for Ned's Southern Folly16h c99 Max20.7
Good closing chapter.
Nice to see how the war has affected the people back home and I am very interested in what the next big event will be.
Good closing chapter.
Nice to see how the war has affected the people back home and I am very interested in what the next big event will be.
19h c57 gerc020209
by the way, is it just me or this Robb gives me Odysseus vibes?, like, how ruthless and cruel he admited he would need to be go back to Penelope and telemachus in monster. and later on putting weight bhins his words at Different beast
by the way, is it just me or this Robb gives me Odysseus vibes?, like, how ruthless and cruel he admited he would need to be go back to Penelope and telemachus in monster. and later on putting weight bhins his words at Different beast
19h c56 gerc020209
hold up, did Robb just, pulled a Cannae with numerical superiority? goddamn, talk about doing things throughoutly (please spare my bad english, its not my native lenguage and im with an annoying fever)
hold up, did Robb just, pulled a Cannae with numerical superiority? goddamn, talk about doing things throughoutly (please spare my bad english, its not my native lenguage and im with an annoying fever)
20h c54 gerc020209
i just realized that snow is basically having a Baribe Ark coupled with an Identity Crisis XD (¡you can be what you want to be!)
i just realized that snow is basically having a Baribe Ark coupled with an Identity Crisis XD (¡you can be what you want to be!)
5/10 c99 
3Foxy-Floof
What an amazing chapter. I'm so sad Jon never got to grow old in peace. But his family and line endures. His wife has seen the wisdom in being with kin and not shadows.
Plus side, the Reach and Maesters and Faith have been humbled. For now.
3Foxy-FloofWhat an amazing chapter. I'm so sad Jon never got to grow old in peace. But his family and line endures. His wife has seen the wisdom in being with kin and not shadows.
Plus side, the Reach and Maesters and Faith have been humbled. For now.
5/9 c99 libexi01
Will you also show the situation in Vale of Arryn soon as well. It seems the political landscape is quite interesting there.
Will you also show the situation in Vale of Arryn soon as well. It seems the political landscape is quite interesting there.
5/8 c99 4Poly19hum
Nice chapter!
Was a wedding between the Reach and house Stark a possibility to help avoid a future war?
4Poly19humNice chapter!
Was a wedding between the Reach and house Stark a possibility to help avoid a future war?
5/8 c99 4Supremus85
You are underestimating the abily of White Harborers to navigate politics. I stand to my belief that to install a Northman as Hight Septon would have been better. About the Vale, King Harold can simply write to the Hight Septon and ask them to reinstate most devout of the Vale. What would house Royce do rebel for a legitimate decision of their king? If they spill blood first they will loose the war even with the Nothern Fleet support. Because the people of the Vale would fight for their king and not for the "Northern puppet oathbreakers" That said very nice chapter the war is finally over. The Iron Islands have earned the right to crown its own king, at this point. Time to rebuild and go on.
4Supremus85You are underestimating the abily of White Harborers to navigate politics. I stand to my belief that to install a Northman as Hight Septon would have been better. About the Vale, King Harold can simply write to the Hight Septon and ask them to reinstate most devout of the Vale. What would house Royce do rebel for a legitimate decision of their king? If they spill blood first they will loose the war even with the Nothern Fleet support. Because the people of the Vale would fight for their king and not for the "Northern puppet oathbreakers" That said very nice chapter the war is finally over. The Iron Islands have earned the right to crown its own king, at this point. Time to rebuild and go on.
5/8 c99 93scifiromance
Another brilliant chapter! I really felt for poor Galbart, who suddenly has so much on his shoulders. I'm glad that Rickard gave him good, clear terms on what would be happening going forward.
Jon Stark's POV was interesting, because it showed if Robb was less respected and the war a little less fruitful money wise, then houses would be truly lashing out over the peace terms after the deaths of their kin. I think the Starks will be able to weather it, but they've got a lot to balance. Especially with the Riverlands needing to be rebuilt. Again.
I'm glad that Jon had built up good enough relationships with his retainers that they could be honest with Wylla. Her grief and ultimate resilience were very well written.
Well done and thanks for writing!
scifiromance
93scifiromanceAnother brilliant chapter! I really felt for poor Galbart, who suddenly has so much on his shoulders. I'm glad that Rickard gave him good, clear terms on what would be happening going forward.
Jon Stark's POV was interesting, because it showed if Robb was less respected and the war a little less fruitful money wise, then houses would be truly lashing out over the peace terms after the deaths of their kin. I think the Starks will be able to weather it, but they've got a lot to balance. Especially with the Riverlands needing to be rebuilt. Again.
I'm glad that Jon had built up good enough relationships with his retainers that they could be honest with Wylla. Her grief and ultimate resilience were very well written.
Well done and thanks for writing!
scifiromance
5/7 c99 EmaCnDf
Love the story, but i hate that robb build up his legend in 90 chapters, but in a fight against just the reach he loses so much, dont get me wrong, i liked the war scenes etc, but even in the past wars robb was a war machine, but in this one, one that should have been "easy" he lost even more than what he lost in the lannister wars.
Love the story, but i hate that robb build up his legend in 90 chapters, but in a fight against just the reach he loses so much, dont get me wrong, i liked the war scenes etc, but even in the past wars robb was a war machine, but in this one, one that should have been "easy" he lost even more than what he lost in the lannister wars.
4/30 c19 Guest
Sansa/ Domeric makes so much sense.
Would love this pairing
Sansa/ Domeric makes so much sense.
Would love this pairing
4/30 c18 Guest
The relationship and marriage to Alys seems a bit forced and rushed.
