
6/15/2022 c1 Guest
Great story and I can’t wait for more
Great story and I can’t wait for more
5/6/2022 c1 Guest
Please update this fanfiction it's very good
Please update this fanfiction it's very good
4/13/2022 c1 Hermione Dreyar
Like the story although I would like to see older version of Dani, Danny Phantom clone in the story too, I'm wondering if you could pair Dani and Jasper would re
Like the story although I would like to see older version of Dani, Danny Phantom clone in the story too, I'm wondering if you could pair Dani and Jasper would re
1/26/2022 c1 zerosama.754083
Really loved the unique ideal behind this first chapter. Cant wait for more!
Really loved the unique ideal behind this first chapter. Cant wait for more!
10/17/2021 c1 Guest
Bad stories with bad crossover concepts earn bad reviews.
Fuck you!
Bad stories with bad crossover concepts earn bad reviews.
Fuck you!
9/1/2021 c1
7jh831
Good start.
Hope you don't paint all red eye vampires as evil.
Had to laugh, danny said he wasnt going to be a hero, but what did he do? He saved bella.
Felt like you didnt want any drama with the meeting between danny and the cullens. They just questioned eachother and that was it.
Danny and the cullens should be suspicious of eachother. It feels like you are going the easy route.
Im not sure i want to follow or not, i'll wait and see what the next few chapters hold.

Good start.
Hope you don't paint all red eye vampires as evil.
Had to laugh, danny said he wasnt going to be a hero, but what did he do? He saved bella.
Felt like you didnt want any drama with the meeting between danny and the cullens. They just questioned eachother and that was it.
Danny and the cullens should be suspicious of eachother. It feels like you are going the easy route.
Im not sure i want to follow or not, i'll wait and see what the next few chapters hold.
7/24/2021 c1 BoredKing
Why are there so many run on sentences? Periods exist for a reason, use them. And add more spaces, no one likes reading a long walls of text.
Why are there so many run on sentences? Periods exist for a reason, use them. And add more spaces, no one likes reading a long walls of text.
6/4/2021 c1 Lysab9113
It sounds very interesting, can't wait to see what happens next. Please update when you can.
It sounds very interesting, can't wait to see what happens next. Please update when you can.
5/29/2021 c1 FanDanTomb
Spacing and periods, use them. The entire first paragraph is basically one big sentence. It's annoying to read.
Spacing and periods, use them. The entire first paragraph is basically one big sentence. It's annoying to read.