for Popular Monster4/29 c12 Dananator
So… no Faunus supremacist Adam? Also will the future child have chakra or not, a chakra empowered Adam would be incredibly overpowered.
So… no Faunus supremacist Adam? Also will the future child have chakra or not, a chakra empowered Adam would be incredibly overpowered.
4/28 c2 Dananator
Obligatory please continue this story review. Good premise, an EOS Naruto stuck in RWBY where Oz and Salem will be veering to get Naruto on their sides.
Obligatory please continue this story review. Good premise, an EOS Naruto stuck in RWBY where Oz and Salem will be veering to get Naruto on their sides.
4/27 c13 NyaNyaKittyFace
Everyone underestimates the fool or the simpleton...Yet the effect of their actions is felt as much as a blow to the temple when they poison their fellow man.
Everyone underestimates the fool or the simpleton...Yet the effect of their actions is felt as much as a blow to the temple when they poison their fellow man.
4/22 c13 serpentacodex
i would have reviewed sooner but between been hired on a different story and having to re-read this one, it took me a minute to get to it.
overall great chapter, I really hope the next one doesn't take as long, i can't speak for everyone but I prefer this one to trying makes perfect.
i would have reviewed sooner but between been hired on a different story and having to re-read this one, it took me a minute to get to it.
overall great chapter, I really hope the next one doesn't take as long, i can't speak for everyone but I prefer this one to trying makes perfect.
4/19 c13 Guest
more please
more please
4/19 c13 Guest
Would really like for Raven to return, on Naruto's side and with him as well. Would possibly lead to Naruto being Yang's dad.
Would really like for Raven to return, on Naruto's side and with him as well. Would possibly lead to Naruto being Yang's dad.
4/18 c13 Guest
This was a great chapter but I am a little disappointed that Naruto didn't knock Salem on her ass like he did Ozpin.
This was a great chapter but I am a little disappointed that Naruto didn't knock Salem on her ass like he did Ozpin.
4/17 c13 
4freedomringer
I do like this interaction, especially with how much you keep Salem, Salem. But more importantly I like how Naruto responded. Not with anger, or vitriol. Not with understanding, and "losing" his way for a bit. He simply saw her side of the issue, took a moment to comprehend and understand, and responded with his ideals. Like a diatribe or debate. He hasn't dismissed her ideals, he just gave his own as a riposte. It was a great chapter
4freedomringerI do like this interaction, especially with how much you keep Salem, Salem. But more importantly I like how Naruto responded. Not with anger, or vitriol. Not with understanding, and "losing" his way for a bit. He simply saw her side of the issue, took a moment to comprehend and understand, and responded with his ideals. Like a diatribe or debate. He hasn't dismissed her ideals, he just gave his own as a riposte. It was a great chapter
4/17 c10 freedomringer
Adam as Naruto's son? Lol, also now I'm imagining Blake being like Kali and seducing her half brother with the washing machine gimmick.
Like in her favorite story, Icha Icha: Ninjas in Love
Adam as Naruto's son? Lol, also now I'm imagining Blake being like Kali and seducing her half brother with the washing machine gimmick.
Like in her favorite story, Icha Icha: Ninjas in Love
4/17 c8 freedomringer
Ozpin: Well I'm more of a stranger but a stranger is just a friend you haven't met yet!
Naruto: I usually start my friendships by beating the ever living shit out of people and then talking how much friendship is a better option.
Ozpin: Well I'm more of a stranger but a stranger is just a friend you haven't met yet!
Naruto: I usually start my friendships by beating the ever living shit out of people and then talking how much friendship is a better option.
4/15 c10 Guest
FREAKING AWESOME!
FREAKING AWESOME!