7/22/2021 c2 Angelicsailor
this is absolutely precious
SIRIUS YES! SHE NEEDS AN ADVOCATE ASAP Dumbledore used illegal Legilimency on her, a minor! mind you, and she was suffering from forceful Legilimency already so I doubt that felt good.
this is absolutely precious
SIRIUS YES! SHE NEEDS AN ADVOCATE ASAP Dumbledore used illegal Legilimency on her, a minor! mind you, and she was suffering from forceful Legilimency already so I doubt that felt good.
7/12/2021 c3 Guest
I love love love this! You are an amazing writer!
I love love love this! You are an amazing writer!
7/13/2021 c3 4Jazziet
First I want to apologize because this isn't the detailed review I wanted to leave because I'm pressed for time. I just want to say I LOOOOOVE this story and can not wait until you update. I love how you portray Sirius and Hermione's relationship. It's so tender and loving. Thank you for these marvelous three chapters. I can't wait for more!
First I want to apologize because this isn't the detailed review I wanted to leave because I'm pressed for time. I just want to say I LOOOOOVE this story and can not wait until you update. I love how you portray Sirius and Hermione's relationship. It's so tender and loving. Thank you for these marvelous three chapters. I can't wait for more!
7/10/2021 c2 4PhantomWolfScout
Great story, I’m already enjoying what you’ve got here so far. Now, there is one thing that is bothering me a bit. Unless you’re changing the date and year Hermione was born in, she should actually be 17/18 years old by the time she’s tortured in the Malfoy Manor. Out of those in her year, she’s the oldest simply because her birthday is September 19, 1979. Other than that, I really am enjoying this story and will look forward to the coming chapters.
Great story, I’m already enjoying what you’ve got here so far. Now, there is one thing that is bothering me a bit. Unless you’re changing the date and year Hermione was born in, she should actually be 17/18 years old by the time she’s tortured in the Malfoy Manor. Out of those in her year, she’s the oldest simply because her birthday is September 19, 1979. Other than that, I really am enjoying this story and will look forward to the coming chapters.
7/6/2021 c2 Guest
I love this so much! I can’t wait to see where you take things from here!
I love this so much! I can’t wait to see where you take things from here!
7/6/2021 c1 Guest
I like the start of your story. I do not know how you will make Dumbledore but after what he did to Hermione while in pain I feel that he should not be trusted. Keep up the good work and post soon.
I like the start of your story. I do not know how you will make Dumbledore but after what he did to Hermione while in pain I feel that he should not be trusted. Keep up the good work and post soon.
7/7/2021 c2 elllevenseggo
This is a potentially great story. I like it so I'm adding this to my favourites. I hope you'll update soon.
This is a potentially great story. I like it so I'm adding this to my favourites. I hope you'll update soon.