for The House of Potter-Greengrass9/4/2023 c10 Anee-1
After how clear it's become that Amelia is hiding a lot from him, and actually lied to him abitu Greengrass pushing the alliance, when in fact it was her, I was expecting Harry to be seriously pissed with Amelia. To demand the truth from her in threat of her losing Regency. Harry has spent his entire life being manipulated, and while he does want to be close to Daphne, he would be furious at Amelia using his feelings and weak personal position to further her ambition, which is exactly what she's done here. I expect maybe Harry is waiting to see a bit more, but the fact alone that Amelia is also keeping information about Volds name from him as shown in the previous tea party should get him furious. He's drawn his justified temper in remarkable quick. Is this all building to a huge explosion and implosion of trust between Harry and Amelia? Or have you written off Harry's feelings and he's now absolutely fine to used like a pawn, despite the explicit words saying he's not OK with that. His thoughts are not matching his actions. Looking forward to see where you go with this.
After how clear it's become that Amelia is hiding a lot from him, and actually lied to him abitu Greengrass pushing the alliance, when in fact it was her, I was expecting Harry to be seriously pissed with Amelia. To demand the truth from her in threat of her losing Regency. Harry has spent his entire life being manipulated, and while he does want to be close to Daphne, he would be furious at Amelia using his feelings and weak personal position to further her ambition, which is exactly what she's done here. I expect maybe Harry is waiting to see a bit more, but the fact alone that Amelia is also keeping information about Volds name from him as shown in the previous tea party should get him furious. He's drawn his justified temper in remarkable quick. Is this all building to a huge explosion and implosion of trust between Harry and Amelia? Or have you written off Harry's feelings and he's now absolutely fine to used like a pawn, despite the explicit words saying he's not OK with that. His thoughts are not matching his actions. Looking forward to see where you go with this.
9/4/2023 c6 Anee-1
Not a fan of Amelia and Harry's healers lying to him about his scar, especially after everything he's been through. Amelia failed Harry, and now wants his trust, whilst she is lying to him? Yeah, that's going to blow up in her face. The excuse of "he's just a kid" and "Don't want to upset him" became irrelevant long before he went to Hogwarts after what he suffered. Starting their relationship on a lie will doom it. Amelia and Tonks better come clean to Harry ASAP.
Not a fan of Amelia and Harry's healers lying to him about his scar, especially after everything he's been through. Amelia failed Harry, and now wants his trust, whilst she is lying to him? Yeah, that's going to blow up in her face. The excuse of "he's just a kid" and "Don't want to upset him" became irrelevant long before he went to Hogwarts after what he suffered. Starting their relationship on a lie will doom it. Amelia and Tonks better come clean to Harry ASAP.
9/1/2023 c58 
14AnAnya Contd
superbly written! absolutely loved it from the first word of the first chapter to the very end...
14AnAnya Contdsuperbly written! absolutely loved it from the first word of the first chapter to the very end...
8/30/2023 c58 Raymondjay41
Absolutely a true masterpiece! Thank you fir persevering in writing it to the finish!
Absolutely a true masterpiece! Thank you fir persevering in writing it to the finish!
8/23/2023 c1 23VashonBeader
I really like this opening, and am completely hooked. Thank you for sharing!
23VashonBeaderI really like this opening, and am completely hooked. Thank you for sharing!
8/17/2023 c58 Guest
Thank you
Thank you
8/15/2023 c47 Guest
I truly love this story Thank you
I truly love this story Thank you
8/15/2023 c58 12Freudentraene
I have now caught up (with a bit of a delay). Wonderful story! You can be really proud of yourself for creating this colossus (over 500,000 words!), not to mention with so many unique ideas and high quality!
I would love to read another Haphne story from you sometime, but I can also understand if you feel like something else :)
12FreudentraeneI have now caught up (with a bit of a delay). Wonderful story! You can be really proud of yourself for creating this colossus (over 500,000 words!), not to mention with so many unique ideas and high quality!
I would love to read another Haphne story from you sometime, but I can also understand if you feel like something else :)
8/11/2023 c58 Kushka
Great story
Great story
8/10/2023 c58 frisbeeg70
Enjoyable fic. I saw in one of your ANs that some people thought you used too many timeskips. Just goes to show you'll never make everyone happy. I thought you should have used more and, if anything, I thought there was a little too much fluff and slice of life. So, I figure that probably means you got it about right.
Enjoyable fic. I saw in one of your ANs that some people thought you used too many timeskips. Just goes to show you'll never make everyone happy. I thought you should have used more and, if anything, I thought there was a little too much fluff and slice of life. So, I figure that probably means you got it about right.