for Searching for Something Lost9/10 c10 dragons9
I do hope that this gets updated soon...man, I don't like that Harry is sad because he can reach his brother...I do wonder who Harry will be paired with..
I do hope that this gets updated soon...man, I don't like that Harry is sad because he can reach his brother...I do wonder who Harry will be paired with..
5/14 c10 Jostanos
Congratulations, Sci! *huge warm grin*
*sighs* I dislike having to say this... but it would be a good idea to reread chapter 9 and edit it, Sci, because there are a few errors in it.
*ahem* This is still an excellent story that is a joy to read and review! *eye smiles*
Please continue when you may, my friend. :)
Congratulations, Sci! *huge warm grin*
*sighs* I dislike having to say this... but it would be a good idea to reread chapter 9 and edit it, Sci, because there are a few errors in it.
*ahem* This is still an excellent story that is a joy to read and review! *eye smiles*
Please continue when you may, my friend. :)
5/13 c10 DarkRavie
I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.
I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.
4/30 c9 Guest
Please update
Please update
3/9 c9 
4CelestialGodSlayer16
Hey, so I wanted to say that you’re doing pretty good with the story so far, but there’s something that I noticed you had gotten wrong. I’m not sure if this is just an oversight or if you meant to put it in, but seeing as how you mostly seem to be following the Kingdom Hearts timeline pretty closely for those portions of the story, I feel like I should point out that Sora wouldn’t know the Stop spell at that point in time. Merlin would’ve just taught him the Thunder spell instead. Stop doesn’t come until after the second fight against the Heartless Parasite Cage, which is the boss of Monstro the Whale.
4CelestialGodSlayer16Hey, so I wanted to say that you’re doing pretty good with the story so far, but there’s something that I noticed you had gotten wrong. I’m not sure if this is just an oversight or if you meant to put it in, but seeing as how you mostly seem to be following the Kingdom Hearts timeline pretty closely for those portions of the story, I feel like I should point out that Sora wouldn’t know the Stop spell at that point in time. Merlin would’ve just taught him the Thunder spell instead. Stop doesn’t come until after the second fight against the Heartless Parasite Cage, which is the boss of Monstro the Whale.
2/19 c9 62Stormshadow13
So glad that Sora noticed that something was up with with Riku. Hope they can get him back and that things will turn out a little differently than they did in KH one.
Poor Harry still having a pretty rough year.
62Stormshadow13So glad that Sora noticed that something was up with with Riku. Hope they can get him back and that things will turn out a little differently than they did in KH one.
Poor Harry still having a pretty rough year.
2/6 c9 James Birdsong
Good three chapters
Good three chapters
2/6 c9 2Seth A. Mincberg
Love this chapter. Always a fan of DumbBashing and general Karmic Consequence stories.
Quick note: I can't see the poll... It should be on your Bio page right? If so, it's not there.
2Seth A. MincbergLove this chapter. Always a fan of DumbBashing and general Karmic Consequence stories.
Quick note: I can't see the poll... It should be on your Bio page right? If so, it's not there.