for Back? Not Really5/6 c59 Swarnava Playz
Just fabulous...The new powerful forms of magic with vivid descriptions are magnificent and there's a perfect balance of action and romance. I still think the final defeat of Voldemort was kind of abrupt and Predictable. The zombie apocalypse part seemed irrlavent to the plot . Also , I would have loved to see Harry move on as Death's Emissiry, even if for a single para at the epilogue... Cheers :)
Just fabulous...The new powerful forms of magic with vivid descriptions are magnificent and there's a perfect balance of action and romance. I still think the final defeat of Voldemort was kind of abrupt and Predictable. The zombie apocalypse part seemed irrlavent to the plot . Also , I would have loved to see Harry move on as Death's Emissiry, even if for a single para at the epilogue... Cheers :)
5/2 c36 
1bleachorange
For all the authors notes, Im just wondering why they got sick from taking a portkey. Both harry and fleur are very familiar with portkeys and wouldnt get sick from taking one.
1bleachorangeFor all the authors notes, Im just wondering why they got sick from taking a portkey. Both harry and fleur are very familiar with portkeys and wouldnt get sick from taking one.
4/15 c1 reddir
Good start, am wondering what you will do with this “old man in a kid’s situation” idea.
And your English seems fine, I didn’t notice any problems.
Good start, am wondering what you will do with this “old man in a kid’s situation” idea.
And your English seems fine, I didn’t notice any problems.
4/13 c18 Tony Dubois
Harry’s really embracing his de-ageing when he named his anaconda ‘Big Head’, like a toddler would his toy lol
Harry’s really embracing his de-ageing when he named his anaconda ‘Big Head’, like a toddler would his toy lol
4/12 c19 4Dzarsos
This is a fantastic story, and you are far from the only one who does this, but there is nothing more annoying in all of fanfiction than authors gloating about cliffhangers in their author’s notes.
It destroys all of the suspense you’ve built with your (again, really quite good) writing, and makes readers (1) lose the admiration thry may be developing for the craft you’ve put into creating a suspenseful moment, and (2) carelessabout the resolution.
That massive pet peeve of mine aside, you are an excellent storyteller, and I am very much enjoyinh this work.
4DzarsosThis is a fantastic story, and you are far from the only one who does this, but there is nothing more annoying in all of fanfiction than authors gloating about cliffhangers in their author’s notes.
It destroys all of the suspense you’ve built with your (again, really quite good) writing, and makes readers (1) lose the admiration thry may be developing for the craft you’ve put into creating a suspenseful moment, and (2) carelessabout the resolution.
That massive pet peeve of mine aside, you are an excellent storyteller, and I am very much enjoyinh this work.
4/11 c60 3WhiteElfElder
I wonder if Harry will ever tell anyone his status with Death? Did he collect all of the Hallows?
3WhiteElfElderI wonder if Harry will ever tell anyone his status with Death? Did he collect all of the Hallows?
4/11 c55 WhiteElfElder
Is Voldemort going with a scorched earth policy...he can't have it so he will destroy it and everyone else?
Is Voldemort going with a scorched earth policy...he can't have it so he will destroy it and everyone else?