for The House of Potter-Greengrass8/3/2024 c58 Falconis Umbra
nice one! job well done.
many fictions I read were all about voldemort,. the training and his end.
your story was a nice change. Dumblemort was a good idea match .
i will look into your profile. maybe. there a similat fictions .
goodby, good sir
nice one! job well done.
many fictions I read were all about voldemort,. the training and his end.
your story was a nice change. Dumblemort was a good idea match .
i will look into your profile. maybe. there a similat fictions .
goodby, good sir
8/1/2024 c58 A
Thank you
Thank you
7/25/2024 c37 Guest
Engagement rings are always worn on the left hand, there's nothing unusual about that.
Engagement rings are always worn on the left hand, there's nothing unusual about that.
7/22/2024 c25 
55Taliesin The Eternal Bard
Just an fyi English currency is based on (Point Sterling,) not gold. U.S currency is based on the gold standard!
55Taliesin The Eternal BardJust an fyi English currency is based on (Point Sterling,) not gold. U.S currency is based on the gold standard!
7/8/2024 c58 Osmodious
Great story…really interesting ideas, good plot, nice character development, some nifty action, excellent balance of dialogue and exposition, and just well written. A few minor editing issues (missing or out of order words), and some small misspellings, but nothing egregious. Thanks for posting!
Great story…really interesting ideas, good plot, nice character development, some nifty action, excellent balance of dialogue and exposition, and just well written. A few minor editing issues (missing or out of order words), and some small misspellings, but nothing egregious. Thanks for posting!
7/8/2024 c22 Guest
minerva just sounds stupid in this chapter School rules don't allow her to punish attempted murder ? Same for Amelia defering to school rules
minerva just sounds stupid in this chapter School rules don't allow her to punish attempted murder ? Same for Amelia defering to school rules
7/2/2024 c31 Mikeblade
wait who made the contract between the blacks and parkinson if sirius was the regent even when he was in prison then said contract is not legal.
wait who made the contract between the blacks and parkinson if sirius was the regent even when he was in prison then said contract is not legal.
7/2/2024 c10 Mikeblade
i hate how umbridge interupts and is not told to shout the fuck up since she should not be saying anything at all she not a lord of a house she does not have a vote at all and they don't let secretaries say shit so why does she get to do it.
i hate how umbridge interupts and is not told to shout the fuck up since she should not be saying anything at all she not a lord of a house she does not have a vote at all and they don't let secretaries say shit so why does she get to do it.
6/29/2024 c6 Osmodious
These early chapters are a bit hard going…Harry is being such a little douche that he is nigh unlikeable. And it feels like you are setting the stage for Dumbles to get away with everything, at least for a while, just like every other story on this site (this part isn’t a you thing, it really is the case in like every story, and many times it is so unbelievable…). Hoping Harry calms his ass and actually stays in a room and asks questions instead of being a little dick and running off constantly…I would want to know the whys and realize that sulking off on my own wouldn’t get me those answers, but maybe your Harry is a bit of an idiot. We’ll see, I guess.
These early chapters are a bit hard going…Harry is being such a little douche that he is nigh unlikeable. And it feels like you are setting the stage for Dumbles to get away with everything, at least for a while, just like every other story on this site (this part isn’t a you thing, it really is the case in like every story, and many times it is so unbelievable…). Hoping Harry calms his ass and actually stays in a room and asks questions instead of being a little dick and running off constantly…I would want to know the whys and realize that sulking off on my own wouldn’t get me those answers, but maybe your Harry is a bit of an idiot. We’ll see, I guess.
6/29/2024 c49 Taliesin The Eternal Bard
Just an FYI You're confusing the aorta The carotid artery Amilias wounds
Just an FYI You're confusing the aorta The carotid artery Amilias wounds
6/25/2024 c4 DodgyReptile
Just a wee detail you got wrong,
In the UK, check ups are done in kilogrammes and metres.
Other than that loving the story
Just a wee detail you got wrong,
In the UK, check ups are done in kilogrammes and metres.
Other than that loving the story