
4h c123 Blaze1992
Cue sweet victory theme!
Granted he's likely to be forced to show how to use the comms united like that at least to shields/queen otherwise the nobles might argue for the dismantling of the network.
Cue sweet victory theme!
Granted he's likely to be forced to show how to use the comms united like that at least to shields/queen otherwise the nobles might argue for the dismantling of the network.
13h c123 doomqwer
Stellaclamor really screwed the pooch there huh.
but seriously another good chapter and another dangerous faction out of the way, the fallout however looks like it will be interesting both the mess left that they have to dig up and look through and the power vacuum
Stellaclamor really screwed the pooch there huh.
but seriously another good chapter and another dangerous faction out of the way, the fallout however looks like it will be interesting both the mess left that they have to dig up and look through and the power vacuum
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1WildWolf12
Great chapter for the anniversary. I was expecting a little more effort to get a confession, but Stellaclamor surprised me. I've heard confession is good for the soul, but sometimes you need to shut up. Whatever Arnold is planning I can't wait to see blow up. A part of me wants Channer to go full evil just so a certain Dark Elf can get her revenge.

Great chapter for the anniversary. I was expecting a little more effort to get a confession, but Stellaclamor surprised me. I've heard confession is good for the soul, but sometimes you need to shut up. Whatever Arnold is planning I can't wait to see blow up. A part of me wants Channer to go full evil just so a certain Dark Elf can get her revenge.
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3Templarsith
Well as you said the church just exploded! Didn't see it coming and it was perfectly done. I figured a council of lords would be called ECT and ECT. Instead the church is just gone as the populace will no longer listen to that leadership. After all it's now a holy deed to kill the highest ranking members. Plus they openly revealed that they killed a national hero and hinted they been killing dragon born for their eyes. Sure some highest level agents will still obey but rank and file? No way I see them listening to orders from the archbishop. Now I would have added that some of the seven Shields needed to grab cloud riders to make it on time but yeah well done well done indeed. The battle plan was simple and effective. Didn't like how the proslavery leaders all died or ran after their fights. Or should I say I didn't like the duel's? Yes that feels more accurate I kinda wondering why the troops didn't just shoot with a formation of bows the one guy attacking their leaders when the army broke or got cut off. The one that jumped the rightful heir for example should have at least the problem of troops charging him or lesser ranged troops opening fire. Now onto the question of how the slave states want to use this to their advantage. This is playing with fire and I just going to say no matter how careful he is he going to get burned. Will it be worth it is the true question and given how desperate they are I wouldn't blame them for trying. Even if I would not touch this situation with a hundred foot pole. Thanks again for this wonderful story!

Well as you said the church just exploded! Didn't see it coming and it was perfectly done. I figured a council of lords would be called ECT and ECT. Instead the church is just gone as the populace will no longer listen to that leadership. After all it's now a holy deed to kill the highest ranking members. Plus they openly revealed that they killed a national hero and hinted they been killing dragon born for their eyes. Sure some highest level agents will still obey but rank and file? No way I see them listening to orders from the archbishop. Now I would have added that some of the seven Shields needed to grab cloud riders to make it on time but yeah well done well done indeed. The battle plan was simple and effective. Didn't like how the proslavery leaders all died or ran after their fights. Or should I say I didn't like the duel's? Yes that feels more accurate I kinda wondering why the troops didn't just shoot with a formation of bows the one guy attacking their leaders when the army broke or got cut off. The one that jumped the rightful heir for example should have at least the problem of troops charging him or lesser ranged troops opening fire. Now onto the question of how the slave states want to use this to their advantage. This is playing with fire and I just going to say no matter how careful he is he going to get burned. Will it be worth it is the true question and given how desperate they are I wouldn't blame them for trying. Even if I would not touch this situation with a hundred foot pole. Thanks again for this wonderful story!
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2DeltaGamer
I couldn't help but play I am the doctor from Doctor Who when James reveals that he was broadcasting the whole thing. When will these people learn? James always has some kind of ace up his sleeve and likely it's something no one has ever seen before. Also was this broadcasted to Garan too? I feel like with the whole truce now in place, we'd hear from Olga a bit more.

