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5/26/2021 c1 wolfwarrior75
sounds like a good start
keep going with it
5/26/2021 c1 The Jabberwock of OZ
Okay so some comments/concerns
The intro was a little confusing.
Reading the Summary before hand did inform me of what I was getting into, but /having the intro be of Harry and Oliver at a game being happy for once in his life was weird.
HOWEVER
I do like that having such a weird intro made me wonder what was going on. I wanted to put together the clues of what was happening.
We know from the Summary what has happened, but the story hasn't really informed us as to the struggle of Harry and Riddles return in his old timeline.
Although that maybe something that we will see periodically.
The intro did inform us that somethings in Harry's current Present will inform us of what he went through in his past life.

Thank you for your work.
It is very good.
5/26/2021 c1 RageGod
This sounds amazing so far came from your other novel this one sounds dope hopefully you continue it.
5/26/2021 c1 jean cadagan
me gusta sigue trabajando esclavo (broma)

de verdad me gusta tu historia y me encantaria que continues esta va a ser la primera historia de harry popote que leere grasias por todo el trabajo que les pones a tus historias sigo a centepillar desde que tenia 10 caps grasias por seguir asiendo esto
5/26/2021 c1 HereticSmurf
This is a great start. I'm a big fan of both Harry/Fleur and time travel/second chance, so this checks a lot of boxes. You've done a good job at giving Harry a realistic voice for a weary, 40 year old veteran stuffed back into an 11 years old body. I loved/love Caterpillar so I'm excited to see where you can take this next.
5/26/2021 c1 3JemeryT
Good start
5/26/2021 c1 CrazyMr
Like everything so far. Also I am not saying go full harem route but 2 girls total would be nice. Fleur as one and the other can either be Luna Lovegood or Susan Bones. I doubt you would be willing to do this though going by your other story.
5/26/2021 c1 pieman807
love it
5/26/2021 c1 entron
Enjoyable beginning, these types of stories are some of my favourites, I hope you continue it.
5/26/2021 c1 Arpe
Quite interesting very few time travel harry Tories are out there that are longer than 25k words excited to see where you take this .
5/26/2021 c1 2Home of the Brave
well the idea is nothing new but I would love to see where this goes. is Harry going to a new House to avoid the BWL drama? what happened to Sirius, James and Lily? All questions I need answers to.
5/26/2021 c1 Otagema
Yooooo, from the writer of 'Caterpillar', and it's even a flowerpot story. What a beautiful day to be on FFN. Good luck with this story, looking at your first story—I'm sure this one is going to be great.
5/26/2021 c1 fresh prince1
Probably need to read a few more chapters before I say yes or no to this story.
5/26/2021 c1 1dammyd
Interesting take on Time travel Harry. It seems interesting so far. would definitely follow it to see more
5/26/2021 c1 Ceramite117
This is a pretty good start, looking forward to more in the future
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