of succession than the younger brother of the heir. Even in a large portion of feudal society where the was male preference, the daughters of a lord/king come before his brothers. Got/asoiaf also has this child over sibling succession as seen multiple times in the books.
5/30/2021 c1 Casualreader79
in my opinion. it's too early for Jon to rescue/retrieve Dany. she doesn't have dragons yet and is still a scared girl. The way this story is going. Jon, just needs dragons... and ghost, can't forget him.
5/30/2021 c8 Njord1
Having Daenerys by his side is fundamental in terms of legitimacy, the problem is getting there, and Robert will find out and Ned will have to explain himself, but really, Jon was exiled for nothing, and Ned was happy to oblige his nephew to condemn himself on the wall, honestly, fuck the Starks, Jon is playing the game of thrones now, and in this game everyone is a piece on the board.
5/30/2021 c8 Maelor Vhaegon
Good chapter. The Black Pearl needs more attention in the fanfiction community. And for her to say fúçk it and continue having šęx was great. Looking forward to the next update.
5/30/2021 c8 2xLucqs
please go to just deserves to die and wont he get the dragon eggs? also jon is still a ice person and would still be inclined to save dany. he is just jon but super horny.
5/30/2021 c7 Mac55
Jon has the better claim. Son of the Crown Prince, is higher ranking than the younger brother of the Crown Prince.
5/29/2021 c7 Focus of the future
welp!

here we go lads
5/29/2021 c7 Guest
Jon can barely count numbers I know it’s not your point but plz don’t make Jon a borderline illiterate even by Westeros standards. In books he was the commander in whoosh time Wall was at its strongest and he charmed Stannis and Tycho to support him and his most powerful tool was not his martial ability but his mind. He solved problem with his mind rather than sword 8/10 time. Plz don’t make him a buffoon like D&D
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