
8/10/2021 c10 sunsethill
I am really enjoying this. It's well-written, has many elements that I enjoy but you put enough unique spin on them that it doesn't feel contrived. Harry and Daphne are fairly believably 13/14. I like political stories and while I like action, I also like stories that explore how societal things would change with a different set of actions. I'm still interested in seeing exactly what kind of man your Dumbledore is. So far, he definitely seems to have a gigantic god-complex.
I am really enjoying this. It's well-written, has many elements that I enjoy but you put enough unique spin on them that it doesn't feel contrived. Harry and Daphne are fairly believably 13/14. I like political stories and while I like action, I also like stories that explore how societal things would change with a different set of actions. I'm still interested in seeing exactly what kind of man your Dumbledore is. So far, he definitely seems to have a gigantic god-complex.
8/10/2021 c9
2wsbenge
Good political discussion. Getting to the meat of the matter. Canon wizardry is a mess. So much they could do, if they stop fighting for no reason.

Good political discussion. Getting to the meat of the matter. Canon wizardry is a mess. So much they could do, if they stop fighting for no reason.
8/9/2021 c10 Fast Frank
Excellent chapter. So per the A/N, Harry would have been OoM 1st class, Ron maybe 2nd or 3rd, if it hadn't been for Dumbledore's coverups?
Excellent chapter. So per the A/N, Harry would have been OoM 1st class, Ron maybe 2nd or 3rd, if it hadn't been for Dumbledore's coverups?
8/9/2021 c10 The Hallowed Man
So Harry definitely should be given OoM First, Second and Third class! LMAO
So Harry definitely should be given OoM First, Second and Third class! LMAO
8/8/2021 c10 minerdude
Sounds like Albus did something to Sirius to make him leave Harry, and go after Peter, and if I am right he made a major error not taking if off, since it sounds like seeing Peter in the paper re activate it. It would be good for Harry if it comes out, so he knows he can trust Sirius and maybe Remus if Albus did something to him too.
Sounds like Albus did something to Sirius to make him leave Harry, and go after Peter, and if I am right he made a major error not taking if off, since it sounds like seeing Peter in the paper re activate it. It would be good for Harry if it comes out, so he knows he can trust Sirius and maybe Remus if Albus did something to him too.
8/8/2021 c10
10CaskettFan5
Canon Harry wasn't suspicious enough so your version of Harry strikes me as too suspicious. However, given his childhood this is a reasonable projection of how he would act. It just takes some getting used to.

Canon Harry wasn't suspicious enough so your version of Harry strikes me as too suspicious. However, given his childhood this is a reasonable projection of how he would act. It just takes some getting used to.
8/8/2021 c10 KristofferXxXxX
I really hope Harry gets both the Order of Merlin, First Class and Order of Merlin, Second Class. After all, Harry fought both the Mountain Troll and the Basilisk :3
I really hope Harry gets both the Order of Merlin, First Class and Order of Merlin, Second Class. After all, Harry fought both the Mountain Troll and the Basilisk :3
8/8/2021 c10
28Kairan1979
Thanks for the chapter.
Pleased to see Harry how is more cautious and not just tells Daphne everything.

Thanks for the chapter.
Pleased to see Harry how is more cautious and not just tells Daphne everything.
8/8/2021 c1 sunsethill
Excellent start to the story. You can see the subtle changes getting started but it feels fresh.
Excellent start to the story. You can see the subtle changes getting started but it feels fresh.
8/8/2021 c1 Jaymoneyman
Not much of a falling apart if all it took was an I’m sorry. Great first chapter tho
Not much of a falling apart if all it took was an I’m sorry. Great first chapter tho