for Melting the Ice1/23 c1 Guest
I love the story so far. Is it abandoned?
I love the story so far. Is it abandoned?
1/23 c1 pabitrakumarlenka99
I love this story so far. Is it abandoned?if is it I hope you will continue this story.
I love this story so far. Is it abandoned?if is it I hope you will continue this story.
11/22/2024 c36 bookivore
A couple of times Daphne said something couldn’t be explained in books but she literally went on to explain them verbally, which is the same kind of data put into books. I think she needs another reason why Hermione won’t find this information in Hogwarts library but there’s no need to work too hard at that. It is obvious that zhogwarts offers a very limited, practical education, the only thing related to general cultural knowledge is History of magic and the course is a joke. Canon Harry is an uneducated tourist and nobody ever says you don’t know X? What are they teaching at Hohwarts.
A couple of times Daphne said something couldn’t be explained in books but she literally went on to explain them verbally, which is the same kind of data put into books. I think she needs another reason why Hermione won’t find this information in Hogwarts library but there’s no need to work too hard at that. It is obvious that zhogwarts offers a very limited, practical education, the only thing related to general cultural knowledge is History of magic and the course is a joke. Canon Harry is an uneducated tourist and nobody ever says you don’t know X? What are they teaching at Hohwarts.
11/22/2024 c30 bookivore
The other question is how people know V is dead? Granted most stories assume the population is sure beyond what is said in canon - two dead people and one baby were in the house, no Voldemort body, how is anyone NOT puzzled about what happened? In some ways i am surprised that the magical world is not more worried about fraud.
The other question is how people know V is dead? Granted most stories assume the population is sure beyond what is said in canon - two dead people and one baby were in the house, no Voldemort body, how is anyone NOT puzzled about what happened? In some ways i am surprised that the magical world is not more worried about fraud.
10/30/2024 c16 Guest
Fidelius? Floor seven hundred seventy seven
Fidelius? Floor seven hundred seventy seven
7/31/2024 c36 Black Dragon the Saint
This feels like the end of Act I of this story if that makes sense. Any idea when we get Act II? I really love this story a lot
This feels like the end of Act I of this story if that makes sense. Any idea when we get Act II? I really love this story a lot
7/18/2024 c36 Jacekjaworek
More !
More !
7/2/2024 c36 Guest
Great story! I hope your new adventure into parenthood has been fun so far!
Great story! I hope your new adventure into parenthood has been fun so far!
5/30/2024 c1 Kitten Arina
I am sorry, I have a problem with your summary that just doesn’t make me want to read it. I don’t blame you for pairing Harry with Daphane. That is not the worse pairing out there. I don’t blame you if you are not a fan of Hermione. I don’t need you to be, however I don’t believe that Hermione would truly ignore Harry like your story is suggesting. And it is for that reason that I can’t get into this story. I wish you the best of luck with it though.
I am sorry, I have a problem with your summary that just doesn’t make me want to read it. I don’t blame you for pairing Harry with Daphane. That is not the worse pairing out there. I don’t blame you if you are not a fan of Hermione. I don’t need you to be, however I don’t believe that Hermione would truly ignore Harry like your story is suggesting. And it is for that reason that I can’t get into this story. I wish you the best of luck with it though.
3/2/2024 c18 GreengrassRebel
I've always thought those work arounds for the Fidelius don't make sense, they turn what is described as a terribly complex spell into a minor inconvenience. If Remus isn't the secret keeper I guess Sirius is, then just have Remus give Harry a piece of paper from Sirius like they do in book 5 (In the book Dumbledore is the secret keeper). A piece of paper with the secret written by the secret keeper is the canon way for non-secret keepers to share the hidden information.
I've always thought those work arounds for the Fidelius don't make sense, they turn what is described as a terribly complex spell into a minor inconvenience. If Remus isn't the secret keeper I guess Sirius is, then just have Remus give Harry a piece of paper from Sirius like they do in book 5 (In the book Dumbledore is the secret keeper). A piece of paper with the secret written by the secret keeper is the canon way for non-secret keepers to share the hidden information.
3/1/2024 c7 GreengrassRebel
Hermione didn't get an O in Divination because dhe dropped it, while she did get one in Muggle Studies because she sat the exam and then decided to drop it.
Hermione didn't get an O in Divination because dhe dropped it, while she did get one in Muggle Studies because she sat the exam and then decided to drop it.
2/7/2024 c18 
2Cain O'Phelan
I’ve made it this far, and enjoyed it, though some sections are easier than others. Overall, nicely done. I really wish Harry would give Ron the ass whipping he’s earned. But i think that about nearly all of these stories, including the original, canon work. Ron is an unfaithful ass with mommy issues.
2Cain O'PhelanI’ve made it this far, and enjoyed it, though some sections are easier than others. Overall, nicely done. I really wish Harry would give Ron the ass whipping he’s earned. But i think that about nearly all of these stories, including the original, canon work. Ron is an unfaithful ass with mommy issues.