for The House of Potter-Greengrass1/19 c58 Ibelieveyou4
Was nervous going into a 510k word story. Alot of times long stories tend to drag things out way to much. This amazing story did not have that. There were no real points where I felt bored. The characters are fleshed out great. The story is original but still feels natural to this world. 10/10
Was nervous going into a 510k word story. Alot of times long stories tend to drag things out way to much. This amazing story did not have that. There were no real points where I felt bored. The characters are fleshed out great. The story is original but still feels natural to this world. 10/10
1/17 c43 dennisud
So it's confirmed to Jane's that she is a Squib given her feel of magic here. Nice!
Love anytime Luna is used in a story written so well! ;-)
So it's confirmed to Jane's that she is a Squib given her feel of magic here. Nice!
Love anytime Luna is used in a story written so well! ;-)
1/15 c24 dennisud
I can't wait to see whomever is doing this have to face Harry and Neville with them angry and in full power!
A damn good story!
I can't wait to see whomever is doing this have to face Harry and Neville with them angry and in full power!
A damn good story!
1/14 c23 dennisud
Adding Luna is always a good thing for us readers, and a bit of a challenge to the writers to give her character justice. I'm sure you have done your best, given that this saga is already complete.
Well, more to read now!
Adding Luna is always a good thing for us readers, and a bit of a challenge to the writers to give her character justice. I'm sure you have done your best, given that this saga is already complete.
Well, more to read now!
1/11 c58 cameron1812
What a pleasure to read this original, imaginative epic Thank you for helping me get through a rough week with joy!
What a pleasure to read this original, imaginative epic Thank you for helping me get through a rough week with joy!
1/5 c15 
2Trahald of Uru
"It would be the first time he saw his relatives in over a year, and the last time he had was his uncle trying to grab him as the Weasleys rescued him."
Except you began this story in book three, so the last time he saw the Dursleys was when he stormed out of the house in a Marge- induced rage.
2Trahald of Uru"It would be the first time he saw his relatives in over a year, and the last time he had was his uncle trying to grab him as the Weasleys rescued him."
Except you began this story in book three, so the last time he saw the Dursleys was when he stormed out of the house in a Marge- induced rage.
1/5 c13 Trahald of Uru
From :
prophesy:verb (used with object),proph·e·sied, proph·e·sy·ing.
to foretell or predict.
to indicate beforehand.
prophecy:noun,plural proph·e·cies.
the foretelling or prediction of what is to come.
something that is declared by a prophet, especially a divinely inspired prediction, instruction, or exhortation.
Dumbledore's excuse was a propheCy, not a propheSy.
From :
prophesy:verb (used with object),proph·e·sied, proph·e·sy·ing.
to foretell or predict.
to indicate beforehand.
prophecy:noun,plural proph·e·cies.
the foretelling or prediction of what is to come.
something that is declared by a prophet, especially a divinely inspired prediction, instruction, or exhortation.
Dumbledore's excuse was a propheCy, not a propheSy.
1/4 c54 158slytherinsal
I have to laugh at the idea of them visiting something as ordinary as Brighton pier when they could go and see Brighton Pavilion and its magnificent dragons!
lovely surprise about Frank and Alice!
158slytherinsalI have to laugh at the idea of them visiting something as ordinary as Brighton pier when they could go and see Brighton Pavilion and its magnificent dragons!
lovely surprise about Frank and Alice!
1/4 c53 slytherinsal
"Camelot!"
"Camelot..."
"CAMELOT!"
"Oh come on, it's only a model..."
You're writing a wonderful saga - but I'm sorry, I can't resist a Monty Python quote.
Especially if it's not long before Harry has to push the pram a lot.
"Camelot!"
"Camelot..."
"CAMELOT!"
"Oh come on, it's only a model..."
You're writing a wonderful saga - but I'm sorry, I can't resist a Monty Python quote.
Especially if it's not long before Harry has to push the pram a lot.
1/3 c43 slytherinsal
I am shocked that anyone in the wizarding world should think that ritual skyclad dances are naked; even muggles who take it seriously are aware that it means dancing in a clean white shift.
I am shocked that anyone in the wizarding world should think that ritual skyclad dances are naked; even muggles who take it seriously are aware that it means dancing in a clean white shift.
1/3 c40 slytherinsal
I'm surprised that Harry and Daphne didn't rag Astoria over her gaffe in referring to the wife of an earl as an earless not a countess; understandable when she first made it, but to put her in her place by reminder her of such a truly stupid mistake when when whe was getting uppitty over Harry testing out her boyfriend.
Can I ask, is it a wizarding world thing in your fic for men to call each other female derogatory names like 'bint'? bint is usually only used for a woman, being Egyptian for woman [and a bit derogatory rather like 'wench'] picked up in service slang and it is rather grating to see it used for a man, unless Harry would call Neville and Sirius would call Harry 'bitch' or 'slut' which it kinda means.
I'm surprised that Harry and Daphne didn't rag Astoria over her gaffe in referring to the wife of an earl as an earless not a countess; understandable when she first made it, but to put her in her place by reminder her of such a truly stupid mistake when when whe was getting uppitty over Harry testing out her boyfriend.
Can I ask, is it a wizarding world thing in your fic for men to call each other female derogatory names like 'bint'? bint is usually only used for a woman, being Egyptian for woman [and a bit derogatory rather like 'wench'] picked up in service slang and it is rather grating to see it used for a man, unless Harry would call Neville and Sirius would call Harry 'bitch' or 'slut' which it kinda means.
1/3 c2 FrostyBehemoth
so at this point he doesnt know lupin at all. And he just lets him read his parents will that may or may not have personal info from his parents? your a piece of work.
so at this point he doesnt know lupin at all. And he just lets him read his parents will that may or may not have personal info from his parents? your a piece of work.