for Deathberry's Journey3/13/2023 c24 GHETTOKINGKAI
ok so im still skimming through most of this story cause this pretty much has had no real big changes from canon yet, i also am glad that you actually did bring harribel back into the harem as she was orginally. Im also hoping though if well see ichigos use of his hollow powers sooner than later and hopefully its not gonna be some bullshit trope of him not having control over those powers yet cause it just doesnt make sense that hes had all this training and skill building here in this story, and wouldn't have control of his inner hollow. I really hated that aspect of ichgios character in canon as it made him such a weak and bitchmade character when he couldnt accept the fact that he had a hollow zanpakuto spirit. So hopefully hes not gonna be some lame ass pushover in some of these upcoming fights like he was in canon.
ok so im still skimming through most of this story cause this pretty much has had no real big changes from canon yet, i also am glad that you actually did bring harribel back into the harem as she was orginally. Im also hoping though if well see ichigos use of his hollow powers sooner than later and hopefully its not gonna be some bullshit trope of him not having control over those powers yet cause it just doesnt make sense that hes had all this training and skill building here in this story, and wouldn't have control of his inner hollow. I really hated that aspect of ichgios character in canon as it made him such a weak and bitchmade character when he couldnt accept the fact that he had a hollow zanpakuto spirit. So hopefully hes not gonna be some lame ass pushover in some of these upcoming fights like he was in canon.
3/12/2023 c11 GHETTOKINGKAI
tbh the stories alright so far, slightly better than canon but no real changes yet which im hoping for, thats why im kinda skimming through alot of these earlier chapters as i dont really care for an entire retelling of the orginal beginning of the manga, even with some of the twists you've made to canon. Im also quite disappointed that harribel isn't in the harem considering that she was the main pairing in the original telling of this story, i much prefer her over orhime and rangiku. Both of them are overly fucking annoying, and despite them being two of the hottest chicks in the manga, i personally think they pale in comparison to harribel in every way. Yoruichi being in the harem is honestly one of the only reasons i can tolerate this story so far along with the fact that you've at least given ichigo pretty much all his powers here and have made his heritage known to him early on which i can appreciate. I just hope this isn't some boring copy and paste of the entire fucking story with minimal to no unique changes. I personally have a huge love/hate relationship with canon bleach, primarily centering around how obnoxious and ignorant ichigos character is to everything spiritual, his family history and his annoying prudish fucking behavior with women. So i have faith that you'll make him more badass, more calm and confident and also more aware of shit that he wasn't originally in canon.
tbh the stories alright so far, slightly better than canon but no real changes yet which im hoping for, thats why im kinda skimming through alot of these earlier chapters as i dont really care for an entire retelling of the orginal beginning of the manga, even with some of the twists you've made to canon. Im also quite disappointed that harribel isn't in the harem considering that she was the main pairing in the original telling of this story, i much prefer her over orhime and rangiku. Both of them are overly fucking annoying, and despite them being two of the hottest chicks in the manga, i personally think they pale in comparison to harribel in every way. Yoruichi being in the harem is honestly one of the only reasons i can tolerate this story so far along with the fact that you've at least given ichigo pretty much all his powers here and have made his heritage known to him early on which i can appreciate. I just hope this isn't some boring copy and paste of the entire fucking story with minimal to no unique changes. I personally have a huge love/hate relationship with canon bleach, primarily centering around how obnoxious and ignorant ichigos character is to everything spiritual, his family history and his annoying prudish fucking behavior with women. So i have faith that you'll make him more badass, more calm and confident and also more aware of shit that he wasn't originally in canon.