I couldn't help but play I am the doctor from Doctor Who when James reveals that he was broadcasting the whole thing. When will these people learn? James always has some kind of ace up his sleeve and likely it's something no one has ever seen before. Also was this broadcasted to Garan too? I feel like with the whole truce now in place, we'd hear from Olga a bit more.
6/14 c123 Dreagon D. Dragon
Another great chapter as always and Congrats on the 4th Anniversary of this epic of a story, bet you never expected it to get to here with the story being this long, with over 2.1 million words in 123 chapters and yet still not in the canon events yet, maybe by next year. XD
Anyway what a chapter to mark the yearly anniversary, James has really shown the Church they really had no idea who they where messing with, as the creator of the Voxlux and it's system of course he had the means to expose them to pretty much everyone in a way they could never prevent, though even if glasses are a thing in this world(?), there's no way contact lenses, even spell stone one are, plus using the knowledge of the Dragonborn eye mana against them. Plus Cardinal starscream really didn't need any prompting to start laying out pretty much every thing the Church has been up to even if he felt that he held all the cards.
And with all the back up James brought to the party it's really no brainer that Stellaclamor nor any of his goon squad was getting out of there, plus Prim's request of 'please, resist' shows she is in no mood to humour these guys anymore, and Stellaclamor probably isn't even the one who killed Iris, though he obviously had a hand in it, so I can only imagine how she'll be once they find and capture the guy, my money's on the Archbitch-op's bodyguard and head of the Church's black-ops group.
Plus we get to see Celestine make not only two royal decrees for the arrest of the Church's entire upper leadership, but also her second decree as Goddess Reborn to brand the Archbishop and the Cardinals as heretics, which has been a long time coming as even with all the other crap the Church has been up to they have also murdered other Dragonborn other than Iris, some of whom Celestine would have known and even considered friends, so she is not holding herself back with them anymore.
Also the little bit with Claudia 'crowning' James and looking so proud of him, I think there's starting to be more there, plus it's not the only 'coronation' that'll happen to him either.
And of course there was Tiffany and the Rebels showdown with the Ardon Loyalists and pull off a devastating and decisive victory as with this Roxella probably doesn't have much left to throw at the Rebels, plus she's also just lost her top military commanders, two by death and the other by desertion, and given her reaction to the outcome, she's most likely going to do something really foolish in a last ditch attempt to 'win' rather than just surrender with dignity, I mean is not going to work but still we all know she will.
Also nice reference with the Yamcha Death Pose meme, I had to reread it a bit to confirm it but still had me laughing. XD
As always great chapter, looking forward and good luck with the next one, and once again Congrats on the 4th Anniversary, looking forward to the fallout of James' exposure of the Church's corruption and the reactions from various peoples such as the Lords and regular citizens, and I doubt most of the Cardinals are just going to roll over and accept their new status as the heretics, plus with whatever Arnold is up to with his plan for the Archbishop, provided he can get him before someone else does.
P.s Here's to many more years with this Fic. XD
Another great chapter as always and Congrats on the 4th Anniversary of this epic of a story, bet you never expected it to get to here with the story being this long, with over 2.1 million words in 123 chapters and yet still not in the canon events yet, maybe by next year. XD
Anyway what a chapter to mark the yearly anniversary, James has really shown the Church they really had no idea who they where messing with, as the creator of the Voxlux and it's system of course he had the means to expose them to pretty much everyone in a way they could never prevent, though even if glasses are a thing in this world(?), there's no way contact lenses, even spell stone one are, plus using the knowledge of the Dragonborn eye mana against them. Plus Cardinal starscream really didn't need any prompting to start laying out pretty much every thing the Church has been up to even if he felt that he held all the cards.
