for Mass Effect: Project Hybrid6/8 c4 Spartanhybrid1.5
Looking forward to the eventual release of the next chapter of this amazing story
Looking forward to the eventual release of the next chapter of this amazing story
6/8 c3 Spartanhybrid1.5
Hmmm eventual idea for weapons upgrades/modifications for neo
Pistol:could stay the same type but upgraded with the programing from the evisorator shot gun possibly even the matock rifle for something like a brute mauler
Rifle: upgraded to a revenant light machine gun (the one that krill and the shadow broker used) with ether hishok harpoon rifles programing or the grail spike throwers programing
Sniper rifle: staying the same but with the thermal scope, and silencer mods
Shotgun: upgrade to the claymore with the grail spike throwers programing and modded with the ability for firing up to five shots per each thermal mag
Heavy weapon: heavy machine gun equivalent to the m2 browning or the mk19 just hip firing
Hmmm eventual idea for weapons upgrades/modifications for neo
Pistol:could stay the same type but upgraded with the programing from the evisorator shot gun possibly even the matock rifle for something like a brute mauler
Rifle: upgraded to a revenant light machine gun (the one that krill and the shadow broker used) with ether hishok harpoon rifles programing or the grail spike throwers programing
Sniper rifle: staying the same but with the thermal scope, and silencer mods
Shotgun: upgrade to the claymore with the grail spike throwers programing and modded with the ability for firing up to five shots per each thermal mag
Heavy weapon: heavy machine gun equivalent to the m2 browning or the mk19 just hip firing
6/8 c2 Spartanhybrid1.5
I personally would have gone with a amalgamated custom armor that was a mixture of the Cerberus centurion armor as the base in order to have a coms/surveillance equipment hacked/interception system and then added in the tech that is featured in the shade armor with the addition of the tech armor ( the orange omni armor ) to act as ablative armor and then add in a bit of the Cerberus shield user armor from the concept art but replace the standard riot shield with something like the shadow broker’s omni-riot/over shield in the off hand
I personally would have gone with a amalgamated custom armor that was a mixture of the Cerberus centurion armor as the base in order to have a coms/surveillance equipment hacked/interception system and then added in the tech that is featured in the shade armor with the addition of the tech armor ( the orange omni armor ) to act as ablative armor and then add in a bit of the Cerberus shield user armor from the concept art but replace the standard riot shield with something like the shadow broker’s omni-riot/over shield in the off hand
6/7 c1 Spartanhybrid1.5
Good story so far
Subject #00 is just standing there menacingly ( read in Patrick’s voice from SpongeBob )
It would have been cool if subject #00 did an ultron/Pinocchio “ I had strings but now I’m free” then it was picked up by the other corpses in a similar manner as ultron/rachni queen speaking style “ there are no strings on me” ( and repeat like the one bit from the avengers ultron like in the iron man robot factory scene)
Good story so far
Subject #00 is just standing there menacingly ( read in Patrick’s voice from SpongeBob )
It would have been cool if subject #00 did an ultron/Pinocchio “ I had strings but now I’m free” then it was picked up by the other corpses in a similar manner as ultron/rachni queen speaking style “ there are no strings on me” ( and repeat like the one bit from the avengers ultron like in the iron man robot factory scene)
2/26 c4 Guest
Love it
Hope aside from all the organic ladies that fall for Neo that EDI does to
Love it
Hope aside from all the organic ladies that fall for Neo that EDI does to
4/16/2022 c4 Igotamace
Very enjoyable story so far, I like how you keep Neo more in the background as a spectator instead of him going the typical OP OC route of dealing with everything himself while everybody else watches on with open mouths.
I enjoy the added flavour through Shepard's POI and also appreciate her and Tali's interest in Neo (Femshep and Tali are my favourite characters in ME).
There are a few minor spelling mistakes (like writing 'to to' instead of 'to notbut more importantly there is nothing wrong grammatically and your writing itself is fine too.
I eagerly await the next chapter.
Very enjoyable story so far, I like how you keep Neo more in the background as a spectator instead of him going the typical OP OC route of dealing with everything himself while everybody else watches on with open mouths.
I enjoy the added flavour through Shepard's POI and also appreciate her and Tali's interest in Neo (Femshep and Tali are my favourite characters in ME).
There are a few minor spelling mistakes (like writing 'to to' instead of 'to notbut more importantly there is nothing wrong grammatically and your writing itself is fine too.
I eagerly await the next chapter.
7/18/2021 c4 
3AtomicGod666
I like it so far, is this going to be an oc/tali pairing as they would make every good pair I feel. Can't wait for more!
3AtomicGod666I like it so far, is this going to be an oc/tali pairing as they would make every good pair I feel. Can't wait for more!
7/17/2021 c4 Xenozip
Yeah, that's the problem with many mass effect fanfictions, they try to make every fight a legitimate challenge for the crew, and that's just not reality, Shepard is humanity's best soldier, one need only look at the ME3 multiplayer to see how other human forces stack up vs shepard, it's just not a contest, shepard on their own could fight the enemy forces in the games, but adding their crew on top of that, only main quest missions would be legit threats rachni, saren, benezia, shit like that, but you're never gonna convince me a bunch of random ass mercenaries were an actual challenge, I mean if they struggle against that, what the fuck were they doing fighting reapers?
Yeah, that's the problem with many mass effect fanfictions, they try to make every fight a legitimate challenge for the crew, and that's just not reality, Shepard is humanity's best soldier, one need only look at the ME3 multiplayer to see how other human forces stack up vs shepard, it's just not a contest, shepard on their own could fight the enemy forces in the games, but adding their crew on top of that, only main quest missions would be legit threats rachni, saren, benezia, shit like that, but you're never gonna convince me a bunch of random ass mercenaries were an actual challenge, I mean if they struggle against that, what the fuck were they doing fighting reapers?
7/17/2021 c4 danielsnow
Loved it, hope to see more. I'm glad that you didn't drop any ofyour stories and am looking forward to more!
Loved it, hope to see more. I'm glad that you didn't drop any ofyour stories and am looking forward to more!
6/14/2021 c3 danielsnow
Yay tali for the win! I would like too base him maybe go visit shepardbin her room, he didn't know much about personal boundaries due to never having to deal with them himself, so that could be a very funny bonding moment if he happened to walk in on her, say...just getting out of the shower.
Looking forward to more!
Yay tali for the win! I would like too base him maybe go visit shepardbin her room, he didn't know much about personal boundaries due to never having to deal with them himself, so that could be a very funny bonding moment if he happened to walk in on her, say...just getting out of the shower.
Looking forward to more!