7/19/2021 c2 Selena's Fangirl
Such a good one! I loved this so much, and keep going :)
You are amazing , and I am happy that I got to be able to read this !
I could write a lot but well , let's just say this fanfic is too good!
Such a good one! I loved this so much, and keep going :)
You are amazing , and I am happy that I got to be able to read this !
I could write a lot but well , let's just say this fanfic is too good!
7/5/2021 c2 Rain Viewing
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Aw that was sweet 3 I'm glad both got to confess with each other in the end.
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Aw that was sweet 3 I'm glad both got to confess with each other in the end.
7/1/2021 c2 Guest
Congrats on completing a story, and an awesome one at that! And thank you for psoting and sharing...can never have too many Francy stories. I liked the little quotes and the start and end, very cute and well chosen to match the story.
I read the first chapter didn't realize at first that there was a second and I was like nooooooooooooo, this one-shot can't end here! What happens next? So excited when I discovered the second chapter was already posted. I'm excited that there is more to come in the future.
Congrats on completing a story, and an awesome one at that! And thank you for psoting and sharing...can never have too many Francy stories. I liked the little quotes and the start and end, very cute and well chosen to match the story.
I read the first chapter didn't realize at first that there was a second and I was like nooooooooooooo, this one-shot can't end here! What happens next? So excited when I discovered the second chapter was already posted. I'm excited that there is more to come in the future.
7/1/2021 c2 5Prithika
Great chapter. It was great when both Frank and Ned were going over to each others' homes for pretty much the same things.
'eleventy billion times' just became my favourite expression!
Ned's story was really very ironic but it fit in really well with the rest of the story.
Congrats for one completed story. I haven't yet reached there.
By the way, I have experienced every single one of the 'Very Relatable Things' you have put up on your profile.
Great chapter. It was great when both Frank and Ned were going over to each others' homes for pretty much the same things.
'eleventy billion times' just became my favourite expression!
Ned's story was really very ironic but it fit in really well with the rest of the story.
Congrats for one completed story. I haven't yet reached there.
By the way, I have experienced every single one of the 'Very Relatable Things' you have put up on your profile.
7/1/2021 c2 27Drumboy100
Wonderful! A good talent, that everyone can see the ending coming, yet we enjoy the ride even more because of it! I really thought Frank would get on that plane, though, glad he didn't. Joe is MVP, bringing them together. Love how Joe's foul language rubbed off on first his mother, then Frank. ;) Laura's endorsement is even more important than Joe's, a mother's instincts. Nancy could have done Ned the respect of breaking up in person, but she did obviously work very hard on that letter, and his reaction is telling: while the letter is stained with Nancy's tears, Ned only needs to take a deep breath...and immediately goes on to open the next letter! Ned will have no problem finding a girl willing to cheer for him at every game, which is what he really wants. I love how Nancy gets on her knees first, Nancy has always actively pursued what she wants in her career, now she will do so in her romantic life as well. Those descriptions of their emotions and caresses at the end...quite an effective way to wake me up this morning! Absolutely loved this, can't wait for more.
Wonderful! A good talent, that everyone can see the ending coming, yet we enjoy the ride even more because of it! I really thought Frank would get on that plane, though, glad he didn't. Joe is MVP, bringing them together. Love how Joe's foul language rubbed off on first his mother, then Frank. ;) Laura's endorsement is even more important than Joe's, a mother's instincts. Nancy could have done Ned the respect of breaking up in person, but she did obviously work very hard on that letter, and his reaction is telling: while the letter is stained with Nancy's tears, Ned only needs to take a deep breath...and immediately goes on to open the next letter! Ned will have no problem finding a girl willing to cheer for him at every game, which is what he really wants. I love how Nancy gets on her knees first, Nancy has always actively pursued what she wants in her career, now she will do so in her romantic life as well. Those descriptions of their emotions and caresses at the end...quite an effective way to wake me up this morning! Absolutely loved this, can't wait for more.
7/1/2021 c2 20angelicalkiss
wonderful ending! Nancy and Frank together is always my favorite! I love Laura cursing too! the reaction from Joe was classic! it shows that Laura is invested in her sons' futures. see? even she sees the love between the two! looking forward to reading more from you!
wonderful ending! Nancy and Frank together is always my favorite! I love Laura cursing too! the reaction from Joe was classic! it shows that Laura is invested in her sons' futures. see? even she sees the love between the two! looking forward to reading more from you!
7/1/2021 c2 Emily
Classic Nancy and Frank - doing the same thing! the ending was so sweet! thank you for posting this!
Classic Nancy and Frank - doing the same thing! the ending was so sweet! thank you for posting this!
6/30/2021 c2 Guest
this story is a mix of a lot of things and I love it, I always love stories that end with kisses, and this story was amazing. Noice nan girl
this story is a mix of a lot of things and I love it, I always love stories that end with kisses, and this story was amazing. Noice nan girl
6/25/2021 c1 18Fonique2
Not bad for a first fanfiction! My only suggestion might just be a beta to help polish up some punctuation and the like but that also comes with time! Keep writing! I liked it!
Not bad for a first fanfiction! My only suggestion might just be a beta to help polish up some punctuation and the like but that also comes with time! Keep writing! I liked it!
6/23/2021 c1 2novembershowers
you're off to a good start! fully supporting your first fanfic!
from a hopeless Francy shipper
you're off to a good start! fully supporting your first fanfic!
from a hopeless Francy shipper