
10/22/2022 c31 SeanHicks4
Interesting AU, I tend to only review at the most recent chapter but got a little distracted last night and couldn't finish my review, so I think my only notes would've been a few rough spots of grammar and spelling, some of the descriptions weren't that clear to me, and I think that the filler and anime only characters, like that Shinigami at the graveyard aren't all that great an addition to your story. Only other thing I can think of being relevant is I like how you added Orihime to the harem after you adopted it since the original version seemed like it was bashing her in the description.
Interesting AU, I tend to only review at the most recent chapter but got a little distracted last night and couldn't finish my review, so I think my only notes would've been a few rough spots of grammar and spelling, some of the descriptions weren't that clear to me, and I think that the filler and anime only characters, like that Shinigami at the graveyard aren't all that great an addition to your story. Only other thing I can think of being relevant is I like how you added Orihime to the harem after you adopted it since the original version seemed like it was bashing her in the description.
10/14/2022 c31 BenJMeyer
Please update. This is a great story that I would love for it to keep going.
Please update. This is a great story that I would love for it to keep going.
10/14/2022 c7
6Hikori Takeo
Hey Sounga,
How are you? I hope you are doing great. With BLEACH getting its Anime continuation, I have decided to return to the BLEACH Fandom and started reading this just an hour ago.
I have to say I am... perplexed with how you executed Ichigo's Combat with Sora. I vaguely recall you wanting Ichigo to struggle in his battles, and that's fine. But, logic dictates that with the sheer amount of power he had, Ichigo should not have any kind of problem whatsoever in his combat until the Hueco Mundo Invasion Arc. Yes, even when he's invading Soul Society, Ichigo with his vast arsenal of Hados, Bakudos and Kekkai (Barriers and Seals) should at most require Zangetsu or Getsu no Ikari's Shikai only to defeat Kenpachi and Byakuya.
Yes, Ichigo should by all means have an EZ ride battling opponents until he's gone to Hueco Mundo, or to be precise, Ulquiorra Cifer. Ulquiorra and the ones above him are the only ones capable of pushing Ichigo to require his Resurreccion (not Segunda Etapa mind you - that's reserved for the stronger Sternritters) or Bankai.
I sincerely hope there are other reasons outside of you wanting "Ichigo to struggle in his battles" for Ichigo to poorly deal with Sora, and until you explain them to me, I won't continue reading this past Arc 1 Part 4. I'm sorry, but please understand that the execution of the Ichigo vs Sora does not at all match the things Ichigo has been up to in the entire Prologue.
I will be honest, I am quite miffed with your execution, and as the original writer of this story, I want to know why you did so. I shall await your reply in the PMs or Discord DMs.
Sincerely,
Ichigo Oga

Hey Sounga,
How are you? I hope you are doing great. With BLEACH getting its Anime continuation, I have decided to return to the BLEACH Fandom and started reading this just an hour ago.
I have to say I am... perplexed with how you executed Ichigo's Combat with Sora. I vaguely recall you wanting Ichigo to struggle in his battles, and that's fine. But, logic dictates that with the sheer amount of power he had, Ichigo should not have any kind of problem whatsoever in his combat until the Hueco Mundo Invasion Arc. Yes, even when he's invading Soul Society, Ichigo with his vast arsenal of Hados, Bakudos and Kekkai (Barriers and Seals) should at most require Zangetsu or Getsu no Ikari's Shikai only to defeat Kenpachi and Byakuya.
Yes, Ichigo should by all means have an EZ ride battling opponents until he's gone to Hueco Mundo, or to be precise, Ulquiorra Cifer. Ulquiorra and the ones above him are the only ones capable of pushing Ichigo to require his Resurreccion (not Segunda Etapa mind you - that's reserved for the stronger Sternritters) or Bankai.
I sincerely hope there are other reasons outside of you wanting "Ichigo to struggle in his battles" for Ichigo to poorly deal with Sora, and until you explain them to me, I won't continue reading this past Arc 1 Part 4. I'm sorry, but please understand that the execution of the Ichigo vs Sora does not at all match the things Ichigo has been up to in the entire Prologue.
I will be honest, I am quite miffed with your execution, and as the original writer of this story, I want to know why you did so. I shall await your reply in the PMs or Discord DMs.
Sincerely,
Ichigo Oga
9/29/2022 c31 Kalavash
This is really good, I hope you keep going. Is it wrong that I hope you have something painful planned for Mayuri?
This is really good, I hope you keep going. Is it wrong that I hope you have something painful planned for Mayuri?
8/31/2022 c31
1IvanTheEnigma
Having the blades attached by a chain is like Uzui's Nichirin blades from demon slayer. The defensive move he pulled is something Gyutaro did with his rotating blood sickles.

