for Rimuru And Iruma's Adventures In The Netherworld2/25/2022 c44 Omnipotente Vargas
Well, Beluran's dead. Let's hope Iruma doesn't get (more) traumatised after this...
Well, Beluran's dead. Let's hope Iruma doesn't get (more) traumatised after this...
2/25/2022 c44 
10OniTenshi500
Beluran's earned himself a beating from all the Demon Lords. Guy is one of the Primordial Demons, Milim has massacred an army of ten thousand, Leon is a former hero, Luminous is the ruler of the vampires, Ramiris's skill Small World allows her to control reality in an area she establishes as her territory, and so on. Beluran says that despite all that, they're unimpressive and weaker than him, and also went as far as to insult their rule and territories as well. The other Demon Lords are so going to step in and join Rimuru in "disciplining" Beluran.
10OniTenshi500Beluran's earned himself a beating from all the Demon Lords. Guy is one of the Primordial Demons, Milim has massacred an army of ten thousand, Leon is a former hero, Luminous is the ruler of the vampires, Ramiris's skill Small World allows her to control reality in an area she establishes as her territory, and so on. Beluran says that despite all that, they're unimpressive and weaker than him, and also went as far as to insult their rule and territories as well. The other Demon Lords are so going to step in and join Rimuru in "disciplining" Beluran.
2/24/2022 c15 TrixietheKitty
I wonder if Sabnock will be set on a different path to the original storyline, as a result of Rimuru adminstering violent beati- I mean, giving him helpful training!
It'd be funny if his abilities started growing by leaps and bounds, instead of him being stuck as pathetic comic relief. Although I haven't actually watched the anime past episode 10 so IDK if Sabnock stays stuck as comic relief, I'm just assuming he does.
I wonder if Sabnock will be set on a different path to the original storyline, as a result of Rimuru adminstering violent beati- I mean, giving him helpful training!
It'd be funny if his abilities started growing by leaps and bounds, instead of him being stuck as pathetic comic relief. Although I haven't actually watched the anime past episode 10 so IDK if Sabnock stays stuck as comic relief, I'm just assuming he does.
2/23/2022 c43 Guest
It was too short man...but It was great can't wait for next ch:44
It was too short man...but It was great can't wait for next ch:44
2/20/2022 c12 TrixietheKitty
Seldom have I felt such a strong need for a character to be hugged better than I feel for Rimuru here
Seldom have I felt such a strong need for a character to be hugged better than I feel for Rimuru here
2/19/2022 c43 1The Great Dullahan
now the show begins jajaja, i wonder if iruma will learn about the holy war between Shuna,Shion,Milim to be Rimuru wife jajaja
And in the underworld there will be a class about the primordials and the demon lords? it would be fun to see sabock saying nothing is more cool that a demon king jajaja
1The Great Dullahannow the show begins jajaja, i wonder if iruma will learn about the holy war between Shuna,Shion,Milim to be Rimuru wife jajaja
And in the underworld there will be a class about the primordials and the demon lords? it would be fun to see sabock saying nothing is more cool that a demon king jajaja
2/19/2022 c43 6Princess Asuna
nice update!And if you wanna do every other week I personally have no objections! :)
6Princess Asunanice update!And if you wanna do every other week I personally have no objections! :)
2/19/2022 c43 W1ZL3SS
Sorry I think that I make a mistake in mi past comment , cheaper chapter.
Sorry I still learning English
Sorry I think that I make a mistake in mi past comment , cheaper chapter.
Sorry I still learning English
2/19/2022 c43 W1ZL3SS
I think you should try a big cheaper in two weeks and then decide in consideration of what the people think.
Like a experiment of what is better.
Pd: I love your work.
I think you should try a big cheaper in two weeks and then decide in consideration of what the people think.
Like a experiment of what is better.
Pd: I love your work.
2/18/2022 c43 17Watcher321
Aaaachk! Now to wait another week T.T' I swear, your storytelling is so good it might just be dangerous. Btw, "queue" is for standing in line, "cue" is for a signal. Just thought I'd point that out ;) this is fantastic!
17Watcher321Aaaachk! Now to wait another week T.T' I swear, your storytelling is so good it might just be dangerous. Btw, "queue" is for standing in line, "cue" is for a signal. Just thought I'd point that out ;) this is fantastic!
2/18/2022 c43 Guest
I prefer the weekly updates, I get to look forward to more every friday! If I wanted length, I would go to webnovel lol.
I prefer the weekly updates, I get to look forward to more every friday! If I wanted length, I would go to webnovel lol.
2/18/2022 c43 Hex2429
Another great chapter! Personally I prefer longer chapters so I'd be happy with a biweekly release if you feel like it would be better.
Another great chapter! Personally I prefer longer chapters so I'd be happy with a biweekly release if you feel like it would be better.
2/18/2022 c42 patrickabc
For me i prefer releases with set dates so i don't mind as long as it has a set date like every two weeks of every months at most
For me i prefer releases with set dates so i don't mind as long as it has a set date like every two weeks of every months at most
2/16/2022 c13 NightmareKnight1
Alright. That's my stopping point. I stuck around because I liked the concept and hoped your writing would have improved by now, but it hasn't. There's a lot of things I'm not working fan of in this fic, but only some of them are based on the actual content of the story.
For one, pick a tense/POV and stick with it. Don't just swap between characters in first person. If you want a sort of omniscient narration, stick to third person. If you do want first person, don't include details that the characters themselves weren't able to perceive, such as Rimuru whispering something but Iruma "didn't catch that".
For another, don't use *giggles* or other such examples to denote actions. If someone giggles or sighs or whatever, write it out, even if it's a simple "protagonist giggled at their description". It's lazy writing and feels like reading a bad roleplay/script.
Furthermore, don't use pound signs to show that someone is whispering. Just don't. It looks awful, and there should really be no need to use it as such when a simple "they whispered" or "spoke quietly" works better.
Alright. That's my stopping point. I stuck around because I liked the concept and hoped your writing would have improved by now, but it hasn't. There's a lot of things I'm not working fan of in this fic, but only some of them are based on the actual content of the story.
For one, pick a tense/POV and stick with it. Don't just swap between characters in first person. If you want a sort of omniscient narration, stick to third person. If you do want first person, don't include details that the characters themselves weren't able to perceive, such as Rimuru whispering something but Iruma "didn't catch that".
For another, don't use *giggles* or other such examples to denote actions. If someone giggles or sighs or whatever, write it out, even if it's a simple "protagonist giggled at their description". It's lazy writing and feels like reading a bad roleplay/script.
Furthermore, don't use pound signs to show that someone is whispering. Just don't. It looks awful, and there should really be no need to use it as such when a simple "they whispered" or "spoke quietly" works better.