for A Magical Journey11/21 c434 HusseES
Enjoyed the fic but it flopped towards the end horribly. The cards were stacked in the favour of quinn and dumbledore so massively. If the soul link with the resurrection stone was going to be so ineffective that quinn almost dies even after destroing 2 horcruxes with the soul link active why not just destroy the horcruxes normally and double team voldemort? Just unnecessary drama with quinn almost getting killed. Would have also enjoyed that more than quinn fiddling with horcruxes the whole of the final match. Overall though a great fic and I really loved reading your work but yeah bit dissapointed with the ending.
Enjoyed the fic but it flopped towards the end horribly. The cards were stacked in the favour of quinn and dumbledore so massively. If the soul link with the resurrection stone was going to be so ineffective that quinn almost dies even after destroing 2 horcruxes with the soul link active why not just destroy the horcruxes normally and double team voldemort? Just unnecessary drama with quinn almost getting killed. Would have also enjoyed that more than quinn fiddling with horcruxes the whole of the final match. Overall though a great fic and I really loved reading your work but yeah bit dissapointed with the ending.
11/20 c18 
1Mike699
After 18 chapters in so far, I do have to say I really enjoy the little character lists at the bottom with titles.
1Mike699After 18 chapters in so far, I do have to say I really enjoy the little character lists at the bottom with titles.
10/22 c176 Sahamosveb
The author should have said he'd be making a fool of himself with two girls. Why deceive people by pretending to write something sensible and interesting, only to create such a stupid fucking thing?
The author should have said he'd be making a fool of himself with two girls. Why deceive people by pretending to write something sensible and interesting, only to create such a stupid fucking thing?
10/22 c174 Sahamosveb
Well... Yulle Ball turned out to be a charmingly boring part of this fanfic. Starting with the choice of partner. Fleur, really? The most boring character, the most cliched choice. Why even bother going if the choice of partner was based on "she needs help". I'm not even talking about Fleur's "fooling around" suggestion. The author should have defined who Fleur is. A suffering lady who can't find anyone because of her peculiarity. Or she's fine and has no problem fooling around with a bloke.
Ending with the dance and the 'conversation' with Daphne.
Well... Yulle Ball turned out to be a charmingly boring part of this fanfic. Starting with the choice of partner. Fleur, really? The most boring character, the most cliched choice. Why even bother going if the choice of partner was based on "she needs help". I'm not even talking about Fleur's "fooling around" suggestion. The author should have defined who Fleur is. A suffering lady who can't find anyone because of her peculiarity. Or she's fine and has no problem fooling around with a bloke.
Ending with the dance and the 'conversation' with Daphne.
10/22 c104 1AsclepiusCato
"No". What's the point of these deals. He always has to make acquisitions to his requests despite the fact that they owe him. A.I.D isn't a service it's just a friend group at this point considering the fact that their aren't any repercussions to not keeping their word. If they said no ,no. Would he have dared to obliviate them. Honestly this MC has does absolutely nothing. He's on the sidelines gaining power and will for canon's sake fall on his face infront of Voldemort.
1AsclepiusCato"No". What's the point of these deals. He always has to make acquisitions to his requests despite the fact that they owe him. A.I.D isn't a service it's just a friend group at this point considering the fact that their aren't any repercussions to not keeping their word. If they said no ,no. Would he have dared to obliviate them. Honestly this MC has does absolutely nothing. He's on the sidelines gaining power and will for canon's sake fall on his face infront of Voldemort.
10/21 c104 Sahamosveb
Quinn's too kind. For a man who collects favours like the devil, he collects them like a sucker.
Quinn's too kind. For a man who collects favours like the devil, he collects them like a sucker.
10/20 c3 Sahamosveb
The author has a problem with the constant repetition of the same word in sentences. They go something like thisQuinn's problem was not a problem that could be solved without problems."
The author has a problem with the constant repetition of the same word in sentences. They go something like thisQuinn's problem was not a problem that could be solved without problems."
10/20 c3 Sahamosveb
Chapter 2 "Quinn likes all his classes, for there is no TV and they are extremely easy" Chapter 3 "Quinn doesn't like all his classes, for he is bad at them or they embarrass him". Bro, seriously? Did you forget what you wrote in the previous chapter?
Chapter 2 "Quinn likes all his classes, for there is no TV and they are extremely easy" Chapter 3 "Quinn doesn't like all his classes, for he is bad at them or they embarrass him". Bro, seriously? Did you forget what you wrote in the previous chapter?
9/20 c280 SvenTheDecoy
i was really looking forward to reading about his year without any vauly bs...
i was really looking forward to reading about his year without any vauly bs...
9/19 c187 SvenTheDecoy
kinda disappointed that West wouldn't think he's a target. mames him seem really stupid
kinda disappointed that West wouldn't think he's a target. mames him seem really stupid