for Back? Not Really5/27/2021 c1 John
That’s a really promising start and I am intrigued to see how it moves that you have making it a Harry/Fleur fic ,which is my favourite pairing ,I just have 1 thing to say please don’t make it a haram fic .Many writers start really good with a clear plan but get influenced in the middle of the story and change its direction to make it a haram and it kills the story, just keep it Harry and fleur.
That’s a really promising start and I am intrigued to see how it moves that you have making it a Harry/Fleur fic ,which is my favourite pairing ,I just have 1 thing to say please don’t make it a haram fic .Many writers start really good with a clear plan but get influenced in the middle of the story and change its direction to make it a haram and it kills the story, just keep it Harry and fleur.
35/27/2021 c1 DeathCrawler
seems interesting will be looking forward the next chapters but one question so far what is flowerpot mean in this context? never heard of it
seems interesting will be looking forward the next chapters but one question so far what is flowerpot mean in this context? never heard of it
5/27/2021 c1 boban094
Great start of the story. It looks promising and I hope you will continue writing it.
Great start of the story. It looks promising and I hope you will continue writing it.
5/27/2021 c1 scyfly
your summary till 'after 22 year' is almost exactly the same as several others, it is so alike that i checked if this was indeed a new story. i would change it so this story feels more originally yours. simply make it 'harry never found out about the horcrux in his scarafter 22 years...' and leave it at that. this incidently also saves you the plot hole of harry defeating voldemort but not noticing the wraith leaving the body.
voldemort is not the problem but the symptom so this whole three wars later would pretty much be harry's own doing in following dumbledore's MO. had dumbles killed all death eaters after the firsf war voldy would likely not have come back.
i havent read it yet as i like to wait for stories to have some more words first, but these are some things that stood out to me from just reading your summary.
looking forward to reading a new story of yours
your summary till 'after 22 year' is almost exactly the same as several others, it is so alike that i checked if this was indeed a new story. i would change it so this story feels more originally yours. simply make it 'harry never found out about the horcrux in his scarafter 22 years...' and leave it at that. this incidently also saves you the plot hole of harry defeating voldemort but not noticing the wraith leaving the body.
voldemort is not the problem but the symptom so this whole three wars later would pretty much be harry's own doing in following dumbledore's MO. had dumbles killed all death eaters after the firsf war voldy would likely not have come back.
i havent read it yet as i like to wait for stories to have some more words first, but these are some things that stood out to me from just reading your summary.
looking forward to reading a new story of yours
5/27/2021 c1 Stanislaus
this story looks like it's gonna be a good one. I hope you continue the story
this story looks like it's gonna be a good one. I hope you continue the story
5/27/2021 c1 FlawedKing
Looking forward to this new story. Also please just keep it a pair not a harem.
Looking forward to this new story. Also please just keep it a pair not a harem.
5/27/2021 c1 mintushar844
Nice way to go to sleep "Harry" loved the chp loved to see if tonks can be added to the love circle if not chill bruh chill love the opening chapter dearly. Please don't him be griffindor maybe other house Ravenclaw or slytherin will be amazing to see him in other house... peace out
Nice way to go to sleep "Harry" loved the chp loved to see if tonks can be added to the love circle if not chill bruh chill love the opening chapter dearly. Please don't him be griffindor maybe other house Ravenclaw or slytherin will be amazing to see him in other house... peace out
5/27/2021 c1 ChangeMe4574
Well, I like the start well enough. But, uh, by adding "If I may ask" to Harry's question at the beginning you've actually succeeded in making him sound the opposite of immature.
Well, I like the start well enough. But, uh, by adding "If I may ask" to Harry's question at the beginning you've actually succeeded in making him sound the opposite of immature.
5/27/2021 c1 Kaiser The Challenger
I am really interested on how the story will go. You have really specify of how harry thinks of himself and how you point out of how the original story ended. I am looking for jow the story will go.
I am really interested on how the story will go. You have really specify of how harry thinks of himself and how you point out of how the original story ended. I am looking for jow the story will go.
5/27/2021 c1 Controlchaos
This is a great fanfic and I hope you continue, the idea of Neville as The Boy Who Lived is going to make the a very excited fanfic to read I know you already paired Harry with Fleur but if you ever think of adding only one more my suggestion is Cho Chang because you don’t see many fanfic with her as a pairing
This is a great fanfic and I hope you continue, the idea of Neville as The Boy Who Lived is going to make the a very excited fanfic to read I know you already paired Harry with Fleur but if you ever think of adding only one more my suggestion is Cho Chang because you don’t see many fanfic with her as a pairing