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7/15/2021 c2 5Pyromania101
To the below guest reviewer (can't believe I'm doing this, as reviewing my own story seems rather petty), that might work for Issei, but he's not the only one who needs to be straightened out. Jasmine seems incapable of self-criticism (something even Issei can do, even if he doesn't try to learn from it), and needs physical discipline more than he does. It's why she gets hit and he doesn't.

PS
I do still respond, but it would be easier if you got an account so I could send you a Private Message.
7/12/2021 c2 Guest
I don't know if you're still responding to reviews, but here goes. As the guest that gave the review about OCs and someone else calling out Issei and Jazz, I agree to your response on how it wouldn't work, considering they definitely would dodge that speech and retaliate with some petty bullshit. But I'd argue that this method might work as we could have Rias give a Reason You Suck Speech or a Breaking Speech at Issei for his behavior, only for him to blindly assault her in retaliation, before realizing what he just did by harming his hoard and develop some heel realization on his behavior.
7/12/2021 c3 Gojira56
Kanna's in this? I hope you expand on that. Thanks for this pleasant three-shot. Later!
7/12/2021 c2 Gojira56
Hmm, I personally feel Jasmine is too much of a bitch to ever show remorse for any reason, but that's just me.
7/12/2021 c1 Gojira56
Ah, that felt good to read.

The fact that Issei and Jasmine got hit with the shit-stick is irrelevant: they're taking their anger out on the wrong people, and need to be held accountable for it. It's good to see that happen here.
7/6/2021 c1 Cheapsunglasses
Hey, dude.

Made a TV Tropes page for this story for ya. You're welcome.
7/3/2021 c1 HamClad
I don’t know how I feel about this story. Shirou feels way too much like a meddler here, to the point where it feels like he’s way out of character. I get that you’re using this story as a way to vent your feelings, but it doesn’t feel all that realistic. Welp, guess this is just another reminder of how I don’t really like bashing stories all that much.
6/30/2021 c3 Nashi
Thank you for writing this. GAIWP was an absolute headache, if I could delete it from my memories I would.
6/28/2021 c3 1Archangel Xireon Chaos God
Loved it. Want More. Possibly continuing in a Different Crossover starting after ch3 from this fic. Like Worm, Warcraft, Campione, Elder Scrolls Skyrim, or RWBY. You did a real good job. It'd be a shame for the fanfiction to end here.
6/28/2021 c1 Archangel Xireon Chaos God
Ok. I actually like this fic. Onto NEXT CHAAPTAAAH!
6/27/2021 c3 2XXxxxadisxxxXX
Having read this, your basic writing is actually pretty good. I'd like to see a full-fledged story out of you one day. Best of luck to you...

~ciao
6/25/2021 c3 Guest
I miss Fahad’s work on Shirou, so I’m glad to see someone take up his version if only for a little bit. Thank you for the good work!
6/26/2021 c1 Quzix
Based

While Issei's behavior is understandable (not excusable), Jasmine is one of those horrid people who become awful, high-and-mighty, and up their own ass. I seriously have to question why anyone would think making her a main character and on the protagonist side was a good idea. She's insufferable and brings nothing to the table. But then again, she's an OC and most original characters only bring down the story.
6/24/2021 c3 Guest
This is the cringiest shit I've read on this site in a long time.
6/23/2021 c1 Guest
To the reviewer akasuna123, you clearly have no ground to speak on considering your favorited fanfics and that your review has no substance at all.
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