
6/27/2021 c1 iyalode
Interesting premise, I'm keen to see where you take this.
Interesting premise, I'm keen to see where you take this.
6/26/2021 c1 Kathy
wow, what an interesting twist, first that Mary tried to find the colt and the young hunter that warned her and now this, and what a shock to find John dead, hope she finds her boys, great start, please continue, thanks
wow, what an interesting twist, first that Mary tried to find the colt and the young hunter that warned her and now this, and what a shock to find John dead, hope she finds her boys, great start, please continue, thanks
6/26/2021 c1 Kathy
WOW, WHAT AN
WOW, WHAT AN
6/26/2021 c1
90Blondie 20000
Great start. I love the idea. How did Mary end up in the future? Is this the demons doing? The angels? Is someone trying to tamper with the timeline? I'm super excited to see where you take this I can't wait to see Mary's reaction when she sees 'Van Halen' ;) I hope your Mary will be more likeable than how the show created her. I can't wait for more.

Great start. I love the idea. How did Mary end up in the future? Is this the demons doing? The angels? Is someone trying to tamper with the timeline? I'm super excited to see where you take this I can't wait to see Mary's reaction when she sees 'Van Halen' ;) I hope your Mary will be more likeable than how the show created her. I can't wait for more.