for The House of Potter-Greengrass6/21/2023 c54 notyourpapa
Happy to hear that you are better. Missed you and your creative stories.
Take care of your self.
Still love your stories, this chapter made me tear up.
Happy to hear that you are better. Missed you and your creative stories.
Take care of your self.
Still love your stories, this chapter made me tear up.
26/21/2023 c55 TheFiction101
Hey man your health is always the most important thing. Hope you feel better!
Hey man your health is always the most important thing. Hope you feel better!
6/21/2023 c55 Terebellida
Very nice
…waived him away… should be "waved", I think
… test his medal … should be "metal"
Very nice
…waived him away… should be "waved", I think
… test his medal … should be "metal"
6/17/2023 c54 Pillager61
love at first site (sight). weary (wary). Dean went him to (to him).
A few more examples of silly errors.
Q: are you have mildly dislexia?
Q: do you have a Beta?
MOST IMPORTANTLY. Q: when might you begin updating again!?
I know it's not always easy to write between your muse coming and going, you have a family ( Pretty sure that's how write very good Romance parts), and working for a living. Having several stories going at once could continue as well.
PLEASE KEEP WRITING!
love at first site (sight). weary (wary). Dean went him to (to him).
A few more examples of silly errors.
Q: are you have mildly dislexia?
Q: do you have a Beta?
MOST IMPORTANTLY. Q: when might you begin updating again!?
I know it's not always easy to write between your muse coming and going, you have a family ( Pretty sure that's how write very good Romance parts), and working for a living. Having several stories going at once could continue as well.
PLEASE KEEP WRITING!
6/17/2023 c53 Pillager61
The last 4 lines show just how HUMAN you make these characters.
Some of your tenses are messed up; 'Rose vs Raised' and several others I've just grabbed at and moved on.
A Truly Fantastic Story!
The last 4 lines show just how HUMAN you make these characters.
Some of your tenses are messed up; 'Rose vs Raised' and several others I've just grabbed at and moved on.
A Truly Fantastic Story!
6/9/2023 c1 Aquoria
This story is incredible. I don’t usually leave reviews, but wow. Please continue with this story—it is highly appreciated and enjoyed by most of us here, I mean—look at all those comments! I look forward to the later chapters.
This story is incredible. I don’t usually leave reviews, but wow. Please continue with this story—it is highly appreciated and enjoyed by most of us here, I mean—look at all those comments! I look forward to the later chapters.
6/2/2023 c14 Sasha Starr
People are reading because your story is good. You are a good author. Sasha Starr
People are reading because your story is good. You are a good author. Sasha Starr
5/30/2023 c36 SilverGoldo
You made a slight typo here.
In the meeting with Croaker, you wrote Neville's grandmother as "Minister Bones"
You made a slight typo here.
In the meeting with Croaker, you wrote Neville's grandmother as "Minister Bones"
5/30/2023 c54 Simonrf89
Mate I normally don’t do reviews but for you I’ll make an exception. You are an incredible storyteller and I look forward to more from you and this story when you find time to finish it.
Mate I normally don’t do reviews but for you I’ll make an exception. You are an incredible storyteller and I look forward to more from you and this story when you find time to finish it.