for Sticky6/29/2021 c1 Princess
Please update. Loved the chapter .
Please update. Loved the chapter .
6/27/2021 c1 
22Goldmineempire5
I can agree with you 'Because that's always fun to write'. Nice way to explore your creativity isn't it? i may not show it but deep inside I too ship Micheal and Emily. Sorry Chief :(
Kai has emotions? I don't blame Micheal for asking that. i would be surprised too. And looks like Kai was either trying to have the 'talk' with Tyson or he was trying to play the matchmaker. I do look forward for another chapter, and will check out 'A Hero's Last Cry' tomorrow. Peace out!
22Goldmineempire5I can agree with you 'Because that's always fun to write'. Nice way to explore your creativity isn't it? i may not show it but deep inside I too ship Micheal and Emily. Sorry Chief :(
Kai has emotions? I don't blame Micheal for asking that. i would be surprised too. And looks like Kai was either trying to have the 'talk' with Tyson or he was trying to play the matchmaker. I do look forward for another chapter, and will check out 'A Hero's Last Cry' tomorrow. Peace out!
6/26/2021 c1 SamOlive Witch
Ouch! Someone's fallen HARD! That he can't keep his eyes off her even for a few minutes! So cute! Wow Max, wow Max. You told the Phoenix Prince to do something without getting killed. You deserve a round of applause. And is it just me, or was Kai a bit too open. Peeking into his mind was, weird. And sorry to say Kai, you're wrong, if Tyson and Hilary got together, he's gonna get stronger, at least, that's my theory for tyhil. Ooooo, so the champ got a room of his own. When I read clean, the only thing that came into my mind was Hilary getting annoyed by his antics and help in cleaning. This was so good! A perfect tyhil! And did I mention tykai friendship was cool too? That's how best friends are made, they insult each other!
Ouch! Someone's fallen HARD! That he can't keep his eyes off her even for a few minutes! So cute! Wow Max, wow Max. You told the Phoenix Prince to do something without getting killed. You deserve a round of applause. And is it just me, or was Kai a bit too open. Peeking into his mind was, weird. And sorry to say Kai, you're wrong, if Tyson and Hilary got together, he's gonna get stronger, at least, that's my theory for tyhil. Ooooo, so the champ got a room of his own. When I read clean, the only thing that came into my mind was Hilary getting annoyed by his antics and help in cleaning. This was so good! A perfect tyhil! And did I mention tykai friendship was cool too? That's how best friends are made, they insult each other!
6/25/2021 c1 77Cutetyhil
.She likes you. You like her. It's as obvious as daylight. So, why don't you do something about it? The world will become a much better place."~ the best lines of the chapter.
Kai can really be a cool matchmaker especially for TyHil! I liked how he brought up the conversation and and convinced Tyson to ask ask out. Also I was delighted to know that world champion has a separate dressing room of his own personally while the other teamnates has to share one xD it was exciting to read that.
Nice chapter ~ I'm truly hyped up to read your TyHil shots. Update soon ~~
77Cutetyhil.She likes you. You like her. It's as obvious as daylight. So, why don't you do something about it? The world will become a much better place."~ the best lines of the chapter.
Kai can really be a cool matchmaker especially for TyHil! I liked how he brought up the conversation and and convinced Tyson to ask ask out. Also I was delighted to know that world champion has a separate dressing room of his own personally while the other teamnates has to share one xD it was exciting to read that.
Nice chapter ~ I'm truly hyped up to read your TyHil shots. Update soon ~~