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12/13/2022 c4 Guest
I forgot to mention, if you have enough reishi, powers like reality warping or decay won't do anything to you as you're able to literally ignore their effects with sheer brute force.
Another thing I forgot to mention, the soul king is literally a desecrated corpse, a consecrated corpse battery, if you will. Talking with the soul king is as fruitless as talking with an actual battery. They won't respond, because they are inanimate, non-sentient, let alone sapient.
12/13/2022 c3 Guest
Only reason Ryujin Jakka is so strong is because the captain commander is strong as hell, like near-transcendental-being strong.
Hyojinmaru is literally OP as hell due to being a reality warping weapon, what with the ability to freeze everything up to and including concepts.
12/13/2022 c2 Guest
ths plotline with chad here is literally word for word the exact same in at least 3 different stories that I've read. Why do so many writers reuse the same everything here?
It's genuinely a straight up "skip this shit, seen it all before" kinda thing.
12/13/2022 c34 ikusatsunagi
Thx for the chapter
12/13/2022 c34 robertroy1
can't wait for next chapter
12/2/2022 c11 rgriffin8999
i don't think you have to keep saying/typing what the name of zanpakuto and other Japanese words mean after you write them just put there meaning in the author's note also why are you doing the sub names of things instead of what they did in the did in the dub since that's what you're writing in almost word for word.
12/1/2022 c11 thedarkwolf95
Nice ,the Harem's not too big, though Rangiku might be too much.
11/27/2022 c33 Guest
Please update your stores more please continue with theme I like theme.
11/25/2022 c13 Guest
How did he struggle let alone get injured against grand fisher when he was trained by kisuke and the fucking ZERO SQUAD
11/22/2022 c33 erasenpai946
I really find Momo very annoying but I'm excited for Ichigo vs Kenpachi

PS: Just one more thing besides Yoruichi, Orihime and Rukia we will have Rangiku, Soi fong, Unohana, and Lisa from the Vaizards in the harem and of course Halibel and Nell, and maybe Halibel's 3 helpers
11/20/2022 c33 4halo4hire
You spend a lot of time trying to play to an episodic story format instead of just telling the story. You probably would have been far further into the timeline if you stopped sweating the finite details that we, the readers, don't need. Consistent flashbacks that give information that could have easily been boiled down to a couple of sentences, giving us perspectives of characters not even relevant to the plot, stuff like that is unnecessary and will only stress you out in the long run.
11/15/2022 c19 Mystery Food X
I think it's definitely THE BEST if you make cooking crossover with these characters:
Bleach - Orihime Inoue
Persona 3 - Fuuka Yamagishi
Persona 4 - All female members of Investigation Team
Persona 5 - Yusuke Kitagawa
I call this: ULTIMATE MYSTERY FOOD X: DOOMSDAY EDITION!
11/17/2022 c32 rgriffin8999
Could you make this a ichiruki story only
11/14/2022 c33 Inner World
Does anyone have pictures on how Ao and Aka look like? IF possible, also along with Juha Bach and Zangetsu?
11/16/2022 c7 IronClawedDemon
You seem to really struggle with consistency, you really should hold off and insane amounts of training just to have him struggle with quite literally the most basic hollows.

How could he have a bankai or trained with Kisuke for years and ever struggle against Sora.
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