for Lord of Swords3/24 c10 Killerpickle
Wtf is even the point of Rider even being in the story it makes no sense and doesn't add anything to the story particularly when its this alternate route verison...
Wtf is even the point of Rider even being in the story it makes no sense and doesn't add anything to the story particularly when its this alternate route verison...
3/24 c6 Killerpickle
The whole situation with Brian the fairies the civil war is just so forced, nothing is happening because of the mc stuff just happens and he goes along with it, Shirou has no agency
Inconsistency's with Shirous Magic:
- A reality marble is a reflection and IS a persons soul given form but only those whos souls are warped or are alien enough to reality itself have the ability to be defined enough to manifest because it blends to the natural world, But also technically everyone has one it just isn't as defined.
- Shirous reality marble allows him to copy ANY sword or weapon he lays eyes on with no effort on his part, Divine constructs and other such items are the only ones he can not 'perfectly' recreate because their construction uses elements beyond his ability to comprehend i.e 5th dimension stuff. But he is still able to Trace Divine constructs just that they are less 'complete' compared to things he normally traces.
- Shirous magic removes the restriction on who can use a noble phantasm for him but does not remove any requirements for activation or successful usage i.e Being pure of spirit, dragon bloodline etc.
The whole situation with Brian the fairies the civil war is just so forced, nothing is happening because of the mc stuff just happens and he goes along with it, Shirou has no agency
Inconsistency's with Shirous Magic:
- A reality marble is a reflection and IS a persons soul given form but only those whos souls are warped or are alien enough to reality itself have the ability to be defined enough to manifest because it blends to the natural world, But also technically everyone has one it just isn't as defined.
- Shirous reality marble allows him to copy ANY sword or weapon he lays eyes on with no effort on his part, Divine constructs and other such items are the only ones he can not 'perfectly' recreate because their construction uses elements beyond his ability to comprehend i.e 5th dimension stuff. But he is still able to Trace Divine constructs just that they are less 'complete' compared to things he normally traces.
- Shirous magic removes the restriction on who can use a noble phantasm for him but does not remove any requirements for activation or successful usage i.e Being pure of spirit, dragon bloodline etc.
3/24 c4 Killerpickle
Why is Medusa gaining memories or being refereed to as Rider... kinda weird/forced
Why is Medusa gaining memories or being refereed to as Rider... kinda weird/forced
3/24 c2 Killerpickle
I'm sorry wtf how the hell does Hera not know what a rune is she is literally a god and should instinctively know the application of such things, be able to feel it and understand what it does.
Runes are simply put symbols of power and meaning that interwoven weave intent and affects.
Now Hera not knowing exactly which pantheon the rune originates from is understandable but still a bit of a stretch simply due to her age and how she would of interacted with the other pantheons over the eons, But a Goddess of magic like Hecate should be extremely skilled in such magic and be able to identify which pantheon it originates from or at least region i.e Asian, European folklore etc
I'm sorry wtf how the hell does Hera not know what a rune is she is literally a god and should instinctively know the application of such things, be able to feel it and understand what it does.
Runes are simply put symbols of power and meaning that interwoven weave intent and affects.
Now Hera not knowing exactly which pantheon the rune originates from is understandable but still a bit of a stretch simply due to her age and how she would of interacted with the other pantheons over the eons, But a Goddess of magic like Hecate should be extremely skilled in such magic and be able to identify which pantheon it originates from or at least region i.e Asian, European folklore etc
3/20 c4 Apple89123
the "damn my E rank luck" is first of all just garbage writing but it also just makes no sense in this story. It only makes sense if the MC is Archer EMYLIA or sees himself as being a younger version of him. Also think the original "damn my E rank luck" came from a fanfic where the MC was that blue spandex wearing Spear guy because he actually has E rank luck.
the "damn my E rank luck" is first of all just garbage writing but it also just makes no sense in this story. It only makes sense if the MC is Archer EMYLIA or sees himself as being a younger version of him. Also think the original "damn my E rank luck" came from a fanfic where the MC was that blue spandex wearing Spear guy because he actually has E rank luck.
3/18 c14 SonatiShinonome
I Will be honest, this part looks cheap, like dunno the prize was not earned. It was supposed to be a miracle, something so hard it was nearly impossible, here it just happened, and she is not her Artoria, just a dragon that thinks like her.
I Will be honest, this part looks cheap, like dunno the prize was not earned. It was supposed to be a miracle, something so hard it was nearly impossible, here it just happened, and she is not her Artoria, just a dragon that thinks like her.
3/16 c15 Wolf in the Twilight
Saber already had a weakness to dragon-slaying swords due to her being the incarnation of Y Ddraig Goch as king arthur and having dragon blood and a dragon magic core just letting ya know love the story slim.
Saber already had a weakness to dragon-slaying swords due to her being the incarnation of Y Ddraig Goch as king arthur and having dragon blood and a dragon magic core just letting ya know love the story slim.
3/15 c3 Arknova
Horde...Battle maniac...Oh god is Shiro the son of some Irish Dragon/God!?
Horde...Battle maniac...Oh god is Shiro the son of some Irish Dragon/God!?
3/15 c1 Arknova
God if you are adding Medusa along with the temptation of other goddesses and beautiful monsters I hope Shiro gets a harem along with Saber
God if you are adding Medusa along with the temptation of other goddesses and beautiful monsters I hope Shiro gets a harem along with Saber
13/9 c15 Midoriryu
Seeing another chapter of this story definitely made my week better. I like the interaction between Artoria and Shirou, and look forward to more in the future. One minor personal quibble in that it would be nice if Artoria referred to Shirou by name from time to time, instead of him being her sheathe constantly. I get that it's a term of endearment, but it loses its impact with it's constant use IMO.
Seeing another chapter of this story definitely made my week better. I like the interaction between Artoria and Shirou, and look forward to more in the future. One minor personal quibble in that it would be nice if Artoria referred to Shirou by name from time to time, instead of him being her sheathe constantly. I get that it's a term of endearment, but it loses its impact with it's constant use IMO.
3/7 c14 xXSelenaXx
The whole fight with Merihorn was a joke. Ignoring the number of inconsistencies and weirdness. Merihorn's ability to impose his will on the world not only would have achieved nothing against Shirou's body which is protected by his Reality Marble, but Merihorn himself would have outright died when Shirou deployed it. Merihorn is a Fairy. Fairy Needs the WORLD to live. Unlimited Blade Works Not Merihorn's WORLD. Not Merihorn's WORLD Dead Merihorn.
The whole fight with Merihorn was a joke. Ignoring the number of inconsistencies and weirdness. Merihorn's ability to impose his will on the world not only would have achieved nothing against Shirou's body which is protected by his Reality Marble, but Merihorn himself would have outright died when Shirou deployed it. Merihorn is a Fairy. Fairy Needs the WORLD to live. Unlimited Blade Works Not Merihorn's WORLD. Not Merihorn's WORLD Dead Merihorn.