for Back? Not Really12/6 c60 Guest
Great Story. Loved it. Can't believe you made moldshorts a Lich at the end.
Great Story. Loved it. Can't believe you made moldshorts a Lich at the end.
11/8 c8 dixonjason403
i dont give a shit if e gets involved or not, i just want him to do SOMETHING. anything really, even just playing quiditch. so far its just been him doing nothing except commentating on events like a cynical asshole. noone wants a story where the protagonist just sits on his ass the whole time.
i dont give a shit if e gets involved or not, i just want him to do SOMETHING. anything really, even just playing quiditch. so far its just been him doing nothing except commentating on events like a cynical asshole. noone wants a story where the protagonist just sits on his ass the whole time.
11/8 c4 dixonjason403
what the hell is the point of this story is harry wont do ANYTHING ?! i dont mean meddling eiter, i mean he isnt doing anything at all. this is boring as fuck.
what the hell is the point of this story is harry wont do ANYTHING ?! i dont mean meddling eiter, i mean he isnt doing anything at all. this is boring as fuck.
11/8 c2 dixonjason403
yeah i not sure i like this anymore. i GET not wanting to be the "main character" anymore, but harry just completely ignoring everything going on around him makes for absolutely boring reading, ya know? at least make him peek in so us readers know whats going on, even if he doesnt participate.
yeah i not sure i like this anymore. i GET not wanting to be the "main character" anymore, but harry just completely ignoring everything going on around him makes for absolutely boring reading, ya know? at least make him peek in so us readers know whats going on, even if he doesnt participate.
11/1 c9 
8daled73
If the train took from morning to dinner time to go NORTH to Hogwarts, about 8 hours, how does it go SOUTH from 3 o'clock and be there by dinner time? And don't say MAGIC!
8daled73If the train took from morning to dinner time to go NORTH to Hogwarts, about 8 hours, how does it go SOUTH from 3 o'clock and be there by dinner time? And don't say MAGIC!
10/31 c11 Lot1t
The main character is a dumb whiner. Pluck, pluck, the Basilisk will eat half the school. Well, that won't hurt you. I fucked up like a weather vane jumping from side to side.
The main character is a dumb whiner. Pluck, pluck, the Basilisk will eat half the school. Well, that won't hurt you. I fucked up like a weather vane jumping from side to side.
10/30 c55 Finnspa23
Honestly kinda disappointed that zombie outbreak is where this story went haha. Will see how it ends up though :)
Honestly kinda disappointed that zombie outbreak is where this story went haha. Will see how it ends up though :)
10/25 c32 Pjag57
One thing I would love to see was the pianist on the stage commenting about his brother George(A reference to the extremely flamboyant performer Liberace.)
One thing I would love to see was the pianist on the stage commenting about his brother George(A reference to the extremely flamboyant performer Liberace.)