
12/17/2024 c1 Jonysunnyuk
I really enjoyed your story! It's vivid and engaging, and I can envision it working beautifully as a comic. Would you be open to me adapting it into one? I would love to hear your thoughts!
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Best regards,
Johnny
I really enjoyed your story! It's vivid and engaging, and I can envision it working beautifully as a comic. Would you be open to me adapting it into one? I would love to hear your thoughts!
Contact Information:
Email:
Discord: johnwalker429
Best regards,
Johnny
5/21/2024 c6 DinkLinks
My god this sucks ass, I think you should stick to review bombing fics instead of writing this because this feels like chatgpt taught a child how to write and then decided to stick its eyes in the blender when reading this. holy shit is this a bad fic lol
hell even my review is better written than this piece of shit lol
My god this sucks ass, I think you should stick to review bombing fics instead of writing this because this feels like chatgpt taught a child how to write and then decided to stick its eyes in the blender when reading this. holy shit is this a bad fic lol
hell even my review is better written than this piece of shit lol
5/15/2023 c5
13ZaneT69
White Night Dragon has the same ATK/DEF of Blue-Eyes White Dragon and has the ability to negate Spell/Traps and the ability to redirect attacks onto itself. Could be a better option, its a water dragon.

White Night Dragon has the same ATK/DEF of Blue-Eyes White Dragon and has the ability to negate Spell/Traps and the ability to redirect attacks onto itself. Could be a better option, its a water dragon.
6/1/2022 c1 chimera629
Don't get why pegasus wants him there so badly.
Surprised he uses a blue eyes and not some type of water monster or warrior
Don't get why pegasus wants him there so badly.
Surprised he uses a blue eyes and not some type of water monster or warrior
11/27/2021 c1 Guest
Was cute the part in that the Blue eyes white dragon licked the cheek of Percy, as despite to show be a powerful and destructive dragon, she also showed be a kind and noble dragon that can show a loyalty and a soft spot for her master.
Being honest, i even would likes that someone can writes some artwork from this scene; as see a child Percy being licked in the cheek by the Blue eyes white dragon could be very cute :3
Was cute the part in that the Blue eyes white dragon licked the cheek of Percy, as despite to show be a powerful and destructive dragon, she also showed be a kind and noble dragon that can show a loyalty and a soft spot for her master.
Being honest, i even would likes that someone can writes some artwork from this scene; as see a child Percy being licked in the cheek by the Blue eyes white dragon could be very cute :3
8/2/2021 c1
25Logicalillogical
Hold up there.
"You know about me being a duelist, right? Well I got a letter from the creator of the duel monsters cards, and he has challenged me. What's worse, he took mom..."
You literally just copied what transpired in the Yu-i-oh duelist Kingdom arc. Where Pegasus invites Yugi over to duelist kingdom and then kidnaps his grandfather so Yugi will be forced to come.
Lol did you think nobody would notice this.

Hold up there.
"You know about me being a duelist, right? Well I got a letter from the creator of the duel monsters cards, and he has challenged me. What's worse, he took mom..."
You literally just copied what transpired in the Yu-i-oh duelist Kingdom arc. Where Pegasus invites Yugi over to duelist kingdom and then kidnaps his grandfather so Yugi will be forced to come.
Lol did you think nobody would notice this.
7/29/2021 c1 ToysRUrse
Traaaasssshhhhh. Just like every other story you've written!
Just fucking delete your account. You have literally ZERO talent for writing.
Ya fucking cunt.
Traaaasssshhhhh. Just like every other story you've written!
Just fucking delete your account. You have literally ZERO talent for writing.
Ya fucking cunt.