2/1/2023 c7 Coolkid12100
Right this is just stupid now. Ichigo has not only been training for over 5 years fighting captain class shinigami as well as his inner hollow and zanpakto but also trained for a year with the zero squad and yet he got smacked around by a newborn hollow… It’s clear ur terrible at writing and had no idea how to do these arcs after making your ichigo so over powered. Next time just don’t even try writing ur own FanFic…
Right this is just stupid now. Ichigo has not only been training for over 5 years fighting captain class shinigami as well as his inner hollow and zanpakto but also trained for a year with the zero squad and yet he got smacked around by a newborn hollow… It’s clear ur terrible at writing and had no idea how to do these arcs after making your ichigo so over powered. Next time just don’t even try writing ur own FanFic…
1/30/2023 c31 marquis.shax
wow you've really gone out of your way to paint Renji as being extremely jealous almost like that of a husband who just caught his wife in bed with another man lol
wow you've really gone out of your way to paint Renji as being extremely jealous almost like that of a husband who just caught his wife in bed with another man lol
1/30/2023 c24 marquis.shax
for the so called 'Genius" he is Kisuke sure was a fucking moron. He put the Hogyoku into Rukia who he knows will end up being brought back to Soul Society which means he was basically just handing it to Aizen rather than just keeping it himself as clearly Aizen wasn't able to take it directly from Kisuke or he'd have done so
for the so called 'Genius" he is Kisuke sure was a fucking moron. He put the Hogyoku into Rukia who he knows will end up being brought back to Soul Society which means he was basically just handing it to Aizen rather than just keeping it himself as clearly Aizen wasn't able to take it directly from Kisuke or he'd have done so
1/30/2023 c21 marquis.shax
if you're going to stick with the old man Yama not allowing Ichigo to live then you should go back and edit out the whole Zero Squad training since they wouldn't train Ichigo if they didn't think it was what the Soul King wants or in the case of your story what SK TOLD them to do
if you're going to stick with the old man Yama not allowing Ichigo to live then you should go back and edit out the whole Zero Squad training since they wouldn't train Ichigo if they didn't think it was what the Soul King wants or in the case of your story what SK TOLD them to do
1/29/2023 c16 marquis.shax
you should skip the Bount Arc after all it has absolutely NO bearing on Canon and is one of the worst filler arcs EVER
you should skip the Bount Arc after all it has absolutely NO bearing on Canon and is one of the worst filler arcs EVER
1/29/2023 c5 marquis.shax
so Kisuke is still pulling his usual bullshit with Ichigo and Rukia lol. Also I really don't think Soul Society would be able to do shit to Ichigo since the Soul King already knows about him and even had his personal protectors train Ichigo so Yama or C46 ordering him killed they're violating the word of the Soul King
so Kisuke is still pulling his usual bullshit with Ichigo and Rukia lol. Also I really don't think Soul Society would be able to do shit to Ichigo since the Soul King already knows about him and even had his personal protectors train Ichigo so Yama or C46 ordering him killed they're violating the word of the Soul King
12/27/2022 c2 Guest
I find it like an exat copy of anoter fanfiction Ichigo awakens. And you are rushing a bit too much. You haven't even said his zampakuto names. But its still good
I find it like an exat copy of anoter fanfiction Ichigo awakens. And you are rushing a bit too much. You haven't even said his zampakuto names. But its still good
12/18/2022 c29 SacredKoopa
I personally hope Mayuri dies a horrible death, he's someone I despise more than Aizen. Plus, Nemu deserves to be treated by someone much better than Mayuri, like Ichigo perhaps.
I personally hope Mayuri dies a horrible death, he's someone I despise more than Aizen. Plus, Nemu deserves to be treated by someone much better than Mayuri, like Ichigo perhaps.
12/13/2022 c7 Guest
unnecessary struggling against hollow Sora. Dude's not an adjuchas, let alone a vasto lorde, so why would Ichigo even remotely struggle against him?
unnecessary struggling against hollow Sora. Dude's not an adjuchas, let alone a vasto lorde, so why would Ichigo even remotely struggle against him?
12/13/2022 c5 Guest
Alright, Rukia lost her powers the exact same way as a different fic here, same wording and everything. Are writers using a template or just copying eachother?
Alright, Rukia lost her powers the exact same way as a different fic here, same wording and everything. Are writers using a template or just copying eachother?