Robb himself says " he thinks he loves her"...
Just not feeling the union or chemistry but I guess she's of the North so there's nothing to be said.
The relationship and marriage to Alys seems a bit forced and rushed.
Robb himself says " he thinks he loves her"...
Just not feeling the union or chemistry but I guess she's of the North so there's nothing to be said.
4/23 c98 5iacopo.passerini
Allora mi scuso per il ritardo ma ho avuto problemi di famiglia!
comunque qui vediamo la fine della guerra con "Alto Giardino" (uso termini italiani tradotti in inglese perchè non sono più comodo).
Comunque tornando a noi finalmente "L'altopiano" si arrende alla forza di "Grande Inverno" con le ultime truppe che cedono il campo e le armi alle forze del Nord.
Comunque a ben vedere a parte l'esilo della regina (a cui io avrei dato prima un lungo soggiorno in una cella buia e poi in un viaggio di sola andata da Mastro Tita, chi è di Roma sa di che parlo), il prendere il Nero di uno degli ultimi ufficiali dell'esercito, dei soldi si che sono tanti ma anche in un periodo piuttosto lungo quindi abili mercanti potrebbero mettere insieme la cifra richiesta in poco tempo e delle cessioni territoriali non troppo esagerate (il Nord poteva benissimo prendersi tutti i territori e le fortezze che voleva e nessuno poteva farci nulla condividendo il bottino con chi vuole) gli è andata anche bene.
Per il cosidetto "credo Militante" o come diavolo si chiama beh era logico che sarebbe stato sciolto però credo che visto i guia che hanno combinato e la loro struttura oeganizattiva era chiaro che sarebbe finito male.
Comunque il fatto che il re del nord si preoccupi per il fatto che la magia sia attiva e tema che gli Altri possano tornare e cosi i non morti che comandano mi da da pensare.
Comunque ottimo lavoro!
Well, I apologize for the delay but I had family problems!
anyway here we see the end of the war with "High Garden" (I use Italian terms translated into English because I'm no longer comfortable).
Anyway, getting back to us, finally "The plateau" surrenders to the force of "Winterfell" with the last troops that give up the field and weapons to the forces of the North.
Anyway, looking closely, apart from the exile of the queen (to whom I would have given first a long stay in a dark cell and then a one-way trip to Mastro Tita, those who are from Rome know what I'm talking about), taking the Black of one of the last officers of the army, money is a lot but also in a rather long period so skilled merchants could put together the required amount in a short time and territorial concessions that were not too exaggerated (the North could very well take all the territories and fortresses it wanted and no one could do anything about it by sharing the spoils with whoever they wanted) it went well for them.
For the so-called "Militant Creed" or whatever the hell it's called, well it was logical that it would have been disbanded, but I think that given the troubles they've caused and their organizational structure, it was clear that it would have ended badly.
However, the fact that the king of the north is worried about the fact that magic is active and fears that the Others could return and thus the undead who command it makes me think.
Anyway, great work!
5iacopo.passeriniAllora mi scuso per il ritardo ma ho avuto problemi di famiglia!
comunque qui vediamo la fine della guerra con "Alto Giardino" (uso termini italiani tradotti in inglese perchè non sono più comodo).
Comunque tornando a noi finalmente "L'altopiano" si arrende alla forza di "Grande Inverno" con le ultime truppe che cedono il campo e le armi alle forze del Nord.
Comunque a ben vedere a parte l'esilo della regina (a cui io avrei dato prima un lungo soggiorno in una cella buia e poi in un viaggio di sola andata da Mastro Tita, chi è di Roma sa di che parlo), il prendere il Nero di uno degli ultimi ufficiali dell'esercito, dei soldi si che sono tanti ma anche in un periodo piuttosto lungo quindi abili mercanti potrebbero mettere insieme la cifra richiesta in poco tempo e delle cessioni territoriali non troppo esagerate (il Nord poteva benissimo prendersi tutti i territori e le fortezze che voleva e nessuno poteva farci nulla condividendo il bottino con chi vuole) gli è andata anche bene.
Per il cosidetto "credo Militante" o come diavolo si chiama beh era logico che sarebbe stato sciolto però credo che visto i guia che hanno combinato e la loro struttura oeganizattiva era chiaro che sarebbe finito male.
Comunque il fatto che il re del nord si preoccupi per il fatto che la magia sia attiva e tema che gli Altri possano tornare e cosi i non morti che comandano mi da da pensare.
Comunque ottimo lavoro!
Well, I apologize for the delay but I had family problems!
anyway here we see the end of the war with "High Garden" (I use Italian terms translated into English because I'm no longer comfortable).
Anyway, getting back to us, finally "The plateau" surrenders to the force of "Winterfell" with the last troops that give up the field and weapons to the forces of the North.
Anyway, looking closely, apart from the exile of the queen (to whom I would have given first a long stay in a dark cell and then a one-way trip to Mastro Tita, those who are from Rome know what I'm talking about), taking the Black of one of the last officers of the army, money is a lot but also in a rather long period so skilled merchants could put together the required amount in a short time and territorial concessions that were not too exaggerated (the North could very well take all the territories and fortresses it wanted and no one could do anything about it by sharing the spoils with whoever they wanted) it went well for them.
For the so-called "Militant Creed" or whatever the hell it's called, well it was logical that it would have been disbanded, but I think that given the troubles they've caused and their organizational structure, it was clear that it would have ended badly.
However, the fact that the king of the north is worried about the fact that magic is active and fears that the Others could return and thus the undead who command it makes me think.
Anyway, great work!