for Unintended Consequences (The Great Wandout)11/10 c31 csheila
Minor complaint was Sirius flashed him before apply the piss de grau.
Maybe it made Albus lonelier
Minor complaint was Sirius flashed him before apply the piss de grau.
Maybe it made Albus lonelier
10/25 c37 Hectorsmom
The entire story is lovely, but this chapter is awesome. Had me weeping the entire way. I judge my stories by how much emotion they wring from me. This one is way up there. Good weeping. Thanks for giving Neville this gift. Fabulous writing!
The entire story is lovely, but this chapter is awesome. Had me weeping the entire way. I judge my stories by how much emotion they wring from me. This one is way up there. Good weeping. Thanks for giving Neville this gift. Fabulous writing!
10/10 c38 
6Rosa Mundi
That was wonderful. I enjoyed it very much. Now I have to go back through and make note of all your recommendations. I was too caught up on the story to take notes at the time.
6Rosa MundiThat was wonderful. I enjoyed it very much. Now I have to go back through and make note of all your recommendations. I was too caught up on the story to take notes at the time.
8/18 c5 20Meester Lee
Re: Chapter 5:
All these non-functional magical tools!
It seems to me that there’d be a great opportunity for Muggle tool-makers and vendors to cash in on a new market!
Hey, Vernon! Opportunity awaits! The Wizarding World needs drills! Will Grunnings be ready, or will you let the chance for sales and profits slip through your fingers?
20Meester LeeRe: Chapter 5:
All these non-functional magical tools!
It seems to me that there’d be a great opportunity for Muggle tool-makers and vendors to cash in on a new market!
Hey, Vernon! Opportunity awaits! The Wizarding World needs drills! Will Grunnings be ready, or will you let the chance for sales and profits slip through your fingers?
7/4 c38 33burmafrd
This is one of the very best HP stories I have ever read
I really have no bones to pick with anything you wrote at all
just beautiful
The part with Frank and Alice was so touching
33burmafrdThis is one of the very best HP stories I have ever read
I really have no bones to pick with anything you wrote at all
just beautiful
The part with Frank and Alice was so touching
7/3 c38 Sensorybuzz
Love this story. Its my second time reading and I enjoyed it as much the second time as I did the first.
Love this story. Its my second time reading and I enjoyed it as much the second time as I did the first.
6/29 c38 Guest
As outstanding as I have come to expect from your talent. Thank you for this and all your stories.
As outstanding as I have come to expect from your talent. Thank you for this and all your stories.
6/28 c19 Guest
He would resell the wands for a starting price of 2,500 for the buyers holding Purchase Permit cards to 5,000 for the undocumented ones making far more than Harry's team... he'd have happily paid 20 times Potter's asking price. WHY are the Goblins and Harry practically giving away wands? Freely allowing distributors, not crafters, in other countries to take in a gazillion percent profit? They'd have to sell 5 ziillion wands to the small wiz population and still not break even. Surely they could have bought a seat on the wizengamot for 1 zillion. Interesting and well written story. Thanks
He would resell the wands for a starting price of 2,500 for the buyers holding Purchase Permit cards to 5,000 for the undocumented ones making far more than Harry's team... he'd have happily paid 20 times Potter's asking price. WHY are the Goblins and Harry practically giving away wands? Freely allowing distributors, not crafters, in other countries to take in a gazillion percent profit? They'd have to sell 5 ziillion wands to the small wiz population and still not break even. Surely they could have bought a seat on the wizengamot for 1 zillion. Interesting and well written story. Thanks
6/17 c38 divvycrip
Bloody brilliant. Loved the eye brothers, loved the healers. Very much loved the elves. Shame Dumbles had such an easy end.
Very much loved Frank and Alices day.
Bloody brilliant. Loved the eye brothers, loved the healers. Very much loved the elves. Shame Dumbles had such an easy end.
Very much loved Frank and Alices day.
6/16 c31 divvycrip
I was surprised no-body asked Amos if he wanted the pre-Dunbledore traditions or the massive changes he made from tradition
I was surprised no-body asked Amos if he wanted the pre-Dunbledore traditions or the massive changes he made from tradition
6/13 c14 tricorvus1
I’m old with a very young sense of humor. Ping pong balls remind me of captain kangaroo and Mr moose and the ping pong balls raining down.
This story continues excellent
Rock on
I’m old with a very young sense of humor. Ping pong balls remind me of captain kangaroo and Mr moose and the ping pong balls raining down.
This story continues excellent
Rock on