And with all the back up James brought to the party it's really no brainer that Stellaclamor nor any of his goon squad was getting out of there, plus Prim's request of 'please, resist' shows she is in no mood to humour these guys anymore, and Stellaclamor probably isn't even the one who killed Iris, though he obviously had a hand in it, so I can only imagine how she'll be once they find and capture the guy, my money's on the Archbitch-op's bodyguard and head of the Church's black-ops group.
Plus we get to see Celestine make not only two royal decrees for the arrest of the Church's entire upper leadership, but also her second decree as Goddess Reborn to brand the Archbishop and the Cardinals as heretics, which has been a long time coming as even with all the other crap the Church has been up to they have also murdered other Dragonborn other than Iris, some of whom Celestine would have known and even considered friends, so she is not holding herself back with them anymore.
Also the little bit with Claudia 'crowning' James and looking so proud of him, I think there's starting to be more there, plus it's not the only 'coronation' that'll happen to him either.
And of course there was Tiffany and the Rebels showdown with the Ardon Loyalists and pull off a devastating and decisive victory as with this Roxella probably doesn't have much left to throw at the Rebels, plus she's also just lost her top military commanders, two by death and the other by desertion, and given her reaction to the outcome, she's most likely going to do something really foolish in a last ditch attempt to 'win' rather than just surrender with dignity, I mean is not going to work but still we all know she will.
Also nice reference with the Yamcha Death Pose meme, I had to reread it a bit to confirm it but still had me laughing. XD
As always great chapter, looking forward and good luck with the next one, and once again Congrats on the 4th Anniversary, looking forward to the fallout of James' exposure of the Church's corruption and the reactions from various peoples such as the Lords and regular citizens, and I doubt most of the Cardinals are just going to roll over and accept their new status as the heretics, plus with whatever Arnold is up to with his plan for the Archbishop, provided he can get him before someone else does.
P.s Here's to many more years with this Fic. XD
6/13 c123 Zet4
thanks for the chapter!
man, it's 4 years already? how time has passed...
this chapter is wild.
thanks for the chapter!
man, it's 4 years already? how time has passed...
this chapter is wild.
6/13 c123 Project Pseudonym
The classic scheme of "I expose all your crimes via monologuing." It's always a treat to see when it's executed competently.
Celestine finally has the green light to pull "I'm the fucking goddess" card and accuse the Church of heresy. Which means she can now pull out all the secrets the Church has been keeping through any means necessary and the lords won't be able to protest unless they become the next target.
The classic scheme of "I expose all your crimes via monologuing." It's always a treat to see when it's executed competently.
Celestine finally has the green light to pull "I'm the fucking goddess" card and accuse the Church of heresy. Which means she can now pull out all the secrets the Church has been keeping through any means necessary and the lords won't be able to protest unless they become the next target.
6/13 c123 xXwolfsterXx644
Amazing chapter dude as usual James managed to deal with the church and Tiffany got her victory definitely Can't wait for the next update and see what happens next with James
Amazing chapter dude as usual James managed to deal with the church and Tiffany got her victory definitely Can't wait for the next update and see what happens next with James
6/13 c123 Guest
Hell ya!
Hell ya!
6/13 c123 Guest
Loved this chapter and happy about the update. Arnold is plotting something and I hope it blows up in his face and channer finally allies with James cause he isn’t like his father he set the chance to be better his sister is lazy but hey she isn’t evil per say unlike his father and brothers they all deserve death and I can’t wait for it. All in all loved this chapter and can’t wait for the next one and I hope James outsmarts Arnold.
Loved this chapter and happy about the update. Arnold is plotting something and I hope it blows up in his face and channer finally allies with James cause he isn’t like his father he set the chance to be better his sister is lazy but hey she isn’t evil per say unlike his father and brothers they all deserve death and I can’t wait for it. All in all loved this chapter and can’t wait for the next one and I hope James outsmarts Arnold.
6/13 c123 Warrior of the Forbidden Flame
Going to guess that Arnold is only guessing on his most probable move and vastly underestimating him... again
Going to guess that Arnold is only guessing on his most probable move and vastly underestimating him... again