Having the blades attached by a chain is like Uzui's Nichirin blades from demon slayer. The defensive move he pulled is something Gyutaro did with his rotating blood sickles.
8/22/2022 c18 Requiescat1nPace
You gave Ichigo Shikai. You gave him Bankai. You have him Resurreccion. You gave him Segunda Etapa. You gave him both Bluts. You had him trained for years by elite fighters AND the royal guard.
And he struggles against a gillian?
Dude what powerscaling metrics are you following?
You gave Ichigo Shikai. You gave him Bankai. You have him Resurreccion. You gave him Segunda Etapa. You gave him both Bluts. You had him trained for years by elite fighters AND the royal guard.
And he struggles against a gillian?
Dude what powerscaling metrics are you following?
8/18/2022 c31 Uzumaki Shadowfox
I am loving this fanfic. please keep up the amazing work and update when you can.
I am loving this fanfic. please keep up the amazing work and update when you can.
8/6/2022 c31
10Fanficlover2017
Great story so far but this chapter was way too short update soon please must have more!

Great story so far but this chapter was way too short update soon please must have more!
8/2/2022 c31 Guest
Hey could you update this story please and thank you also could you update your black clover story to.
Hey could you update this story please and thank you also could you update your black clover story to.
8/3/2022 c31 Rider126
Are you doing any work on Anti Dragon Slayer? I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter for that story.
Are you doing any work on Anti Dragon Slayer? I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter for that story.
8/3/2022 c31 codeninja676
Please for the love of all that is holy steer away from canon or show what would happen in canon if Ichigo was this broken, Ichigo should be at least Byakuya Senkei level at this point considering he's mastered 3 Zanpakuto and is too tier in the 4 main categories of Shinigami, this whole arc has been dragged out for no good reason. What's the point of giving Ichigo all of that training and power early on of he's only barely stronger than Canon?
Like seriously how do you not see that you killed all tension by giving Ichigo too much power early on? Just lean into it and use it as a way to focus on character development over fights we know he can end nearly everyone without trying so lean into that and use it as vehicle to develop the people around him and his relationship with them.
I'm following this story because if the potential it has but you need to rip off the training wheels you had a good flow goin in the prologue but fell into the crutch of just sticking 99% to canon with minute changes.
If you need to throw Canon out the window to make the story flow better you need to do this you cannot stick with what doesn't work eternally.
Please for the love of all that is holy steer away from canon or show what would happen in canon if Ichigo was this broken, Ichigo should be at least Byakuya Senkei level at this point considering he's mastered 3 Zanpakuto and is too tier in the 4 main categories of Shinigami, this whole arc has been dragged out for no good reason. What's the point of giving Ichigo all of that training and power early on of he's only barely stronger than Canon?
Like seriously how do you not see that you killed all tension by giving Ichigo too much power early on? Just lean into it and use it as a way to focus on character development over fights we know he can end nearly everyone without trying so lean into that and use it as vehicle to develop the people around him and his relationship with them.
I'm following this story because if the potential it has but you need to rip off the training wheels you had a good flow goin in the prologue but fell into the crutch of just sticking 99% to canon with minute changes.
If you need to throw Canon out the window to make the story flow better you need to do this you cannot stick with what doesn't work eternally.
8/3/2022 c8 codeninja676
So far this has been an almost 1to1 with the original series outside of the prologue you know you're allowed to skip uninteresting stuff right? You also laid out that you plan on doing the Bount filler arc which not only does it mess up canon it also contributes so little to the overall story and characters that you can cut it completely and lose absolutely nothing. Please go creative with the arcs and stop following the script 1:1 it makes it look like you're just novelizing the anime instead of making your own unique twist on the story.
So far this has been an almost 1to1 with the original series outside of the prologue you know you're allowed to skip uninteresting stuff right? You also laid out that you plan on doing the Bount filler arc which not only does it mess up canon it also contributes so little to the overall story and characters that you can cut it completely and lose absolutely nothing. Please go creative with the arcs and stop following the script 1:1 it makes it look like you're just novelizing the anime instead of making your own unique twist on the story.
7/15/2022 c31 Andrew
Awesome story loved the fight did you base ichigos blocking move off of the hyuga rotation technique from Naruto that’s what I think anyway hope you update again love this story.
Awesome story loved the fight did you base ichigos blocking move off of the hyuga rotation technique from Naruto that’s what I think anyway hope you update again love this story.