7/17 c21 Guest
This was an incredible and really well written story. I couldn't believe it when I realized this is the same person who wrote coffee breaks. Your writing has improved SO much. From indulgent fanfiction writer to a true author. Amazing work, I hope one day I see more of yours on a bookshelf.
This was an incredible and really well written story. I couldn't believe it when I realized this is the same person who wrote coffee breaks. Your writing has improved SO much. From indulgent fanfiction writer to a true author. Amazing work, I hope one day I see more of yours on a bookshelf.
4/19 c21 Guest
That’s awesome! Congrats! You are a very talented write and storyteller so I’m very happy for you!
That’s awesome! Congrats! You are a very talented write and storyteller so I’m very happy for you!
4/12 c21 Marie RieRie England
So awesome
Isaw tat title and gt super excited
I had always wished there was more to it.
I loed they finally got together for real
But you as the awesome writer ou are
Could have gone so much farther.
I can't wait to see you trn i into a novel
You have my support
So awesome
Isaw tat title and gt super excited
I had always wished there was more to it.
I loed they finally got together for real
But you as the awesome writer ou are
Could have gone so much farther.
I can't wait to see you trn i into a novel
You have my support
2/17 c20 Angy
You created such a charming Brittany and Santana. Beautiful story. Please write a follow up. You have so much left to tell: Brittany's family; find out more about Brittany's possible sister/cousin; Santana's emotional blocks; Quinn who could do damage; Puck needing closure from her; Santana who needs to learn to stand up to her mother, who is far too nosy (but very real); Santana's father who she never sees. In short, you still have a world that you can always tell with your fantastic irony. one of my favorite stories ever.
I really hope you make a sequel.
You created such a charming Brittany and Santana. Beautiful story. Please write a follow up. You have so much left to tell: Brittany's family; find out more about Brittany's possible sister/cousin; Santana's emotional blocks; Quinn who could do damage; Puck needing closure from her; Santana who needs to learn to stand up to her mother, who is far too nosy (but very real); Santana's father who she never sees. In short, you still have a world that you can always tell with your fantastic irony. one of my favorite stories ever.
I really hope you make a sequel.
1/2 c5 lesleytapia75
This is like my fifth time re-reading this story it’s seriously one of my absolute favorites of all time. Reading this chapter again as Santana lists her concerns about how others perceive her and how she continues to push Brittany away, only to come back and ask her to stay with her and the plan, it really resonated with me and reminded me of The Archer by Taylor Swift. The vibes are very similar and I think you were able to perfectly capture these inner feelings of turmoil from the song but perfectly articulate it to reflect Santana’s character in the story. Great work!
This is like my fifth time re-reading this story it’s seriously one of my absolute favorites of all time. Reading this chapter again as Santana lists her concerns about how others perceive her and how she continues to push Brittany away, only to come back and ask her to stay with her and the plan, it really resonated with me and reminded me of The Archer by Taylor Swift. The vibes are very similar and I think you were able to perfectly capture these inner feelings of turmoil from the song but perfectly articulate it to reflect Santana’s character in the story. Great work!
12/27/2023 c20 Marie RieRie England
This really needs a sequel.
It really was agreat story.
I would love to read more .
This really needs a sequel.
It really was agreat story.
I would love to read more .
11/6/2023 c20 Guest
This was such a cute story. San and Britt fighting for biggest nerd! Love it. And Artie is a dock and got what he deserve. Sad to see it end. But amazing writing
This was such a cute story. San and Britt fighting for biggest nerd! Love it. And Artie is a dock and got what he deserve. Sad to see it end. But amazing writing
8/13/2023 c20 Inge
Thank you so much
Thank you so much
4/13/2023 c20 Guest
Dude… this was so freaking cute! I love it. Annoyed that it too Santana forever to realize that she loved Brittany. But happy to see they are officially together. Hope you come back and write a sequel to this. I wanna see them graduate and do their thing but also date maybe get engaged and then married.
Dude… this was so freaking cute! I love it. Annoyed that it too Santana forever to realize that she loved Brittany. But happy to see they are officially together. Hope you come back and write a sequel to this. I wanna see them graduate and do their thing but also date maybe get engaged and then married.
4/2/2023 c3 16Willow's Promise
The story seems interesting but it also seems a little one sided. I mean, Britt is being kind of a jerk...she know why Santana needs her but Santana wasn't afforded the same information about why Britt needs her.
There have been a couple of moments in this chapter when, had I been Santana, I'd have walked away because Britt's being so completely... offensive. Like she's trying to piss Santana off.
I know it's supposed to be humorous but , at the moment, it seems more like bash Santana and make her feel as small as possible. I'm having a hard time mustering empathy for Britt while feeling really bad for Santana for having to put up with Brittany.
Of course, I did find Santana a little petty for her reason for disliking Britt in the first place but Britt's current behavior is making me wonder if Santana's dislike was justified.
The story seems interesting but it also seems a little one sided. I mean, Britt is being kind of a jerk...she know why Santana needs her but Santana wasn't afforded the same information about why Britt needs her.
There have been a couple of moments in this chapter when, had I been Santana, I'd have walked away because Britt's being so completely... offensive. Like she's trying to piss Santana off.
I know it's supposed to be humorous but , at the moment, it seems more like bash Santana and make her feel as small as possible. I'm having a hard time mustering empathy for Britt while feeling really bad for Santana for having to put up with Brittany.
Of course, I did find Santana a little petty for her reason for disliking Britt in the first place but Britt's current behavior is making me wonder if Santana's dislike was justified.
9/27/2022 c20 Marie RieRie England
I loved this story again.
I really wish there was more.
Maybe one you will decide to do a sequel.
You are an awesome writer.
I loved this story again.
I really wish there was more.
Maybe one you will decide to do a sequel.
You are an awesome writer.