for Makings Of A King10/7 c13 bastidaswilliam2005
Thanks for the update now that i think about it most of the ones that says the fruit name are the ones that comsume a paramecia fruit luffy, buggy, boa and bartolomeo
Thanks for the update now that i think about it most of the ones that says the fruit name are the ones that comsume a paramecia fruit luffy, buggy, boa and bartolomeo
8/22 c3 sumurmurni14
oh why is it that every story I read about luffy op is always like this. changing in the middle of the story by becoming not op, or making luffy nerfed for the reason of making the story more interesting. it doesn't always work like that man
oh why is it that every story I read about luffy op is always like this. changing in the middle of the story by becoming not op, or making luffy nerfed for the reason of making the story more interesting. it doesn't always work like that man
6/14 c13 myrs94
If you killed mr 3 I'm guessing the straw hats are going to get the doru doru no mi. I'm really hopeful about that because it's such a useful fruit. It was wasted on mr 3. Honestly, mr 3 wishes he could be Pika or Perospero.
Also, is the package that Doflamingo sent to Alabasta going to be Yamato?
If you killed mr 3 I'm guessing the straw hats are going to get the doru doru no mi. I'm really hopeful about that because it's such a useful fruit. It was wasted on mr 3. Honestly, mr 3 wishes he could be Pika or Perospero.
Also, is the package that Doflamingo sent to Alabasta going to be Yamato?
5/29 c13 Uchicha ASHU
Nice chapter!
The Ace and Luffy interactions was very good. It shows how strong their bond is with both having even more trust in each other’s abilities than in cannon. Luffy suggesting Ace to be wary of Teach due to him betraying WB pirates after spending such a long time with them, may save Ace’s life later on.
The whole scene with Gin and Vivi was also very good. It adds more depth to Gin’s character, with him acknowleding his fears but deciding to brace them due to his loyalty to Luffy. Due to this, he is slowly becoming my favourite characters in the expanded crew.
Reiju and Luffy scene was also greatLooking forward to read more about how the Straw Hats will deal with Crocodile and his goons.
Thanks for the chapter!
Nice chapter!
The Ace and Luffy interactions was very good. It shows how strong their bond is with both having even more trust in each other’s abilities than in cannon. Luffy suggesting Ace to be wary of Teach due to him betraying WB pirates after spending such a long time with them, may save Ace’s life later on.
The whole scene with Gin and Vivi was also very good. It adds more depth to Gin’s character, with him acknowleding his fears but deciding to brace them due to his loyalty to Luffy. Due to this, he is slowly becoming my favourite characters in the expanded crew.
Reiju and Luffy scene was also greatLooking forward to read more about how the Straw Hats will deal with Crocodile and his goons.
Thanks for the chapter!
5/26 c13 Guest
Fucking useless taking a break when you take over a month to update what a fucking waste of a chapter it covered nothing just a fucking useless 1000 word full of nothing but a waste of time no fucking back story or anything
Fucking useless taking a break when you take over a month to update what a fucking waste of a chapter it covered nothing just a fucking useless 1000 word full of nothing but a waste of time no fucking back story or anything
5/26 c9 XLR8wuzhere
A womanizer is used for a man who casually has sex with numerous women. Sanji isn’t a womanizer, he’s a gentleman, simp, and a pervert, but mainly a gentleman and a simp.
A womanizer is used for a man who casually has sex with numerous women. Sanji isn’t a womanizer, he’s a gentleman, simp, and a pervert, but mainly a gentleman and a simp.
5/11 c13 erasenpai946
I didn't expect Reiju to already become Luffy's girlfriend, I thought it would take a while
more (it was a great scene, it made me excited for the future with Robin and Hancock lol)
But it was a great chapter
I didn't expect Reiju to already become Luffy's girlfriend, I thought it would take a while
more (it was a great scene, it made me excited for the future with Robin and Hancock lol)
But it was a great chapter
5/10 c13 Kingred1994
1 aww man i hope we see ace again
2 i hope you show what happen in the world to like the marines, yonkos world government.
3 crocodile prepare a world of for your green ass.
4 Luffy you lucky bastard but i don't blame him every woman in One piece is a waifu.
5 at this point Garp is going to be great grandfather soon.
Can't wait for what's next take care.
1 aww man i hope we see ace again
2 i hope you show what happen in the world to like the marines, yonkos world government.
3 crocodile prepare a world of for your green ass.
4 Luffy you lucky bastard but i don't blame him every woman in One piece is a waifu.
5 at this point Garp is going to be great grandfather soon.
Can't wait for what's next take care.
5/5 c13 Guest
thanks for the update and the lemon with reiju. also thanks for the heads up, good luck with your continued writing
thanks for the update and the lemon with reiju. also thanks for the heads up, good luck with your continued writing
5/4 c13 zzkaizer
YEASSSS new Chapter :D
Can’t wait for the next one XD
Bring on the fights XD
Until next time :D
Enjoy
YEASSSS new Chapter :D
Can’t wait for the next one XD
Bring on the fights XD
Until next time :D
Enjoy
5/4 c13 Guest
Good chapter and best of all rejiu is now luffy’s woman.
Good chapter and best of all rejiu is now luffy’s woman.
155/4 c13 Guest
Can you update your stories more quickly please.
Can you update your stories more quickly please.
5/4 c6 Anti-Guest
Fuck you Guest below get the fuck out of here,
You son of the bitch.
Fuck you Guest below get the fuck out of here,
You son of the bitch.