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2/7/2024 c23 6The-Heaven
Man, in the final part of this chapter Harry reminded me of Tang Hao from Douluo Dalu, even though I don't like the guy, I have to admit that his character model is pretty cool, a super OP guy who has nothing else to do with matters in the world and that's why he looks like a beggar with a black cape over his shoulders, but when necessary, he appears when the MC is in danger and makes an epic scene of beating everyone up.
2/5/2024 c59 cameron1812
A joy to read, thank you!
2/2/2024 c60 5peterco
Great read!
It was a good amount of AU.
Early chapters hinted at the being a tune traveler quite well, not too obviously.
You respected your readers.
Replacing lemons with [lemons] I liked.

The only flaw I noticed was that Harry negotiated terribly with death. He needed the right to quit, so that death wouldn't make being his emissary too miserable. Instead he agreed to terms where death can make him start forever by making him miserable. Not a mistake is expect an adult war veteran to make. This could be fixed relatively easily.
2/1/2024 c59 jayod
great read!
1/28/2024 c24 MRGwrites
Big Head is my favorite!
1/23/2024 c60 Guest
amazing story cant wait to read the next one!
1/24/2024 c59 HoneyBear84
Love it
1/20/2024 c59 Beyondtheforest
Excellent story.
I was a little hesitant to read it at first as my favourite character was killed off early on but I’m so glad I did!
1/18/2024 c59 suziq968
This was a great read. I still think the unforgivables were too casually used. With all the other options and the requirements of negative emotions, wanting to cause pain and suffering I think intelligent magicals would find a better way, but I really enjoyed the plot line. Thanks for sharing.
1/17/2024 c6 Guest
I am enjoying this. Thank you
1/17/2024 c5 Guest
I could see Harry hanging out with Percy a good bit. Percy could benefit from studying with Harry, if Percy's pride would allow it.
1/17/2024 c3 Guest
Interesting choice. Not Hermione, but Someone in bathroom with troll.
1/17/2024 c1 Guest
I interesting start! Good work .
1/16/2024 c20 suziq968
Are you, at some point, going to explain how casual they are with unforgivables here? Harry did use or attempt to use them in canon, but only under extreme duress or desperation. You've got them throwing unforgiveables like confetti here. It's kinda disconcerting.
1/16/2024 c59 DeathCrawler
great story took a while to finally finish and look forward reading the sequel
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