for An Avenger's Anguish9/4/2024 c3 Agent Frank
I should have said this in my review for chapter 6 but it only occurred to me afterwards. This version of Harry is immensely capable, what stopped him from just getting some elves to take care of the victims and drugging them with potions to keep them in stasis. He could have just used the Draught of the Living Death potion (idk how I remember it off the top of my head).
I should have said this in my review for chapter 6 but it only occurred to me afterwards. This version of Harry is immensely capable, what stopped him from just getting some elves to take care of the victims and drugging them with potions to keep them in stasis. He could have just used the Draught of the Living Death potion (idk how I remember it off the top of my head).
9/4/2024 c5 Agent Frank
I'm a big fan of how you've handled the combat scenes in this story. I don't mean the individual fights, but the overall planning and strategy used in the operations has been really cool to read.
I'm a big fan of how you've handled the combat scenes in this story. I don't mean the individual fights, but the overall planning and strategy used in the operations has been really cool to read.
4/18/2024 c6 
2SEEKER452
loved the idea and this is the second one i have read were this idea is dumbdell turning harry into a weapon
and for the people put into a forced sleep he could have easliy had house elf feeding them potion to keep them alive
2SEEKER452loved the idea and this is the second one i have read were this idea is dumbdell turning harry into a weapon
and for the people put into a forced sleep he could have easliy had house elf feeding them potion to keep them alive
12/12/2023 c6 8Wally991
Yeah, fuck Harry and his victim complex, what a way of washing his hand and blaming it all on Dumbledore. Don't care if he was manipulated, fuck him
8Wally991Yeah, fuck Harry and his victim complex, what a way of washing his hand and blaming it all on Dumbledore. Don't care if he was manipulated, fuck him
10/16/2023 c6 Solstice07
Rare fic that portrays a competent manipulative Dumbledore, kudos for that. I knew some kind of twist was coming but I definitely did not expect that bro. Excellently written, this could have easily been a 200k fic with the amount of plot and character development you've just barely scratched at. I wish there was one more chapter where we get Lily's, James', Iris' and more Fleur's pov and their feelings regarding Harry. He was utterly fucked by his circumstances and his mentor, and it'd give atleast some amount of closure to read about how the reveal affected his family and Fleur. But we can't have everything in life sadly. Thanks for writing!
Rare fic that portrays a competent manipulative Dumbledore, kudos for that. I knew some kind of twist was coming but I definitely did not expect that bro. Excellently written, this could have easily been a 200k fic with the amount of plot and character development you've just barely scratched at. I wish there was one more chapter where we get Lily's, James', Iris' and more Fleur's pov and their feelings regarding Harry. He was utterly fucked by his circumstances and his mentor, and it'd give atleast some amount of closure to read about how the reveal affected his family and Fleur. But we can't have everything in life sadly. Thanks for writing!
6/29/2023 c6 1Locate
Just imagine if Dumbledore didn't actually have all powerful occlumency, and Harry only thinks he did because of how much his memories warped and how much he made himself hate everyone. This could have easily been a mind magic accident that Dumbledore didn't know would happen. It's funny to think about, but I think I prefer the Dumbledore that Harry remembers.
1LocateJust imagine if Dumbledore didn't actually have all powerful occlumency, and Harry only thinks he did because of how much his memories warped and how much he made himself hate everyone. This could have easily been a mind magic accident that Dumbledore didn't know would happen. It's funny to think about, but I think I prefer the Dumbledore that Harry remembers.
5/25/2023 c6 LtKettch
I have to admit I almost set this aside thinking it wasn’t my kind of story. I’m so glad I didn’t. This is an excellent story and well worth any Potter fan’s time. I liked the style of shifting POVs as you worked through the story.
Thanks for sharing. I highly recommend your story.
I have to admit I almost set this aside thinking it wasn’t my kind of story. I’m so glad I didn’t. This is an excellent story and well worth any Potter fan’s time. I liked the style of shifting POVs as you worked through the story.
Thanks for sharing. I highly recommend your story.
2/15/2023 c6 GreenAlien123
Pretty amazing story. Also, good call to end it here. I hope you get a third story going soon :-)
Pretty amazing story. Also, good call to end it here. I hope you get a third story going soon :-)
9/1/2022 c6 29Kairan1979
The Authors rarely are able to paint Evil!Dumbledore convincing, without turning him into a Saturday Morning Cartoon villain. You certainly succeeded; your Dumbledore is terrifying.
29Kairan1979The Authors rarely are able to paint Evil!Dumbledore convincing, without turning him into a Saturday Morning Cartoon villain. You certainly succeeded; your Dumbledore is terrifying.
6/14/2022 c2 NightHowler0
Well this is certainly an extremely different fanfic for the Harry Potter world… kind of shocking to be real. Excited to see how it turns out though.
Well this is certainly an extremely different fanfic for the Harry Potter world… kind of shocking to be real. Excited to see how it turns out though.