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1Anyanwu
I have to stop here, mainly because your use of voodoo. Voodoo is a closed practice. Harry would not be allowed in.
1AnyanwuI have to stop here, mainly because your use of voodoo. Voodoo is a closed practice. Harry would not be allowed in.
2/18 c40 Mutant Ascension
I find it Ironic that Harry hasn't realized that when he went around killing all those dark lords he did not actually Help the magical world at All In fact he did far More harm than good by making the magical world much weaker for the War with muggles. Anyway you should probably tell bellatrix about Future advancement in muggle technology that is about to happen in the next 10 to 20 years and should probably advise her to create a magical post spell a spell that can send out a Wide range pulse of pure magical energy that would be able to destroy any muggle technology that it comes in contact with well any electrical muggle technology that it comes in contact with. You should probably also remind her that the shield charm can be permanently enchanted onto clothing or anything really will it be clothing or jewelry which would allow magicals to be pretty much immune to muggle firearms until the shield charm is broken that should also help in no future war to come.
I find it Ironic that Harry hasn't realized that when he went around killing all those dark lords he did not actually Help the magical world at All In fact he did far More harm than good by making the magical world much weaker for the War with muggles. Anyway you should probably tell bellatrix about Future advancement in muggle technology that is about to happen in the next 10 to 20 years and should probably advise her to create a magical post spell a spell that can send out a Wide range pulse of pure magical energy that would be able to destroy any muggle technology that it comes in contact with well any electrical muggle technology that it comes in contact with. You should probably also remind her that the shield charm can be permanently enchanted onto clothing or anything really will it be clothing or jewelry which would allow magicals to be pretty much immune to muggle firearms until the shield charm is broken that should also help in no future war to come.
2/18 c34 Mutant Ascension
Consider a Neville just like Harry is a accidental Horcrux, Actually you can't give a really call either of them one they're more like just an accident that fulfills the same purpose as 1 but not truly one. Anyway possession is a thing in the Harry Potter universe even in the books I find it hard to Believe that there wouldn't be clengine rituals that exist to Purge all dark Magic from one's Body.
Consider a Neville just like Harry is a accidental Horcrux, Actually you can't give a really call either of them one they're more like just an accident that fulfills the same purpose as 1 but not truly one. Anyway possession is a thing in the Harry Potter universe even in the books I find it hard to Believe that there wouldn't be clengine rituals that exist to Purge all dark Magic from one's Body.
2/8 c41 JeanPaulVS
Hola, gracias por el capitulo.
Opino que al eliminar el "Limón" has eliminado algunas cosas clave en la relación de Fleur con Harry en la intimidad. Como por ejemplo lo posesiva que es ella que incluso asusto un poco a Harry en pleno acto. Creo que en vez de cortarlo quizas editarlo y dar algún resumen?. Es solo una sugerencia.
Otro asunto, no solo quitaste el "Limón" si no tambien la escena post Lemon, donde hablan Bellatrix con los Delacor mayores.
Suerte y gracias. Saludos desde Perú.
Hola, gracias por el capitulo.
Opino que al eliminar el "Limón" has eliminado algunas cosas clave en la relación de Fleur con Harry en la intimidad. Como por ejemplo lo posesiva que es ella que incluso asusto un poco a Harry en pleno acto. Creo que en vez de cortarlo quizas editarlo y dar algún resumen?. Es solo una sugerencia.
Otro asunto, no solo quitaste el "Limón" si no tambien la escena post Lemon, donde hablan Bellatrix con los Delacor mayores.
Suerte y gracias. Saludos desde Perú.
2/7 c8 1Inferius57
I just checked some of your viewers comments, some about how apathetic he is, well, he has been through hell back in his time, and since he is now a "No Body" I think has a right to not want to stand out and be the person everyone notices. I totally get why he just he just wants to fly under the radar.
I would if I was him in this time frame.
]-)
1Inferius57I just checked some of your viewers comments, some about how apathetic he is, well, he has been through hell back in his time, and since he is now a "No Body" I think has a right to not want to stand out and be the person everyone notices. I totally get why he just he just wants to fly under the radar.
I would if I was him in this time frame.
]-)
2/7 c4 Fiction Haven
Okay, four chapters in and all I got is Harry being a cuck, watching others doing the action, like a pathetic cunt consuming porn like vitamins. You say he won't get involved with all things Voldy, but you also make him missing some actions. What's the point of this work?
Okay, four chapters in and all I got is Harry being a cuck, watching others doing the action, like a pathetic cunt consuming porn like vitamins. You say he won't get involved with all things Voldy, but you also make him missing some actions. What's the point of this work?
2/1 c50 Guest
*non-existent
In the 6th last para
Sorry
Just can't resist my inner Hermione
*non-existent
In the 6th last para
Sorry
Just can't resist my inner Hermione
1/31 c35 Guest
Aw man
Limes are nice
This shouldn't happen
Aw man
Limes are nice
This shouldn't happen
1/26 c43 Guest
it's a very minor thing butt there is not such a thing as a rabbit steak. There is not enough meat to make such a cut.
it's a very minor thing butt there is not such a thing as a rabbit steak. There is not enough meat to make such a cut.
1/8 c55 Aertho52
I enjoyed this up until the zombie apocalypse and cutting off his arm a second time. Was a nice complete story a few chapters back, but it's jumped the shark now. Other than that a good story.
I enjoyed this up until the zombie apocalypse and cutting off his arm a second time. Was a nice complete story a few chapters back, but it's jumped the shark now. Other than that a good story.
1/6 c42 Guest
The canon Bubblehead Charm is noted in OotP as making the students look as though they were walking around with fish bowls on their heads (as it had become fashionable to cast it before walking the hallways due to the preponderance of dungbombs being thrown around the corridors). The “only covers nose and mouth” interpretation was a GoF movie invention. I don’t remember the book description in Goblet but I’m 100% sure it wasn’t “makes bubble over mouth and nose”
The canon Bubblehead Charm is noted in OotP as making the students look as though they were walking around with fish bowls on their heads (as it had become fashionable to cast it before walking the hallways due to the preponderance of dungbombs being thrown around the corridors). The “only covers nose and mouth” interpretation was a GoF movie invention. I don’t remember the book description in Goblet but I’m 100% sure it wasn’t “makes bubble over mouth and nose”