for Encounter in the park7/4/2021 c1 
9Evertide
When I saw this and that it was about characters as different as Polly and Aiko, I had the thought, this should be interesting. The way you kept Polly's New Yawk-type accent was cute and accurate (writing characters with accents is something that still eludes me), as was her getting flustered at Aiko's unladylike behavior. Aiko's lazy disillusionment was pretty true to her character. And...well, Sexuality ain't Aiko's preferred trait for nothing, and Polly herself says she's got some nice buns to go with that hotdog ;3
9EvertideWhen I saw this and that it was about characters as different as Polly and Aiko, I had the thought, this should be interesting. The way you kept Polly's New Yawk-type accent was cute and accurate (writing characters with accents is something that still eludes me), as was her getting flustered at Aiko's unladylike behavior. Aiko's lazy disillusionment was pretty true to her character. And...well, Sexuality ain't Aiko's preferred trait for nothing, and Polly herself says she's got some nice buns to go with that hotdog ;3
6/30/2021 c1 17Cypher DS
"Oi, this ain't a clam chowder joint, it's just yoir apartment!" XD
I loved Aiko's line about her necktie. The original outfit perfectly fits Aiko's "lazy teacher" aesthetic. And of course Polly thinks it's a carefully planned fashion statement.
Adding all the "oi"s to Polly's lines was a good technique to show off her New York accent. Maybe if we get a lucky dice roll we can follow up on that lunch date. ;)
17Cypher DS"Oi, this ain't a clam chowder joint, it's just yoir apartment!" XD
I loved Aiko's line about her necktie. The original outfit perfectly fits Aiko's "lazy teacher" aesthetic. And of course Polly thinks it's a carefully planned fashion statement.
Adding all the "oi"s to Polly's lines was a good technique to show off her New York accent. Maybe if we get a lucky dice roll we can follow up on that lunch date. ;)