for Phantom4/29 c28 sniperbro1998
Harry's going to love killing another Zod. I'm curious how he'll take meeting another Faora Ul?
Harry's going to love killing another Zod. I'm curious how he'll take meeting another Faora Ul?
4/29 c28 ulttoanova
this seemed like a bit of a disjointed chapter checking in with everyone but I still enjoyed it. I don't have much to say though.
this seemed like a bit of a disjointed chapter checking in with everyone but I still enjoyed it. I don't have much to say though.
4/29 c28 
3WhiteElfElder
Superman needs to merge his human (Clark) side with this Kryptonian (Kal-El) side so he is complete instead of the waffling form he is.
3WhiteElfElderSuperman needs to merge his human (Clark) side with this Kryptonian (Kal-El) side so he is complete instead of the waffling form he is.
4/16 c1 bookreader451
I am really sorry but I have to agree with other reviewers about the choice to stage a fight in a highly populated area in Vegas. It's not a choice your previous characterization would support and draws you out of the narrative. I hope you can rewrite this in a way that is internally consistent, because you really have a gift for writing.
I am really sorry but I have to agree with other reviewers about the choice to stage a fight in a highly populated area in Vegas. It's not a choice your previous characterization would support and draws you out of the narrative. I hope you can rewrite this in a way that is internally consistent, because you really have a gift for writing.
4/8 c18 PaleFeed
I swear i followed this story years ago when it was pn chapter 3 or 4. It is still really good though, even if this site sucks sometimes.
I swear i followed this story years ago when it was pn chapter 3 or 4. It is still really good though, even if this site sucks sometimes.
3/24 c27 sniperbro1998
Shouldn't the guardians be aware of Zeus and the gods and believe Wonder woman is his daughter?
Shouldn't the guardians be aware of Zeus and the gods and believe Wonder woman is his daughter?
3/18 c26 Guest
ch:27 isn't showing up(at least not on the m. version of the site) thought I should let you know...
ps love the story and keep up the good work.
ch:27 isn't showing up(at least not on the m. version of the site) thought I should let you know...
ps love the story and keep up the good work.
3/17 c27 3WhiteElfElder
The Guardians best tread with caution as if they go after Harry or any he cares about they will be facing Death's Champion and not just a Wizard/Kryptonian.
3WhiteElfElderThe Guardians best tread with caution as if they go after Harry or any he cares about they will be facing Death's Champion and not just a Wizard/Kryptonian.