for Take the Girl4/12 c25 
1LuminouShadowAlt
I just can't read thus anymore. I have tried multiple fics of yours, they all start well with unique plot or powere until you suddenly get craving to write some drama. And its okay if it was just that cause there are are many fics where I didn't like some plot points so I skim past them and voila! the fics back to good again. But no somehow you always end up streching the one drama that I personally dont like, for too many chapters. And even when I try to skim past them, they keep making my frustration build up and ultimately I loose the will to read the fic any further anymore.
1LuminouShadowAltI just can't read thus anymore. I have tried multiple fics of yours, they all start well with unique plot or powere until you suddenly get craving to write some drama. And its okay if it was just that cause there are are many fics where I didn't like some plot points so I skim past them and voila! the fics back to good again. But no somehow you always end up streching the one drama that I personally dont like, for too many chapters. And even when I try to skim past them, they keep making my frustration build up and ultimately I loose the will to read the fic any further anymore.
4/12 c25 LuminouShadowAlt
He says he is angry because of wanton destruction. He also knows he has power to stop the fight in an instant. I just cant understand him anymore.
Like that you buffed them up, hate that you only buffed them up for this senseless drama that keeps getting stretched.
He says he is angry because of wanton destruction. He also knows he has power to stop the fight in an instant. I just cant understand him anymore.
Like that you buffed them up, hate that you only buffed them up for this senseless drama that keeps getting stretched.
4/12 c24 LuminouShadowAlt
I just dont like something about how this was handled. And on top of that you keep streching this sorry excuse of the drama. I mean I can see you had fun writing the brawl but it aint really fun reading it.
I just dont like something about how this was handled. And on top of that you keep streching this sorry excuse of the drama. I mean I can see you had fun writing the brawl but it aint really fun reading it.
4/12 c10 LuminouShadowAlt
It was disgusting. I have seen people dont care about it because the mc got the pus. But looking at, I mean truly looking at it, it was nothing more than rp. I hope atleast Naruto shows anger.
It was disgusting. I have seen people dont care about it because the mc got the pus. But looking at, I mean truly looking at it, it was nothing more than rp. I hope atleast Naruto shows anger.
4/12 c4 LuminouShadowAlt
ugh
he can sense negative emotions
he has warning from ann
I just hate whatever you are going with this.
Is forcing people for healing is much worse than working for her?
Really I hate when authors make the mc dont care about the characters if they have tits.
ugh
he can sense negative emotions
he has warning from ann
I just hate whatever you are going with this.
Is forcing people for healing is much worse than working for her?
Really I hate when authors make the mc dont care about the characters if they have tits.
3/8 c31 Xur911
I really like this story. Imo its better than the naruto arc story (both are great tho) just contributing a comment saying so in hopes of an update. Regardless all of your story’s are great (personally a fan of the baldurs gate ones) take it easy and dont stretch yourself too thin! Luv your stuff!
I really like this story. Imo its better than the naruto arc story (both are great tho) just contributing a comment saying so in hopes of an update. Regardless all of your story’s are great (personally a fan of the baldurs gate ones) take it easy and dont stretch yourself too thin! Luv your stuff!