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21h c8 New Senpai on the Block
Welcome Back Author Thanks for the update
11/29 c8 3Cyan Sung-Sun
It's good to see that you haven't abandoned this story.
7/22 c7 frankieu
nice chapter thx for writing it
interesting listing of the ships being build by vista
nice seeing some of the space battle and dealing with the demons
that poor tech priest having to deal with all the trade deals
7/22 c7 serialkeller
Hope all these greedy and corrupt bastards get destroyed! Awesome stuff!
7/3 c6 serialkeller
Another great chapter. Ut the ending confused me a bit. Was the last scene before that fleet invaded or after because the second last segment seemed to be set after the battle
7/3 c6 frankieu
nice chapter thx for writing ti
nice showing of the battle and the waves on chaos forces being led in the trap wonder what the reaction will be once they learn it all for nothing
6/28 c5 serialkeller
Another awesome chapter
6/28 c5 frankieu
nice chapter thx for writing it
good descriptions of the space battle's and offering a view off the scale of combat
6/27 c4 serialkeller
Awesome stuff. I actually really liked the initial way of story telling you had of using the reports or parts of history texts or otherwise to tell what was happening. That said, the rest of the story is just as good as you don't spend too much time bogged down in one scene which is a downfall of warhammer 40k fics in general. Keep up the good work :D
6/26 c4 frankieu
nice chapter thx for writing it
good to see futher build up and seeing the old forge world trying to steal the stuff doubt the mc wont see coming a mile away :D
6/25 c3 frankieu
nice chapter thx for writing it
interesting look at the various pov's going around in the galaxy
6/24 c2 frankieu
nice chapter thx for writing it
nice lead up the the battle aka trap for the STC
looking forward to seeing it brought back to mars the tech boys are going to party hardy :D
6/23 c1 frankieu
interesting start of the story looking forward to more and seeing what changes ya bring to the 40k verse
thx for writing it
6/22 c1 8Antony444
Very interesting beginning of a timeline.
You have me definitely interested, continue!

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