for Playing For Keeps18h c2 
1Plasma Dragon 312
Oh hell yeah you have great taste in music! I actually know both of these songs! Well three if you include the not listened to Wye of the Tiger
1Plasma Dragon 312Oh hell yeah you have great taste in music! I actually know both of these songs! Well three if you include the not listened to Wye of the Tiger
19h c1 Plasma Dragon 312
Hell yeah brother! Fuck all that noise past volume 3! Happy Birthday Monty we miss you
Hell yeah brother! Fuck all that noise past volume 3! Happy Birthday Monty we miss you
3/23 c26 shadownartuo666
sooo qustion is there going to be a party system or is it going SP style? Also good chapter cant wait for the next one
sooo qustion is there going to be a party system or is it going SP style? Also good chapter cant wait for the next one
3/23 c26 5Monkey D. Conan
Practice makes perfect. Looking forward to the growth. Excellent work as always! Can’t wait for more!
5Monkey D. ConanPractice makes perfect. Looking forward to the growth. Excellent work as always! Can’t wait for more!
3/23 c26 insanecoop
Well written but standard losing trope as well for this chapter.
The chapter shortness also is restricting as RL time is steadily increasing.
Well written but standard losing trope as well for this chapter.
The chapter shortness also is restricting as RL time is steadily increasing.
3/23 c26 Reader20448
It returns with another good chapter and it's a training montage and I thus I enjoy they are now grinding the good grind. His parents being annoying fucks again and they are just making it worse and he probably gonna curse them out if they keep being dumbasses. Training with Indigo gave them insight on what to improve and learning more about some skills like Grimm Detection. They indeed gonna be sore. I await for the next one to come.
It returns with another good chapter and it's a training montage and I thus I enjoy they are now grinding the good grind. His parents being annoying fucks again and they are just making it worse and he probably gonna curse them out if they keep being dumbasses. Training with Indigo gave them insight on what to improve and learning more about some skills like Grimm Detection. They indeed gonna be sore. I await for the next one to come.
3/23 c26 Doctor Doofenshmirtz
Ah yes, the usual Jaune beat up, to show how despite being almost a demigod, he is really weak compared to anyone from his family and still has a way to go.
Ah yes, the usual Jaune beat up, to show how despite being almost a demigod, he is really weak compared to anyone from his family and still has a way to go.
3/15 c25 Ints
This took a sharp turn towards stupid. Never understood why authors insist on doing this, you had a good thing going and this most likely ended it for good.
It was going perfectly fine with MC's otherworldly origins simply providing him an out of context perspective on the RWBY world. There was no other reason for it to be brought up by anyone for any reason. Unless dimensional travel is an common and known factor in that universe there is no reason for it to be ever brought up and even less for any character to assume such is the case (or believe it to be).
Yeah, you screwed up with the past couple chapters.
This took a sharp turn towards stupid. Never understood why authors insist on doing this, you had a good thing going and this most likely ended it for good.
It was going perfectly fine with MC's otherworldly origins simply providing him an out of context perspective on the RWBY world. There was no other reason for it to be brought up by anyone for any reason. Unless dimensional travel is an common and known factor in that universe there is no reason for it to be ever brought up and even less for any character to assume such is the case (or believe it to be).
Yeah, you screwed up with the past couple chapters.
3/15 c14 17WwEpsilonwW
For all the fix-it fics in this fandom, and there are so many, you are the first writer to actually TRY to save Amber post-coma, let alone suceed. Well done, sir. Well done.
17WwEpsilonwWFor all the fix-it fics in this fandom, and there are so many, you are the first writer to actually TRY to save Amber post-coma, let alone suceed. Well done, sir. Well done.
3/13 c25 s.siedlecki.s
Amazing chapters.
Can Jaune turn off passive bonuses to the stats from skills for easier training?
Amazing chapters.
Can Jaune turn off passive bonuses to the stats from skills for easier training?
3/12 c23 Eddyg125
i enjoyed the chapter, and I want to say that the sandwich thing isn't as possible as people say it is. If he just got out of the hospital and the whole Amnesia explanation was just taking off, then yes, I can see how knowing how to make a specific sandwich would raise eyebrows. Yet he was out and about before meeting Amber, so it's not farfetched to just say that he was experimenting or whatever. Sorry, I just had to get that off my chest. Anyways, great chapter, and I hope to see more soon.
i enjoyed the chapter, and I want to say that the sandwich thing isn't as possible as people say it is. If he just got out of the hospital and the whole Amnesia explanation was just taking off, then yes, I can see how knowing how to make a specific sandwich would raise eyebrows. Yet he was out and about before meeting Amber, so it's not farfetched to just say that he was experimenting or whatever. Sorry, I just had to get that off my chest. Anyways, great chapter, and I hope to see more soon.