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11/1/2024 c9 8daled73
If the train took from morning to dinner time to go NORTH to Hogwarts, about 8 hours, how does it go SOUTH from 3 o'clock and be there by dinner time? And don't say MAGIC!
10/31/2024 c11 Lot1t
The main character is a dumb whiner. Pluck, pluck, the Basilisk will eat half the school. Well, that won't hurt you. I fucked up like a weather vane jumping from side to side.
10/30/2024 c60 2LxZero
Great Story!
10/30/2024 c59 1Finnspa23
Enjoyed the story overall and would recommend it to others. Thanks for sharing
10/30/2024 c55 Finnspa23
Honestly kinda disappointed that zombie outbreak is where this story went haha. Will see how it ends up though :)
10/29/2024 c29 Finnspa23
Voldy seems more dangerous now
10/27/2024 c20 2LxZero
Loved the chapter!
10/27/2024 c1 LxZero
Nice start!
10/25/2024 c32 Pjag57
One thing I would love to see was the pianist on the stage commenting about his brother George(A reference to the extremely flamboyant performer Liberace.)
10/18/2024 c60 zobemaru2012
Бросил, не дочитав 3 главы, ибо не согласен с полнейшим абсурдом, в который автор превратил историю. Жалею о потраченном времени.
10/18/2024 c56 zobemaru2012
Серьезно? Отрезал руку добровольно? Какой бред
10/1/2024 c52 1ObsessivelyObsessiveObsession
Poor Harry thinks he can outsmart a nigh omnipotent, fundenental aspect of reality.

At least Death seems like a chill boss, for the most part. I guess to an entity that exists outside of time and space, Harry enjoying a mortal lifetime here and there isnt that big of a deal. Still gonna suck having to live for eternity though. First few lifetimes will probably be cool, but it’s gonna be tiring eventually
10/1/2024 c51 ObsessivelyObsessiveObsession
Harry was foolish here. Death already told him that he exists beyond the concept of time. He knows the future.

So this deal? Death will just send him on missions he knows he will die on. And once he has a few lifetimes banked, he can send him to worlds he knows Harry won’t die on. It’ll keep Harry close enough to his goal that he wont give up, and then death can just send him to a world where he will die once Harry gets too close.

Harry will eventually figure it out, i guess, but likely only after so many lifetimes that he is no longer human. He may have cut a deal, but to an entity like death, its still servitude for as long as death desires. Which sounds a lot like eternity.
10/1/2024 c50 ObsessivelyObsessiveObsession
Was it ever revealed why they hadn’t already destroyed the diary? Doesnt make much sense to keep them around, tbh. It’s not like you can really do anything with them.

Ironic that the only reason they didn’t kill Voldemort is because Harry Potter refused to destroy the Horcrux… doesn’t make much sense to me at all. Guess it was needed for the narrative and all the Death stuff

Im not conviced Death didnt have a hand in it though. Makes more sense to me that Death did some kind of mind magic to keep them from destroying the Horcrux so that Hardy would go down this path
10/1/2024 c49 ObsessivelyObsessiveObsession
Harry became too arrogant once he came back from the past. In his world, he desperately did everything to survive for decades, and he eventually gained a solid grasp on what Voldemort and his enemies were capable of.

He does not know that here. He does not act like that here. He is too reckless. Too sure of himself. It’s already got him killed twice. He shouldve tried to flee Dumbledore, but instead he was almost excited to fight him. Here, it is a bit presumptious that he thinks he can defeat this voldemort, who is an entirely different person, with ease. It actually works in his favor, but his ignorance of what he was capable of got him killed a second time.

I know that it was some unfamiliar weird egyptian magic that killed him. That said, Harry has to have spent decades coming across unfamiliar magics and things for decades, but he’s survived them all. Whatever mentality he had in the past that allowed him to adapt and overcome whatever was thrown his way seems to have dissappeared in this timeline. Or maybe it was Fate all along that kept him alive?

Death is probably going to save him again, and Harry is going to be pissed about becoming his champion. But it’s Harry’s own choices that led him here. If Death saves him again, he should honestly he thankful.
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