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5/9 c60 Zarakaiy
Super moment merci pour cette fic !
5/6 c59 Swarnava Playz
Just fabulous...The new powerful forms of magic with vivid descriptions are magnificent and there's a perfect balance of action and romance. I still think the final defeat of Voldemort was kind of abrupt and Predictable. The zombie apocalypse part seemed irrlavent to the plot . Also , I would have loved to see Harry move on as Death's Emissiry, even if for a single para at the epilogue... Cheers :)
5/2 c36 1bleachorange
For all the authors notes, Im just wondering why they got sick from taking a portkey. Both harry and fleur are very familiar with portkeys and wouldnt get sick from taking one.
4/28 c59 Rebell 01
This Story is really good. I will check out your other Story's.
4/15 c5 reddir
I never doubted the use of “goodest”, it was spot on ‘pet-speak’.
4/15 c3 reddir
Wow, you are changing just about _everything_.
4/15 c1 reddir
Good start, am wondering what you will do with this “old man in a kid’s situation” idea.

And your English seems fine, I didn’t notice any problems.
4/14 c42 Tony Dubois
Such an inspired move to write a Hedwig POV. Bravo!
4/13 c18 Tony Dubois
Harry’s really embracing his de-ageing when he named his anaconda ‘Big Head’, like a toddler would his toy lol
4/12 c19 4Dzarsos
This is a fantastic story, and you are far from the only one who does this, but there is nothing more annoying in all of fanfiction than authors gloating about cliffhangers in their author’s notes.

It destroys all of the suspense you’ve built with your (again, really quite good) writing, and makes readers (1) lose the admiration thry may be developing for the craft you’ve put into creating a suspenseful moment, and (2) carelessabout the resolution.

That massive pet peeve of mine aside, you are an excellent storyteller, and I am very much enjoyinh this work.
4/11 c60 3WhiteElfElder
I wonder if Harry will ever tell anyone his status with Death? Did he collect all of the Hallows?
4/11 c58 WhiteElfElder
Does Harry not know the spell Voldemort used to make the hand for the rat?
4/11 c56 WhiteElfElder
well damn...Harry really never catches a break.
4/11 c55 WhiteElfElder
Is Voldemort going with a scorched earth policy...he can't have it so he will destroy it and everyone else?
4/11 c54 WhiteElfElder
Riddle is a complete lunatic.
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