for Back? Not Really6/5/2021 c4 kessu91
Your MC might as well be a narrator and not an actual character in the fic at this point... Honestly his passive approach gave me hope for an unique fic of Harry, the guy who lived in cupboard, actually exploring the WORLD OF MAGIC he just entered. Instead we have a random OC assassin going around offing people while MC has dialogue in his mind between eating and sleeping...
Your MC might as well be a narrator and not an actual character in the fic at this point... Honestly his passive approach gave me hope for an unique fic of Harry, the guy who lived in cupboard, actually exploring the WORLD OF MAGIC he just entered. Instead we have a random OC assassin going around offing people while MC has dialogue in his mind between eating and sleeping...
6/5/2021 c4 
1dammyd
I feel so slow for now suspecting Fleur. like it was sooo obvious. but then thinking that this world is different made me not consider someone else came back too. but an interesting twist though.
1dammydI feel so slow for now suspecting Fleur. like it was sooo obvious. but then thinking that this world is different made me not consider someone else came back too. but an interesting twist though.
6/5/2021 c4 HughJasz
This story has a very interesting premise and I'm looking forward to seeing how it develops. thanks for the update! :)
This story has a very interesting premise and I'm looking forward to seeing how it develops. thanks for the update! :)
6/5/2021 c4 11RedFistCannon
I feel like the twist here is that Fleur came from her own timeline.
Since if she came from Harry's, I doubt you'd pair them like you intend to do
11RedFistCannonI feel like the twist here is that Fleur came from her own timeline.
Since if she came from Harry's, I doubt you'd pair them like you intend to do
6/5/2021 c4 brachiosaurus
considering how Fleur 'died' back in the parallel universe/past, did she somehow gaine omniscient upon her death? so that she knows who the targets are? still, an enjoyable update
considering how Fleur 'died' back in the parallel universe/past, did she somehow gaine omniscient upon her death? so that she knows who the targets are? still, an enjoyable update
6/5/2021 c4 1StormCrownSr
Ah, a new fic to hate waiting for.
Haven't had one of these in a few weeks.
Real good stuff here.
1StormCrownSrAh, a new fic to hate waiting for.
Haven't had one of these in a few weeks.
Real good stuff here.
6/5/2021 c4 orthodox1057
Pattern established and confirmed, the saboteur's actions are way too blatant and obvious though. I just hope Fleur does not pine after former red-headed what's his face husband, I don't really see this jaded Harry being a doormat simp but one never knows. Oh, how much I hate the Bill/Fleur pairing.
Pattern established and confirmed, the saboteur's actions are way too blatant and obvious though. I just hope Fleur does not pine after former red-headed what's his face husband, I don't really see this jaded Harry being a doormat simp but one never knows. Oh, how much I hate the Bill/Fleur pairing.
6/5/2021 c4 TheLastFedaykin
Ooo interesting twist. Both this chapter and the last one, looking forward to the next chapter
Ooo interesting twist. Both this chapter and the last one, looking forward to the next chapter
6/5/2021 c4 The Jabberwock of OZ
AAAAAAAA
DON'T
I did not mean to foretell Fleur would be a time traveler!
It does suck for Narcissa though right?
For the past 11 years she has been taking care of her son, corresponding to her friend Severus, and just living with Lucius.
All three are dead now.
Must be a nightmare for her.
I hope Sirius might bring her back to the Black.
'For all I know she could be pure evil, but still losing Everybody in her immediate family?!'
Great stuff.
AAAAAAAA
DON'T
I did not mean to foretell Fleur would be a time traveler!
It does suck for Narcissa though right?
For the past 11 years she has been taking care of her son, corresponding to her friend Severus, and just living with Lucius.
All three are dead now.
Must be a nightmare for her.
I hope Sirius might bring her back to the Black.
'For all I know she could be pure evil, but still losing Everybody in her immediate family?!'
Great stuff.