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6/24/2021 c3 Hyse
The premise was good and the writing was fantastic. Most importantly, you enjoyed writing this and that's all that matters.
Thanks for writing, I enjoyed the story.
6/24/2021 c3 Xealchim
Yikes go outside lmao, no ones shit here is going Gold, hit a joint go write something worth someones time instead of this dumbster fire wank fest
6/24/2021 c3 6Ochsee
I read "A Demon Lord's Hero" and ever since Asia got her familiar wondered if Shirou also has a familiar. The idea that his familiar is Kanna is absolutely adorable.
6/24/2021 c3 uchihafan3551
give it a year or 2 and you will be cringing at this story.
6/24/2021 c1 5Seprith Li Castia
Speaking as a person who loves "A Demon Lord's Hero" and still reads "Go Away, I'm Watching Porn", most of what I could say is: you are not wrong. You might even be right!

GAIWP-Issei/Jasmine have some kind of overly complicated and drawn out backstory that is suppose to explain away their actions and contextualize their choices, but it is always just out of sight, always just slightly too convoluted to understand completely. There is build up, and there is dragging something out.

My only criticism for you on this point, however - and I admit, this might be my failing! - is a question: are we suppose to feel sorry for them? I took GAIWP story to be one of fundamentally broken characters trying to recover but being terrible at it. It is a story, yes, but not a sympathetic one.

If there is one real fault for the Shirou of this story, it is knowing too much. In GAIWP, all the characters who could give the put down this Shirou does are either a) too ignorant to act on it, b) too involved to really make progress, or c) do not know/do not care. This Shirou is a convenient out-of-context solution because he is strong enough to force a conversation and magically knows enough to know what to say to who.

...But anyway. What I really wanted to say. This story is ridiculous; not for how it was written, but for the fact it was written at all. Why put so much effort into writing a put down fiction just to say you hate a story? That is petty at best. You can clearly write. Forget a bad story on the internet and channel that into something more fun.
6/23/2021 c3 Rodvek97
thanks for the good StoryD
6/23/2021 c1 TheDragonMC
I don't like either stories but if it's there so it could call out some one else I'll bear with it
6/23/2021 c1 Ignacio365
So this shirou is below super devil level then this bitch doesn't stand a chance against issei.
6/21/2021 c2 Guest
Well while this is in a sense bashing fic, I can somewhat agree with the complaints regarding issei. Though base from what I read at GAIWP story, the main problem come from adult around issei.

Ghost as his mentor practically turn issei into semi sociopath since as an immortal monster, ghost believe that mindset will help issei at the long run.

The three Leader of faction just seeing him as potential ally (since issei is somewhat genius and has his research that can help their respective faction) or as a tykebomb ( issei host a powerful outer God and friend with Ophis and can sway dragon faction to his bidding for some reason)

Even the friendly one like azazel has fault which you mention, sending raynere, a low class fallen without solid briefing towards an unstable tykebomb.

Really, the action of faction Leader is practically 'send an innocent or broken person into issei and hope issei will help them, perhaps then issei can return just like before, a person who like helping people ' which is definitely a stupid plan.
6/23/2021 c1 1Rayish
Your writing is good, why dont you write original fanfic?
6/20/2021 c2 Nobody and Noone
: )
6/21/2021 c1 akasuna123
It's garbage bashing like Naruto fanfic, shirou would get clapped by that issei so you are just wanking
6/21/2021 c2 Ramanaar
Heya,
thank you for this rather cathartic read. I read both stories and at first found them equally good. I still follow ADLH but dropped GAIWP around chapter 17 iirc.

I'm glad that I'm not alone in wanting to reexamine GAIWP and talk about it more.

I find it mildly amusing that the reason why I and maybe others dropped GAIWP and the reason for Fang's subsequent meltdown, was metioned rather breifly. I hope you write in full Issei's a Jasmin's talk about the porn situation. 'Cause that gave me headache and a half and was my reason for thinking more about GAIWP and ultimatly dropping it.

Again thx and keep up the good work.
6/21/2021 c2 Sai Venkatesh394
I havent read the iam watching porn fic before and did that after reading irritated me.

Even without major context,emiya bashing them felt good since both cant properly answer him.
good work
6/20/2021 c2 xerad
And now i dislike adlh shirou thank to this fic great job author specially since i haven't read giwp
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